I'm just another man looking for that elusive treasure we call Paradise. Also, random thought for the day: Poopdeck.
As the years rolled by, Princess Celestia has sacrificed much for her people and even more for the peace. All she ever wanted was a choice slice. So it's really just too bad that things have a way to roundabout the way they do, even at the cost of one's sanity.
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HAHAHA
WHAT
I noticed a bit of a shift in your writing style as the story progressed, but that's a minor detail.
In hindsight, WOW, THIS WAS FUNNY!
She married Spike.
Dayum.
This was the weirdest story I've read this week. Perhaps this entire month. Not in my life, though; I've read far stranger. And yet, I still loved it all the same.
-Tricondon
Well.... I honestly don't know what to say
Maybe it's just me, but the firs half of the story was just all over the place, I couldn't seem to make sence of anything before half way through.
But I did like the second half...
So good work, I suppose.
This was hilarious. A very fun read.
A breath of fresh air into this god damned circlejerk website. Well done.
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DANCE PARTY!!!
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I have no clue what to say.
It was certainly... interesting, to say the least.
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Dance party...? I don't know what you're talking about.
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Don't mind us, we're just pulling up to the party
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I find this funny.
wat?
*will read*
also dat image
I would consider rewriting first half (I have problems understanding parts of it), but it was great nontheless. Keep them coming.
Oh come on somebody find this guy we need a sequel great story by the way.
i really feel like i just watched Dr. Strangelove all over again.
If Discord was a draconeequin (dragon + pony)...
and Celestia's a pony...
and Spike is a dragon...
AND she's an alicorn.
Oh god, this story was full of win, ridiculously amazing, thanks for this
At first, I thought Celestia was gonna enslave the poor little guy, but then:
WHAT
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But good story. Very funny indeed.
Well, that was rather, um, interesting?
That was glorious. Just, glorious.
Brilliant!
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Would be funny to see a counterpart of this, where Luna finds out Spike is an absolute boss at any video game he get's his clawed little hands on.
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503694wh at just happened ?
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503694wh at just happened ?
Have to say walked in here expecting something silly (happy to see that I was correct) and as the story progressed a tinge of trepidation overtook me as I noticed a small similarity between this story (awesome) and something I'm currently working on (unfinished and current level of awesome still pending), not for anything ridiculous like "omg somebody stole my idea" but because I'd hate to submit something that was much too similar to an already existing (and humorous) story. Seeing that things went in a much different direction than I foolishly feared I feel silly for the mentioned trepidation.
Nit-picky grammar stuff aside, this story succeeds at what I assume you wanted it to do. It made me laugh, snicker, and roll my eyes in amusement as part of me felt large amounts of sympathy for our down-trodden princess who desired such a simple pleasure, and the other part was floored by the wacky going ons within the castle as well as the absurdity that resulted from Spike's ability to make a tasty cake.
It's a bit of a shame that this is only a one-shot because I'd eagerly read any following results this pastry based union may create, and would probably take a devious enjoyment out of seeing a somewhat flustered Spike try to explain his current predicament to the gang while concocting another confectionery creation for his 'wife'.
I look forward to reading more of your work good sir
I'm well aware that humor and comedy are based purely on personal perception. So excuse for saying that this was... Boring. I mean... Really boring.
And the use of parentheses is simply excessive. I feel like the story is trying to tell me when am I supposed to laugh.
EPIC!
MORE, PLEASE!
I'm sorry, I just... I can't...
The lols... They just won't stop! All of my very being hurts after reading all of this...
Bravo, my good man. Bravo.
That....was....so....AWESOME.
I hope I can write something as funny as this one day
I reviewed your story tonight you can find the review here
WTF