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When a new student named Dark Humor comes to the school with a reputation of a class trouble maker the students, especially Diamond Tiara don't know what to expect, she wants to stay at the top and she won't let this new student debunk her.
(Edit) I'd just like to add that the students have been aged to teens so like 15-16 years. NO FOALCON HERE!
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Bully vs bully, something tells me this won't end well.
U deserve a like!
And to all on fimfiction, HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!
Dark Humor, a very fitting name for this character. He took a punch, and laughed soon after.
There were a few errors concerning grammar and punctuation, and this Dark Humor kid is just begging to have his number called.
I will upvote it IF he ends up getting clobbered in a later chapter. And if you find a proofreader to correct all the tiny little mistakes.
5317973 I can get a proofreader but I can't promise Dark getting clobbered.
But to accommodate your needs I will give him his fair share of losses.
It is Bully vs. Bully after all, both are bound to get what they deserve.
5318069 For being so honest, you get an instant like.
I read the title and instantly thought of the School Days anime.... Oh the pain... oh the pain...
That's not dark humour, that's plain and simple being a knob end. Dark humour is like a pair of legs. Not everyone has it. (Sorry)
Cannot wait to see what will happen next!
*Sure, she had
*but she failed to
*that as you get older
Hopefully, as YOU get older, your grammar will mature.
Oh, don't mind me, though. I'm just being a grammar Nazi.
The story's interesting so far, anyhow.
I wonder what dark will say to her hmm...
...do it...
Wow
Naw. He still doesn't have a heart...
When's the next chapter?
5446409 Real soon my friend. Before the new year I assure you.
can someone translate what he said in English?
5446845 Do google translate
This is really good whens the next chapter?
TRANSLATIONS:
I was just going behind the school, Ms. Cheerilee.
Well then bitch, why don't we get this done and over with?
-SYA, The Horse
5447853 is that supposed to be like a joke? Or are you being a dick and telling me to hurry up my story here?
5447908 Sorry, I thought I put TRANSLATIONS: at the top. I'll fix that now.
5447940 ah okay, my bad.
...Oh you bitch...
5454433 Don't say I didn't warn you for the next chapter... Pulling out all the stops.
That last bit made me laugh. (what's Dark going to do w/ the tiara?)
5485333
I think he's going to sell it (make a pretty bit = make a pretty penny)
Sweet, update.
Triste?
5517550
Triste means "Sorry"
5517691
Thanks.
You mentioned the 5th of May twice.
5517888 If you're talking about when I said Sinco de Mayo then I said 5th of May I was saying that to clarify that Cino de Mayo means 5th of May.
When was Scoots involved with this? She got insulted?
5517945 You did read the first two chapters right?
The father should go to jail
Bitch, please. I sell propane.
Heh, but seriously, thanks for the extra update.
And no hard feelings for calling you bitch, OK?
5518581 No problem.
Also,
"I'm gonna tie the long hair on your head to the short hair on your ass and kick you down the street!"
~Hank Hill
5518596
Awww....
Nice chapter.
Shame that it's ending already...
5522639 Every great thing must come to an end Lieutenant!
But, didn't I mention the numbers 2 and 3? If I get enough of a rant and enough fans to ask for more, I'll get right into the story sequels.
If I feel like it of course. But sadly, I only see this story being a one time thing. No prequels or sequels. It simply wouldn't work.
5522772
Very reasonable.
I understand.
I don`t think that's right.
5566929 I realize that. It should be spelled *Hysterically* and it should be "Began to laugh hysterically" instead of "Hysterically laugh"
Thanks for pointing that out
Canceled huh? Aw rats.
You bastardo. :P
6811813 To think it was one chapter away from being complete. Oh well.
6811954
That is unless someone else writes an epilogue chapter.
6811960 Are you saying you want to write the ending for the story?
6811976
Nah. I would suck at it. Just saying it would be interesting if someone else did though.
I be lying if I didn't say I half-heartly expected this to be something like school days(the anime). Glad that's not the case here.