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It's New Year's Eve and everyone is enjoying themselves at Pinkie Pie's latest party, or at least most everyone. No one should have to spend New Year's alone, an older Spike offer's his companionship to a rather out of place feeling Princess Luna. In the end both of them find that special someone to begin the new year with.
SpikexLuna oneshot
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That was beautiful
Yay!
More!
Adorable
326724 Blue Streak
Thanks i'm happy it you liked it.
326884 Appleloosa2011
Wait long enough and some of my other work will start popping up. As for another LunaxSpike fanfic ( I shouldn't go around telling a bunch of folks this cause it's still in the blueprinting phase. ) I got another story planned for them.
326983 bearie
Thank you
SPOILER ALERT!!!
Pinkie had just about woken up the entire population of Poneyville when she received a early morning letter from the highly respected,
-Ponyville
And of course having sprouted from his back a bit ago, a large pair of wings were now tucked in comfortably though ready at a moments notice to unfurl, and move him into the air.
-I recommend setting off "of course" with commas.
Lost in the moment Spike allowed himself to revert to one of his favorite ways to past the time. He flexed his arms, struck a few different poses, and flashed his reflection a cheesy smile.
-*Snerk*
Spike merely nodded suddenly having a hard time speaking, and it seemed to take forever before words finally escaped his mouth.
-Crushing, or just in awe of one of his rulers(the one who he DIDN'T see at least once a week as he was growing up)?
just how ponies seem to put a lot of importance on selecting a special somepony to share the beginning of the new year with."
-Ah... good lead-in.
she also caused her flowing mane to fall back to gravity's whims so that her hair would cover the blush that was starting to form on her face.
-Nice use of details.
eventually become your soul mate or something.
-You have two spaces between "mate" and "or".
and I think most stallions would find me....intimidating.
-Well, yes, but I am sure some would step up to the challenge.
Don't know why that has you down though princess, a beautiful pony like you could have any stallion in this place if you wanted."
-Well, she has more going for her than personality. I am expecting her to bring up how marrying a mortal pony would be the equivalent of a one-night stand (albeit without the moral problems) for an immortal alicorn. At which point one of them will realize that Spike is going to live long enough that he will have time for century long naps (admittedly a bit of a problem for her if they did marry, but...).
"I think dating a dragon is just something that most mares wouldn't be up for."
-So, sorta the same problem as she has, or it it "too weird" rather than "to scary"? The second would explain why they would pursue a relationship, but the second sounds more plausible.
It was true Spike had finally come to terms with the fact that his crush Rarity didn't share the the same feelings that he had for her.
-Well, that covers that...
"Sorry that you ended up spending New Years with me instead of anything interesting."
-One of the few polite dragons in Equestria? Not SO boring of an experience, although she has probably held down 50' long dragons until they spoke civilly to her... eh, she probably wouldn't wait for a full conversation on mild topics before she let them up.
"No, but kissing one on New Years surely will."
-Ah, and here I was expecting Spike to be the one to initiate it... boldness as a resolution... then again, he is only STARTING on that path.
High in the sky the moon's glow seemed to double in it's intensity,
-Better than aciddentally unleashing her TK randomly.
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You sir have my thanks for pointing out those mistakes, made the necessary corrections and hopefully we got em all.
Glad you liked the story enough to favorite, and i myself enjoyed reading your comment.
That was very sweet, I liked it a lot.
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lol i agree Luna is a pretty fun character to write for.
335657
Thank you, glad you like it
I love this fan-fic, i always wanted to see a spikexluna fan-fic
327300 I have faved 21 fanfics, and I had a hand in writting four of then, out of 1'186 stories that I've tracked though I've only read about 578 of them and I'm happy to say welcome to the 21 now I have to see if I can find number 22
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Happy to provide one
342822
I am greatly honored to be amoung the chosen few good sir. I hope i can continue to gain your favor with my next update.
Fantastic. I LOVED the way you put their conversation between the seconds as they were being counted down. really added to the tension in a fun way.
excellent piece of work.
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Thank you, I'm very happy that you liked it.
YES! This was too cute.
531614
Glad I pulled cute off well here
Thanks burgersteakcurry.
I hereby dub this ship "Like"...
...
I could read your SpikeX(Insert Name) mini-ships all day, Mako.
And I have been!
670457
By far one of the greatest honors I'll ever receive T.D.
Words can barely express the soaring levels of pride I'm bestowed with hearing this from you.
You would have heard from me sooner, but I've been struggling with how I wanted to answer your "T.D. versus BronyCon" Obviously a dilemma I wanted to tread lightly before I could give you a proper answer. I apologize for my lollygagging regarding the subject.
673168
You know I love hearing from you no matter the form or the function, Mako!
I love this ship, and I love this story!
Now, Write more of it?
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Thanks Racko glad that you liked it.
Well I don't want to get any hopes up, but if ya keep it between you and me....there might be an idea i've had that involved this ship and a much larger story. Keep it on the down low though
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Ooh! You got my interest! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png
Any way you might be able to give me some more details? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png
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Wouldn't want to give ya the scoop until it's at least past the blueprint stages, but here's a compromise when I manage to get one of my current fics finished and I can donate the time to actually get it started you'll be the first to know. Fair enough?
1734975
Alright, that sounds fair enough.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png
Now, go finish one of your current fics! (like the Octavia x Spike)
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I'll get right on it then
That was chessy, beautiful, AWESOME!!!
Dude, do you know how long I was looking for a SpikexLuna story? Don't get me wrong, the other shippings are still great but, there's just so much that can go right with Spike and Luna that it is crazy that there aren't a lot more stories with this pairing.
I swear, the awesomeness of your rare pairing's for Spike are greatly needed and appreciated.
Truely Great Job!!!
Now on another note; Get to updating "Dealt A Bad Hoof", NOW!!!
"kick you in the gut"!
Before I
D'aww.... so cute
Wonderful! Everypony, dragon too, was in character. The story was well told in such a short amount of time, and if a reader doesn't have some form of an 'awww' moment they need to check to see if they have a heart.
You may want to consider joining the group Crack Ships Inc. With your skills, you would be a welcome addition to that group. I found this story on your page after reading "Of Donuts and Games."
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Happy to hear from ya again, and even happier to hear that you liked this.
Crack Ships Inc. eh? Well if you recommend it I'll have to check it out. Thanks RU
Minor typo in the description:
Should say "offers", no apostrophe.
There are a few more instances of possessives that should become plurals in the story, as well.
Also: "out did" should say "outdid".
WHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, at least it doesn't end right after the kiss, like most romantic one shots. Thanks for closure.
You're quite welcome 110cono. I'm glad that you liked the story so much.
LLLOOOOOVVVEEEDDDD TTTTHHHHIIIISSS: javascript:smilie('
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5/5 tiger panzers
I would love to see this continued or a sequel
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Glad that you liked it panzerbrony
I shouldn't be saying this...but maybe there's another fic with Luna and Spike in it around the corner. hush hush of course
4016796 my lips are sealed and I am doing a pinkie promise right now
you can pm me about the juicy details
That was very toching and almost made me cry because of the goodmfeels and does the spike in this storie look a little like my spike avatar?
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Glad you liked it. Actually by the way I described him it is pretty darn similar. Cool
That was so sweet and fun.
Most excellent.
Well done. Much awesome. Can't sentence, no sleep.
Great story