• Member Since 22nd Sep, 2020
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TheHooligan


A proper lout, still in the process of regaining my Fimfiction sea legs.

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While solos are fine it never hurts to play a duet. Spike's sensitive ears drove him to seek out her soothing melodies, and Octavia's loneliness drove her to let him stay. A crossing of path's leads too a duet and new friendship.

SpikexOctavia fanfic with music references abound.

Cover art by X9ss

Newest chapter's pre-read by the talented Lium

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Chapters (3)
Comments ( 118 )

This... this is new... :moustache: gotta read it sometime.

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

okay, I gotta say at least the Spike shipping pairs you used make sense. Pinkie(love for baking and actually the most character interaction with spike on the show), Luna(They may or may not be misunderstood), Octavia(music). What's next?

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And when you do i hope you enjoy it

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Thank you, looking forward to writing the next part.

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Lol thank you i try my best, Well once it's been approved by the hard working admins there's another interesting story i've written that might tickle your fancy. This one will be have mult chapters so hopefully you readers will get a little more to chew on. And of course a chapter 2 for this story can be seen in the distance as well.

Three Spike ships in a row? You sure love Spike don't you.

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You got me there, right now the only thing on mlp cooler than Spike, is Spike with mustache.:moustache:

This is just fantastic :twilightsmile:
*AUTOTRACKING*

FINALLY I FOUND A NEW SHIPPING PAIR THANK YA!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Some typos.
Octavia closer her mouth
closed
"If it's an consolation,
any
awestruck by a the sight of a instrument
by the -- an instrument
Message received no breaching
received, no
meet up Twilight
up with Twilight

An interesting story and decently portrayed, I don’t really understand the idea that Octavia was somehow out of work for months but could still come to the theater to practice; maybe I've just read too many stories with characters being completely outcast by society after one little mistake... anyway good story I'll probably check out your other stories soon.

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Oh shucks glad that you approve, will do my best to make my reader's tracking worth it.

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Your very much welcome, glad your liking the ship

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A large Thank You for bringing these to my attention, our stories always get better when we lend each other a hand. There's an actual reasoning for her being able to keep up her practice despite the ebb in her career. Most of that will be revealed in following chapters. And i'll be glad to receive a review on any of them.

can you write a spike and apple bloom romance :pinkiehappy:

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Possibly, I am curious about writing something involving Spike interacting with ponies closer to his age so Applebloom would be a prime candidate.

I'm surprised nopony caught this.
At one point, it said "wondering" instead of "wandering".

Words of encouragement would go here if I were even minimally decent at such things.

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Oh indeed yes, I've had some great help in fixing my fanfics. Hopefully the chapters to come out next will be near perfection before they're out to be read. Just a meaningful comment is enough from my readers, I'm sure your words of encouragement are just fine.

For the love of all things in life please dont stop writing!

It was absolutely astounding I loved it.

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Thank you, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to writing the next part and hope you'll like it as much as you did this chapter.

Wow, this is great! I think I'm gonna need to write a Spike x Octavia story after I'm finished with my current one. :derpyderp2:

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It was an idea that kept plaguing my mind until i finally put it too paper, and I'm honestly surprised too how well reader's took to it.
Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it, and looking forward to what happens next in your current one.

This is the first time I find this ship. And you've done a pretty good job. A should probably complain about Octavia saying one word in the whole chapter, but honestly I can't blame you since she has never say a thing on the series, so anything resemblin a personality is anybody's guess.
Are you gonna keep it up?

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Indeed I am, in fact now that I've updated my other story this one gets priority. Glad that you like it, and don't worry about Octavia she gets a few more lines later on. The focus here was to try a story where one character says very little, similar to a mute. But instead of being full on speechless she's just the dignified quiet type. More or less let's her actions do the talking.

i beg please continue, i know you have a lot of thing to think about:fluttershysad: but please, its 10 weekss since this was first updated:raritycry:

When Octavia whacked Spike with her bow that was just so cute :heart:, can't stop smiling, good job there, hoping for the next chapter to come :yay:

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Your wait only need to go on for a little longer friend, an update is on it's way.

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Thanks glad you liked that part, next part in the creation process as we speak.

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Your quite welcome :moustache:

*Whew* Finally updated!

Sorry for the wait everybody, I promise it won't take this long next time.

Really have to send my thanks to Lium for fixing this baby up, and X9ss for donating a rad cover image, and all of you for the favs, the watches, and just for enjoying my amateur level fics.

You guys are great, and I hope this chapter reaches expectations.

Now to go update the other one.:moustache:

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If you ever call yourself amateur again I can't be held responsible for what might happen. :pinkiecrazy:

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lol alright, I'll give myself a break Pro

Yeah man, don't sell yourself short. You're a better writer than me, for sure.

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Ahh Shucks I'm alright, wouldn't have gotten this far without you guys helping me out.:moustache:
Seriously means a lot though to hear that from you Lium

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Spectacular chapter!! Now, where's the next one? :pinkiehappy:

Lol hopefully it'll be up and about before another near year goes by.:moustache:
Thanks again for your help X9ss

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Amateur as in "lover of", then you certainly did this one justice.

Max

*SQUEE* Finally! Oh godness, this is the best octavia i have read on a fan fiction, as always wonderful work, will wait for the next chapter!

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Thanks ChewinCarmel glad that you like it.

1675339 Happy that you enjoyed it Max. No worries the next wait wont be nearly as long

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I'm glad that I was able to capture the experience Socratic.
I'll try my best not to lol:rainbowlaugh:
There's a movie with that title?! I will most definitely need to see that.

Octavia was socially awkward

:facehoof:
Anyway...this is an awesome story pls continue.:twilightsmile:

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Yeah Spike's pretty dense but then again most of us dudes were at one point or another.:moustache:
Glad you like it Kzer, and don't worry progress is already being made as we speak.

I dub this AWESOMENESS!!!! You get her Spike you oblivious dragon you.

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Great to hear from ya Harmony_Blue, and even great to hear that you like this newest chapter.

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Ya glad I don't have to worry about that, my friends call me dense and thick headed but I am am sure that its cuss my head is literally hard cuss lets face it I ain't no chick magnet.

I kinda wanted to punch Octavia in the face for dissing Bob Seger. She gets pissed because Spike is playing an upbeat heavy piano classic rock song. Fanboy rant over.

Aside from that I think that's it's adorable that Octavia has the anti-social attitude that makes Twilight look like Pinkie Pie in comparison. I think by the time Spike enters his teens most ponies would be aware of him being raised by Celestia and his deeds like his aid in stopping Discord and saving the Crystal Empire. Octavia shouldn't be too surprised that a lot of ponies know Spike's name, because this is hanging in the palace.
i.imgur.com/9JW7z.jpg

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Oh she just isn't used to that good ol rock n roll. To much time being raised with music of a more refined taste one might say.
It is a interesting sight, I could go on about some the reasons behind that but that would be revealing too much too early.

I waited....for so long....wondering if this fiction would ever continue....

Thank you.....Thank you.:ajsmug:

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I'm happy to say the wait is over, but you already know that :twilightsheepish:
You're quite welcome rabbitfaster.

Poor Spike, he has swag and doesn't know it:moustache:

The only thing I don't get is why Octavia speaks so little. It makes this more original, but still...

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