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Hi Hat the mellow beatboxer, Tremolo the energetic soprano, Falsetto the bombastic gay tenor, G. Sharp the gay baritone, and Synthesizer the gnarly bass, form Ponytonix; Equestria's most famous acapella group. Fame seems to draw these ponies closer together as they embrace their friendship while singing almost everywhere they go. One Shot.
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Why do we need to know their sexualities when there's no romance?
5422381 There might be romance later on, you never know
5422545
Then put the fucking romance tag on there! You can't just change a tag once you're in the story!
5422569 And why would I do that?
There's no romance in the story.
5422638 Can we have less obscure note talk please? Not all of us understand it.
5423141 I'll add a disclaimer.
5423498 Awesome.
5423498 I also suggest just putting the picture in the description and putting some random other coverart. Pony creator cover art doesn't always help gather people. Though this is a little difficult because of the musical terminology it does how that you have a rather nice writing set of skills.
On another note I was studying piano for a long time but i ended up dropping it because it took far too much time and was no longer enjoyable.
On another note since you no longer involve the sexualities because no romance and stuff just mention them subtly inside the fic somewhere where it could fit rather than have them in the description where everyone will read and assume they play a big role on the fic.
5435381 It just sucks to remove the pic cuz I worked hard to get all five of them layered together in photoshop. I guess I could replace the pic.
5435392 If you do want to do something more about them you could request a brand new artwork from "Art for Fanction" group.
5435418 Is it free?
5435426 Well if you request it yes. If you comission it? No.
eeeeeeeeeeeee i love them so much
5422381 Maybe so people get the reference of who these ponies are actually meant to be?
5435824 I really though the name ponytonix would be enough.
5435905 Mhm...
5436444 Most people will get it.
5422569 Um... yes you can. If a tag doesn't fit the story until later on, it can be added later. The site will let you.
5437473 Exactly what I was thinking.
Where's your Alternate Universe tag?
Since the dialogue is part of a larger sentence, it needs to end with a comma and not a period; also, the dialogue tag "said" should not be capitalized, as it isn't part of a new sentence. You forgot the period at the end of the sentence, and you're missing a comma inside the dialogue itself. Here's the revised version:
I see that this continues, so it's clearly a dialogue issue and not just a one-off error. Also, there are other punctuation mistakes besides.
Finally, when a proper name is made up of two words, it should either be hyphenated or have both halves punctuated, or both. In other words:
"Hi hat" =
"Hi Hat", "Hi-hat", or "Hi-Hat" =
5446396 Thanks so much for the constructive criticism! I don't really have an editor, if you're interested in editing my story I'd gladly accept.