"Scootaloo is the only flightless pegasus in Ponyville (maybe even Equestria). Even Pound Cake, at only a few months old, can fly! Where will her mind take her in a desperate hope to one day finally get her hooves off the ground?"
[Just a short little story I may continue if needed. My first real fanfiction, so comments and feedback is greatly appreciated.]
Edit~ For anyone that didn't like the ending very much, there is now an alternate I call "Defying Gravity". Feel free to read it if you wish.
Chapters (2)
well....
*deep breath*
that was very, very well written. The first bit (before Dashies song) wasn't nearly as good, but It was still good. The second bit... was fan-tas-tic!
>>BestiaAuris
Thanks!
That...was...awesome
>>TheRedBronyGuy
You sir, are awesome as well.
(Thanks
)
Please, don't let that future be true
She doesn't deserve it, honest! Anypony, tell her to start telling her to dance, she has to know it's her talent! 
It's was a good story, real good read. All those memories... just so emotional
you know i hope they show scootaloo parents in the show (Also i really ddon't see sweetie belle so mean, but then again it is a nightmare so i will shut up.)
>>Festus
Scootaloo's my favorite Crusader, so it was quite hard to describe the future scene. I will admit that I cried manly tears making this, and I'm glad somepony else did as well.
Glad you like it.
>>goldar
I personally think Rarity's semi-smuggness rubbed off on Sweetie, and over time she got famous for [CENSORED TALENT] and all the fame went to her head.
I hope they show Scootaloo's parents, or at the least an episode about her.
I am glad I took time to read this masterpiece, it is inspired and has a very good story. At some parts I was a bit confused, but not unduly so, overall a extremely well written story. I would love to read more from you in the future.
I don't know... for me, i just started skipping over everything.
I found it too dry for me. I wasn't able to enjoy it, sorry mate.
I think i need to find a hammer and chisel, this heart of stone i got makes me feel like a jerk.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
186829
Aww, thanks! You're too kind.
I can understand some getting lost during the "Tunnel of Color" as I like to call it.
187168
Can't please everypony. Thanks for the feedback.
This is a really great story!
maybe my special talent is being
invisible
Dawwww!
This ending is a lot happier than the other one, good to see that you can write both! Scootaloo is awesome.
Good job.
219347
Thanks!
MUCH better now.
great read... i suggest you expand on the first chapter... so much room to innovate!
282457
Thank you, I shall have to get my thinking hat!
254061
Hehe, glad I could do both endings~
I love Scootaloo, she was always my second favourite (besides Octavia, that is
) Now I'm officially glad I read this story 
Congrats!
435096
Same here- she's my favorite CMC. And thank you!