Keeping the peace in Equestria has been getting progressively harder over the years. As ponies broke free from their ignorance and rebelled, war ravaged Equestria. Amidst all the chaos Discord took control of Canterlot and now rules as dictator of a post-apocalyptic Equestria. Who else would think it would be so chaotically amusing, to watch ponies die horribly? Story is of First Person mixed POV, with only two of the OCs being mine.
Yes. I'm so ready to read the rest of this. Compelling first chapter. Keep it going!
GID DAMN IT I WAS PLANING ON WRITING THAT
Nice I like it so far right now we have a cold emotionless dude and a possibly violent emo (I mean these as observations not insults or bad mouthing the ocs) btw was the support cast choosen yet I didn't see it on the blog?
Good good. I can't wait to see how this goes :3
This seems very interesting so far. Even though I think there were a few errors where you switched words from past to present, but all in all, a great start! I also want to mention that I haven't watched the Hunger Games, since I had no interest, but this story tends to pull me in to see what's going to happen next.
Keep up the good work and take your time!
Nopony's rushing you! At least, I hope not...
"You have my sword."
"And my bow."
And my undying support and Chaos.
Can't wait to meet my OC.
Anyways, looks good.
May Chaos Lead Your Path On.
Missing word "me"? after cross.
cant wait for my oc
Don't worry about those down votes. Just the tax for a crossover. This could be added in a few more
groups as well.
I appreciate all of the support for my story. I will fix the errors of the first chapter and continue writing the next. And for those of you who didn't figure it out, The announcer was indeed Princess Celestia
i loved it! i liked the setting and everything, even though i've never actually read the Hunger Games myself a few errors here and there but those are easy fixes, can't wait to read more
5325072 I know I'm excited as well. I didn't use the OC I represent myself as but I used one I fashioned for a story later on. The Hype!!!!!
5323869 Guess he beat ya' to it then, eh? But honestly? The excitement is making me burst!!! My OC is in this!! CRAZY!!!
5325564 district 6 moonlit mist you?
So, does this mean that everypony from Districts 1-11 is going to end up dead?
I actually like this fic. Even though it's been done several times, it's execution is just really damn good!
Have a like!
5325608
I doubt it, since my character is from District 9.
5325607 No district 9 Posetem Weave. Yours?
district 6 moonlit mist
sorry
In don't care about winning, I will be their to protect those who deserve to live. Also if your wondering, I'm a tribute for district 10. Unfortunately I am being R63'ed.
5326315 District 10 actually
...with the giant hippogriff
5329029 Woops, sorry.
5325500 I really do hope Luna is a rebel cause Selune likes Luna XD.
So hyped for this! Well done so far
5325608 No, I'm changing POVs because everypony has a chance to win. Selune Darkeye may just as well die with the rest of them, and there will be a decent chance for everypony's OC to win the games.
5333340 K; good to know.
Hop on the hype train! Choo choo! The next chapter is up!
I wait with baited breath for the chapter featuring a hulking great hippogriff trying to fit through pony sized doorways.
EDIT: For the record, Cyclone's shoulder width is equal to two Alicorn Celestia shoulder widths.
5333610 I'll do what I can, your character bio was incredibly descriptive so it should have a decent role. I can't say what I'll do with it right now though, there are 24 OCs so please be patient.
5333552 I like it! Question:Are we going to get how the world ended up this way? Or should we have some hunger games knowledge before that?
5333625 There will be answers coming as to how the world got that way, be patient.
5333635 Will do just asking!!!
Wow. You MUST be a stalker, because you just portrayed me perfectly!!!
5334465 That's amazing xD I was afraid you would be super upset over how I portrayed your character.
I can see this will be great! Love how your acting out the charecters. Can't wait till the part where the games begin, now that's ganna be good!
5334817 Awesome! Thank you! :3
oooo a changling in the games and great work telling a bit of the cantorlott wedding from a changeling perspective not so fond of red raven the power would have been better a weapons in the games instead of using them to cheat
*their. Scour it for grammar if possible.
5341155 Yeah I thought about this but from their perspective and seeing how that almost all of the ponies in Equestria at this point hate changelings. (I'll let you know why later in the story) It was necessary to get sponsors. Once the parade is done from the point of view of Chitter you'll understand where I'm going with this.
5341157 Will get right on that.
5341168 can't wait
I'm curious. Is there going to be a chapter for each districts tributes? And then the actual games? I think I'm correct. Probably not XD
Actually including these there should be 6-8 chapters before the games start.
Poor Coconut Swirl; I hope she's alright
5346210 None of the tributes were harmed in the making of this story.
Eager clapping.
Yay. My OCs.
5346212 good to know; just glad that we were both mentioned in the chapter
5346216 I tried to get a lot of guys mentioned. There will be even more and a lot of characterization during training and the rankings later on.
Cyclone, the bane of pony built things everywhere....
Laugh it up now Changeling, you won't be laughing when that mass is charging at you across the battlefield.
5342606 those six to eight involving them interacting with their trainers and the rest of the support cast