4: CUDDLES!
We walked through the doors to the hospital, I recieved a lot of wierd looks on the way out, but they stopped staring when we got outside. But there were still some outside who began their staring session at me. The day was nice, warm, and sunny, so I quickly forgot about them as I admired the beauty around here. That was right befoer some pegasi put storm clouds up in the sky, which immediatly started raining on us. "Oh my gosh! I forgot they scheduled rain today!" Twilight said, causing me scratch my head in confusion.
"What do you mean 'scheduled' the rain?" I asked, she turned and looked at me in confusion, probably thinking I knew what was going on.
"Don't your species control the weather in your world?" She asked, I almost laughed, but held it back to be a little serious for once.
"Well if we did, then people wouldn't die every year" I replied, causing Twilight to give me a sad and confused look.
"W-weather naturally kills you humans?" She asked, I looked her in the eyes, feeling some sorrow.
"Yes, no, maybe so. Only matters on how we treat the situation, or if we're willing to even address it" I said, she just stared at me, still confused. I pulled my coat's hood up as the rain above us started to get a bit more intense.
"Quick, grab my hand!" She said, also feeling the effects of the rain. I blushed a little, since I've never held someone's hand in the rain, but listened to her. Once I had hold of her hand, her horn started to glow, a lavender aura surrounding us both. Then with a popping sound, we were on a wooden platform next to a train. My body not knowing what happened to it instantly took action, treating it like extreme motion sickness. I stood there, vomit pouring out from my mouth all over the conductor who was, unfortunately, standing in front of me.
"Sorry" I said, he nodded, before simply pulling out a rag, and wiping off as much as possible from his facial area.
"Are you getting on this train?" He asked, his face was still covered in vomit, except his eyes and nose, but by the looks of things, he was probably used to this kind of stuff. Or just really good at not caring.
"Sorry! It's his first time teleporting and I didn't think that would happen!" Twilight quickly apologized, the conductor chuckled a little at this, also realizing who's presence he was in.
"It's quite alright princess" he said with a quick bow, "I take it you two are heading for Canterlot?" He asked. I can only imagine that she went there a lot for him to know where she was going to take me.
"Yes" she answered, he waved his hands in a fancy way, ending the hand twirl with a pointed finger.
"Right this way" he said, pointing to a small line that entered the train. We said 'thank you' then headed over to the line. When we got there, the first thing that happened was them offering to let us cut. We nicely declined, then I spotted eyes staring right at me.
I shifted a little, I felt a bit panicked with this much attention. Twilight noticed this and looked at me. "Whats wrong?" She asked, I stared at the crowd for another second.
"I-i never get this much attention where I come from, everyone just ignores me and that's how I like it" I said, Twilight looked around at the crowd. I felt the panic squeeze my head. "I feel light headed" I said, raising my hand to my head, smacking it at the same time, before I fell flat on my face, just laying there and not wanting to get back up.
I heard gasps from all around, Twilight's being the loudest. 'Just fake sleep!' I told myself, hoping they would all just shrug it off and leave me alone. I felt someone (some pony?) grab my arm, then my other arm.
"Thanks for helping me Applejack" I heard Twilight say as I felt myself being dragged. Out of curiosity, I opened my eye a little to see an orange mare, who had a stetson on her head. She was wearing what a farmer girl would wear, shorts with a small but flexible looking skirt, a shirt, and a plaid shirt over the shirt but unbuttoned. My eyes wandered a little, and I ended up seeing a little down her shorts, seeing three apples on her butt. Well, not exactly looking down them, since there was just a hole where the apples were. I began noticing a similar pattern with all the other ponies as well.
It was by now that I noticed we were on the train, since I was too busy ogling this 'Applejack'. "So were ya taken this.....thing?" Applejack asked, I sat up and pretended I heard nothing from five minutes ago.
"Where am I? Whats going on? Wheres the taco? Hello who are you?" I asked looking at Applejack, not really needing to ask the last one. She looked at me a little surprised, obviously not expecting a barrage of questions.
"Uh, what?" Applejack asked, before shaking her head. "Um, hey there sugar cube, names Applejack" she said, sounding a little hesitant, but she put her hand out anyways. Me knowing what she wanted, I grabbed hold of her hand, and held it. Nothing else happened for a few seconds. She blushed a little, she opened her mouth to say something, then I started shaking her hand.
"Hello, Applejack, I am Zach. So where's the taco?" I asked looking around, then seemingly out of no where, a pink pony in a taco costume appeared.
"Did some pony say taco?" She asked, raising a pair of maracas. She was pink, pink, and more pink. She had the taco costume on, but my eyes spotted the pink shirt underneath. She was also wearing a blue skirt that barely covered her knees. So far, she was the only pony that didn't actively show the tattoo on her butt, but I was curious to know what it was. If she had one.
I leaned towards Twilight. "Does she have a tattoo on her butt like you and Applejack?" I asked, she took a second to process what I said, before instantly blushed.
"When did you look at our plots?!" Twilight asked in a tone of embarrasment. "More importantly, WHY were you looking at our plots?!" She asked again.
I put a finger to my chin, signifying to them that I was thinking. "My eyes tend to wander a bit, plus you've got holes in your clothing that lead straight to them" I said putting my hand back down. Twilight was still blushing, and so was AJ, both probably feeling a little embarrased to know their own clothing flaws. I looked back at the pink one. "Uh, names Zach" I said, putting my hand out for a shake, expecting to actually shake hand with this pony. I was surprised when he suddenly lunged at me for a big hug. She was no longer wearing the taco costume. Wait, where did it go?
"Hi my name is Pinkie Pie!" She said as she started to cuddle with me, and I felt my face turn red. "Mm, you feel comfy" she said, I believe my face was now blood red, or very close to it.
"Uh, P-Pinkie, this is a little awkward" I said, but she tightened her hold on me. I sensed that she wasn't going to release me anytime soon. "Can we at least get on a seat to cuddle if you're not going to release me?" I asked, then somehow she picked me up and put me on a seat, still cuddling me.
I looked at Twilight and AJ for help. "Sorry sugar cube, she won't let go for a few hours" Applejack said, I sighed in defeat, and did what I've never done before. I cuddled. As soon as I started cuddling, I felt Pinkie tighten her grip enough for me to feel her breasts push against my chest. 'Oh god' I thought, since i knew this was going to take a while.
I looked at Twilight, who was now holding back her laughter. 'Any word of this to anyone else, I will get you!' I mouthed to her, she nodded her head, but I already knew she would let it slip, girls always let it slip. I returned my attention to Pinkie, who was now sound asleep on me.
I watched Twilight and Applejack sit on the seat on the other side of the table. Wait a table? With a few bottles in an ice bucket? 'Fancy' I thought, looking around a bit. There were fancy curtains at every window, a tiny chandelier hung from the roof of the train cart, and there were fancy clothes on a few other ponies who were also in the cart with us. Once again, they were all staring at me. Always with the staring.
I glared at a few of them, getting bored of staring at those who blinked before me. I looked at the window, watching the rain drops flowing down the window, some going slow, some going fast. I picked two that were going down at the same time, pretending they were racing. I laughed a little at the thought, since it was one of my favorite things as a child. I looked back at Pinkie, who was now snoring a little in a cute way. I smiled, then closed my eyes, hoping to get some rest.
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mmmmaybe...I don't mind self inserts.
Eh, this isn't that bad, tracking.
While I had no part in the placement of this story in 'those' groups, I will have a part of pointing this out: you need help writing your stories (editors and pre-readers, namely), and this is the fracking internet--of course mean people will come by and 'hurt your feelings.' Dude, I'd suggest getting a hold of your feelings and grasping the reality of people having different opinions 'round here, and they can and will dish out harsh-yet-helpful criticism of your story. I do hope you heed my advice and tidbit of information. Ciao.
Oh, and you can politely ask the groups to have your story removed--but should you be all bitchy and demanding about it, they'll just ignore ya. Bear this in mind when confronting said groups.
5536867 Thanks, didn't realize how 'bitchy' I was about it. Also, I truly don't know how proof-reading works, have two people that want to, but don't know how to....also you kinda sound like one of those mean people, but not to much.
5536917 Glad to hear your enjoying it, means a lot to me. Wierd things going on where you are, first time I heard someone else wanting to pee on guards
5538291 I can be mean at times. Very mean. Today's not one of them days, though. Just ask very politely for those groups to have your story removed, and then all is well. Pre-reading is having a person read over what you've written and they make suggestions for changes as they would see fit, whereupon an editor makes said changes. I'd also suggest google docs; it makes the entire process easier and it comes with free spellcheck! :D
5538316 true on the docs, but I'm on a phone that has problems running google apps. But my main problem is HOW to proof read, I know how it goes, just don't know how to do the beginning part of getting into the stuff.
5538430 Which is why you have someone else do it for you.
Just link them to the docs and have it set so anybody with the link can view/edit.
5538460 okay, thanks again! I will do it soon.
5540687 np. :D
5540687 This is very akward and strange indeed.
keep up the great work Derpy/Zach?
I really confused myself somehow.
5546580 Thanks, I'll keep up the good work, and I will also fix any work that is messed up. Also for confusion, I'm also confused, but the confusion is only beginning
5548623 I understand how painful it is, I had 5 diffrent lessons on it, and russian class made it the saddest lesson of my life. But I was running off one of my most boring days, and that happened to be part of the most boring day of my life. Also, I understand punctuation is my friend, I just miss it every now and then.
While I usually steer away from Anthro stories, this is one of two that have caught my interest. The plot is funny, the character loveable, and the whole thing seems promising. Keep up the good work!
Also.....You would rather cuddle with Derpy when your Derpy? Ha :P.
Never noticed that before XD
I would totally cuddle with Ditzy so badly.