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Petitprincess


I moved here from Fanfiction just to see how well my stories will do here. Of course, I'm not looking for popularity, I would just love some feedback, just to see if I'm going in the right direction.

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What if A Royal Canterlot Wedding was switched? Instead of Cadence getting captured, It's Shining Armor. Also, instead of Queen Chrysalis it's her weird joker of a husband, King Metamorphosis. Every thing is different! And King Metamorphosis is NOTHING like Chrysalis! Rated T for sexual jokes that'll be weirder later on.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 42 )

I'm watching you... O_o

I must see more!

Metamorpheoes has me intrigued, and sexual jokes in fanfiction? Heck yes.

Though I am very curious if Chrysalis shows up later on to tune her husband in.

Seems like a nice story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Just keep these updates coming. A lot of times people do this story and stop. Just keep on working to finish it.

Why can I see Metamorphis getting caught quicker than Chrysalis? I have a strange feeling he might kiss Twilight...

That was a nice twist at the end. Now let see how the birds, dress, and reception goes. Great job.

Awesome Job! Sh*ts getting real now!! Keep on going! :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2:

The king of the changelings is aloof and perverted. He's not going to get very far.

Man, and I thought the Original was real funny but this... this is really funny, Good Job! :twilightsmile: :pinkiesmile: :rainbowdetermined2:

This is funny. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I"m glad about the update. Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Best of luck.

Ha, basterd can't handle his wife (Queen Chrysalis is My Favorite Pony/Character By the way, Reason: My Most Favorite Color is Green) can't wait for more. :twilightsmile:

Man be nice if the next chapter is Twilight's (My Most Favorite Pony/Character) Point Of View (POV), and she's talking about her Brother's (Shining Armor is My Favorite Pony/Character) weird behavior to her friends (Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash & Princess Luna are My Favorite Ponies/Characters).

Still can't wait, Good Job, Girl (or Boy?)! :twilightsmile: :pinkiesmile: :rainbowdetermined2:

4194155 Wait wait wait. So they all are part of your favourite ponies / characters, but Twilight is number one?
If you want to not enrage anybody by doing that, then thumbs up, and nice slippery. That's what it's called, right?
If not, then replace it with cutlery for confusion.

Sweet. I loved this chapter. Thanks for the update. This story was long overdue for one.

Sorry, for the long wait. I couldn't remember my password for my account. I was so pissed; I thought I would have to start all over again. Not that it's a long process I just didn't want to get a whole new account.

It's okay, Petitprincess, I would be in the same situation too. Trying to remember my password to this site, and all. That's way I made a Note Pad to put my thing in it, so I won't forget. You should try it! :twilightsmile:

(Back to the commenting!)

That's a change right there, when Twilight saw Shining Armor (King Metamorphosis) use the Mind Control spell on Cadence, she was shocked as hell from what she witnessed her brother using the spell on Cadence. And when she told Shining that he was acting different and that she thought he was evil, he yells at her and when she was about, I think 5 Seconds or lower, she notice a green fade color and saw Shining using his (Not real aura colored) Magic and form a dome around her and send her to the Caves under Canterlot and trap her there! Can't wait to see what happens when she runs into the REAL Shining Armor... Well no need to go there, that will have to wait! :pinkiehappy: (I basically already know what will happen so I don't have to say it. :rainbowdetermined2:)

You've done a Outstanding Job, Petitprincess! Good Luck on the next chapter! *Thumps Up* :twilightsmile: :pinkiesmile: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2:

I love that song. Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck.

Not bad, Petitprincess, seems like this story is getting to the most shocking point! And just so you know when I was reading (not completely) the singing part of this chapter, I was listening to :All of The Lights (f/ Rihanna, Kid Cudi & Fergie)" By: Kanye West mainly cause I like the song and it had a whole lot of likes for that song! You should listen to it, I mean seriously, how can anyone hate on that song?! :pinkiehappy:

(Note: I know what I said about Kanye has nothing to do with this chapter what-so-ever, but it's just that, no offence, I don't like the songs they have on My Little Pony, no disrespect, but if I end up having to listen to it, it just makes m Excitement Fuel fill up and makes me go a bit crazy and outgoing. Hope you understand. :twilightsheepish: :twilightsmile:)

I'm looking forward in seeing the next chapter to this, girl/boy, Good Luck!! :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2:

5601571 Im having a similar problem, but the site says my old account (Infinity Blade Brony) doesn't exsist anymore although it is clearly there, and I don't know why. So I made an alt.

I loved the pervert part at the end. Great job. I can't wait to read the final two chapters to clear this wedding up. Great job.

This is better than the original episode!

Ha! Way more better the episode itself, when it came to the Mini-Battles that is. And I like it! :pinkiehappy:

Awesome work, Petitprincess! :twilightsmile: :rainbowdetermined2:

More, I want more.... it's my precious...

Oh boy. You know how hard it is to go without thinking. I have only done that in intense situations where I acted and wasn't thinking. (Example: long but not hard math problem, so All my thoughts are just into the formula, not into how to solve the problem.) That is what the girls need to do.

If Chrysalis is yandere, then Meta's a perv?

5925350 Well, he's go to get something from someone and it definitely isn't coming from his wife

5925363 Is he cheating on Chrysalis for Twilight or Cadence?

5925990 He's kinda cheating on her with both, but it's not really cheating because she doesn't really care too much for him anyway. I mean their changelings, they don't really know that much about love

5926435 Hey Petitprincess! Sorry if I'm too late to comment and to be the first person to say something about this chapter, it's just that the power went off at my place for 5:00 to 8:23, and that my fraternal twin sister had to send a report for her JROCT Class.

Now for what I think of this chapter: Twilight is real smart about what King Metamorphosis can do, he can read minds, because in the previous chapters, (when he was disguise as my most favorite stallion pony/character, Shining Armor [Yes people, and Petitprincess, I've decided to put Shining Armor as My Most Favorite Stallion Pony along side with Twilight Sparkle, cause they're siblings]) he can hear Twilight's thoughts about what, in her thoughts, is her brother acting different and being a little (possibly a lot) demanding towards her and her friends. Only for her to realize that Shining is evil, then she find out that "Shining" is actually Metamorphosis and finally that Shining, the REAL Shining Armor, is still alive and that Metamorphosis is the one behind everything, and I mean EVERYTHING, and that he's gottin' Cadance's Love for her "husband".

Looks like Twilight is trying to find a way to free herself from Chrysalis and Metamorphosis' sticky substance restrainers, and is trying to avoid thinking on how to escape. Luck-fully, Applejack and Rainbow knows why Twilight is trying not to think of a way out of her restrainers, but sadly Rarity and Fluttershy (plus Pinkie, who will later see Chrysalis and Metamorphosis' movements) aren't really smart on that one.

Let's hope the others manage to win this battle, or else the two Changelings rule all of equestria! Pttf-please! :rainbowlaugh: We ALL know the good guys will win, 24/7! So way say that! :pinkiesmile:

Good Luck on the next Chapter! And Awesome Job for/on this chapter, Petitprincess! :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2:

This must be the fake ending, then.

Alternative (Bad) Ending, MOTHAF**KA/MOTHAB**KA!!! :rainbowlaugh: :pinkiehappy:

I mean yeah it's sad that Twilight is dead :pinkiesad2:, but I know she's not dead. Cause this is an Alternative Ending, meaning this NEVER happened, and if it did happen then that's bullsh*t! No lie, also I'm always a good guy and if I was in there, I would sacrifice myself to save my family, friends, and love ones. :twilightsmile: :rainbowdetermined2:

Good luck on the other two chapters, Petitprincess, Awesome Job on it! :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2:

My fingers are crossed for them to find a way to win without Metamorphosis.

Back when Discord helped it was after he actually suffered himself. That guy right now is just feeling a bit sorry. It'd be cheap if he ends up saving the day.

Awesome Job, Petitprincess! Looks the fight between Twilight & Metamorphosis has just begun. Can't wait to see who'll win! (Well it's kind of obvious who is the winner, but I won't say who. It's a Secret.) :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

Though I have suggestion. Can Twilight Burst into flames and become Burning Twilight (Note: The idea of Twilight being in that form cought my attention) while she's fighting Metamorphosis?

And in a random chapter later, can some of our OC make a appears either fighting off Changlings or something? Just in case you like the idea, My OC name is Greenlight "Green/GreenMint" Mintiest. :twilightsmile:

Also, think you can put the song "Cinderella Man" By Eminem for the fight scene?

(That's all I have to ask. Hope you reply back. :twilightsmile:)

6096821 I'm not allowed to use non-MLP related songs on this website, the OC would be too random to just drop into one chapter without he/she being in other chapters (plus, there's only one chapter left), and the burning Twilight I'm not really sure with. I felt like that was more of her just becoming completely enraged that she literally exploded, so, in my eyes, it wouldn't really makes sense for her to use it as an attack move. I can try to fit it in, but I'm not sure if it'll actually be in the final product. Hopefully, I answered all of your questions and I'm sorry if I have disappointed you in some way. :twilightblush:

6096869 No bullsh*t from me, but can you at least ask the others about? :rainbowhuh:

6096904 Others? What do you mean others?

6096909 Other users who has OC. :twilightsmile:

Again, No bullsh*t from me.

6096919 So, to clarify, you want me to ask other users who have OCs to use them in the chapter? I mean, don't get me wrong, I wouldn't mind using your OC it's just that since it's the final chapter it's kind of hard to put in an OC at the last minute without just feeling like it's forced, you know?

6096937 :ajbemused: *sign* I give up. Well thank you for saying something about my OC appearing in there. :twilightsmile:

(Scratch that asking other OC thing. If you want to. [And yes, that's what I mean])

No Bullsh*t from me! :pinkiehappy: Anyway, I know what you mean by Burning Twilight is her being enraged. But listen, she's focused on both Chrysalis & Metamorphosis, and not the others, which are on her side. So that's what I mean. :pinkiehappy:

You want the details of my OC and what he looks like? :twilightsmile:

6096968 I guess I'll try to fit your OC in, but it'll be more of a small cameo. Mostly because It'd be weird just to shoehorn an OC at the very last minute, but if I can't put him in don't be mad

6097004 Thank you. And hey just in case you don't know what he/I looks like. Ask me want your ready. IF you think you can fit him/me in there. :pinkiehappy:

Also he's Cutie Mark is the same on as My Avatar Icon. If you haven't notice. :twilightsmile:

Good Luck. And I promise I won't get mad if I don't appear. mmkay? :twilightsmile:

Go Twilight. It looks like the big battle is up next. Good luck.

When is the next chapter?

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