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Frostwyrm


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It's Spike's third birthday in Ponyville, there's less damage than last year and all his friends are struggling to remember the night beforehand. Rarity, having taken Spike on a date goes to talk to Twilight about taking her relationship with Spike a step further.

But what does this mean, and is it even a good idea?
(A different take on the relationship between Rarity and Spike)

Rated Teen for themes and implied things.

Note: Image doesn't really relate, but I couldn't find one that did.

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Comments ( 32 )

so much Sparity in one day, wow
itz gud

Amazing story my friend!:moustache:

The end? THE END? :pinkiegasp:

Seriously, this well written, and leaves a great big hole at the end, where you go "so...what happened?"

So...could you please continue this story, Frostwyrm? I like it and its style, a continuation of this would be awesome.

Not bad. You could probably use a little more detail here and there but overall well done. Nice to see Rarity turning into a dragon instead of Spike turning into a pony for a change.

Not at all what I was expecting.

Rarity would look so majestic as a dragon. :raritystarry:

Great story!

Well, that was interesting. It was sweet, but I think it was a little short. Not enough detail into character's emotions, like Spike's reaction to dragon-Rarity.

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Thanks for the comments! It was great fun to write. :twilightsmile:
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I didn't really have any plan for this story at all, let alone what happens next - but you've given me an idea for a semi-continuation. By pure coincidence, it rhymes with the title - that is, if you can rhyme wyverns with diamonds. :rainbowhuh:
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Thanks! I though the first paragraph would at least leave some impression, didn't know what though.
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True, it's not the level of detail I would usually put into my 'better' or 'more serious' stories - did you have any specific sections which you think needed more detail?
I haven't seen all that many Spike -> pony fics, but it's fun to be different! Actually, there aren't that many stories at all where a character turns/is turned into a dragon
746390
It wasn't what I was expecting either, but did you enjoy it?
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I know! The bit about the dragon, I mean...
Unfortunately, it's a very easy comparison - vain, obsessed with gems and shiny things, occasionally very dramatic (some of the dragons I've met have been...), like to maintain their image and like working by themselves, becoming quite dangerous if interrupted. It was really easy to substitute one for the other, then combine the two of them.
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Might take a look into that, that whole scene could have been better.

Perhaps a bit ambitious, but based on the response here, I forwarded this off to EQD this morning in the hope that the blogponies over there like it. Time will tell.

Frostwyrm

749493 Well for one you never explained Rarity's scale coloring just her spike coloring though I assumed it was white. And yea dragon turning fics are rare.

P.S. Rarity's now a dragon.

That line made the whole story worth it.:rainbowlaugh:

i cant help but wonder how sweetiebelle is gonna take the news hahahaahahahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahahaa:rainbowlaugh::pinkiegasp:

I wonder if they realize the magnitude of the shitstorm that's going to hit as soon as they go outside.

Well, the story is being revised and very much extended based on the response from the EQD pre-readers, which was quite positive - but alerted me to areas which needed development. I'm working to build the areas that need fixing, wrap up the ridiculously open ending and overall, add 'more story'. :twilightoops:
For now, hang on - there's probably 1-2k words that need to be added and when the time comes, I'll wipe this 'chapter' clear and post the new one in its place - then you can enjoy a whole new level of whatever this is. :facehoof:

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This has been fixed for the revised version.
"Pearlescent white scales covered her body, formed perfectly even and still reflecting the dissipating glow of the transformation, scattering light against the walls of the library. Smooth purple spikes..."
Better?

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Both of these scenes will be written in the revised version.

768855 Sounds fantastic. I look very much so forward to the revised version. Make sure you reply to one of my comment telling me it's been officially changed over.

768855 Can't wait. I love the shit-has-hit-the-fan reaction scenes. That and the meeting with Celestia in HiE fics.

I really would love to see how the others react and how the Sparity relationship grows.

My Celestia this . . . is so . . . so beautiful. *deep sob* :fluttercry:

Nice. Never seen a Rarity dragonified story before.

This was really good! It's the first story I've seen where Rarity is actually going after Spike! And it's well written to boot! =D

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This really shouldnt end right here, there is so much more you can do with this.

1. follow rarity point of view dealing with the adjustments of changing from a pony to a dragon in a pony society
2. Going through her friends and family point of view on it.
3. Continue with the building her and spikes future and plans...

I'm glad you turned rarity into a dragon... there are too many "Oh spike becomes a pony" stories out there so I really wish this was continued.

"This isn't what it looks like," said Twilight cautiously, "you see, um...she was...um...ah..."

Classic. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

756488 The most likely reaction would be...
Sweetie Belle: I can't believe you went and got transmogrified into a dragon...
Rarity: Um... well...
Sweetie Belle: ... WITHOUT ME!!!

768855

For any latecomers to this - please be both patient and aware that I am indeed working on re-write of this which significantly expands upon the ending and events after that.

Awesome, I'd very much like to see more of this Rarity and this Spike.

when the time comes, I'll wipe this 'chapter' clear and post the new one in its place

Please don't. By all means post a new chapter or a new story, but please keep this version around.

Eventually needs to be NNNNOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!

"Why is there so much smoke & flame?" Twi asked:twilightoops:
"She's just in a little heat" Spike winked:moustache::raritywink::rainbowlaugh::fluttercry::yay::ajsmug::pinkiegasp:

Are you ever going to come back to this story? It's been three years! Please don't abandon it! It's so good!

I'm glad I read this despite it not being 'finished' as it works as a one shot. It certainly leaves one wanting more, but works none the less.

"I will finish it. eventually...."
6 years later
No updates :ajsleepy:

"All he got in response was a look from Twilight that would have happily dissected your brain while calmly humming along to a classical symphony."
This description is hilarious!

This story has a lot of potential for continuation. Rarity being a newly formed dragon means Spike will need to teach her everything he knows about being a dragon, which could prove amusing. Also, being a dragon might prove to be a new challenge when Rarity tries to make dresses. Please continue the story.

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