Ever since you were young, you've always preferred the rainy days over the sunny ones. The key word is days at any other time, it's just annoying, especially in the evening. It gets too cold, too damp, and too obnoxious. To combat the cold, you grab your favorite blanket, a bowl of soup, and your favorite film, you were gonna ride out this night like you did every night.
That's until a bright orange blur catches your eye. It takes shelter under the bus stop across from your house. Everything in your being is telling you it's just another homeless person. But, this one wasn't like any hobo you've seen. Her clothes were somewhat clean and she didn't seem very unkempt. You can't help but investigate.
Edits and Proofreading By: The Fan Without a Face
OMG! THIS story is just....too much
the feels!
T'was Heart Warming.
That was both sad and sweet at the same time
Good work
I think this guy's grandpa is Mr. Simonet from Pay It Forward. Look it up.
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that was great....faving it
That was very adorable.
That's cute, even though I prefer the taco one.
Sweet and short
As nicely written as this was, I cannot shake off the fact that Adagio just willingly went into a strangers house without much persuasion.
Also the stranger's name is Anon. I guess I can believe that. From what I have seen on this site it seems to be a very common name. I'll roll with it.
And also Adagio lets someone she does not even know get into bed with her...
You're not gonna write a sequel to this where it turns out it was all part of a rape scheme, are you?
I'm sorry for thinking this way, but after coming across so many clopfics and...darker...stories on this site I'm just not believing that this story is going to stay cutesy for long, like soon there's going to be another 'happy ending' if you catch my drift.
But still...it's not often I find a good well-written story like this. I actually came by this through the Popular section, and reading the short info I assumed it was gonna be about Scootaloo, what with the 'orange' mentioning. Anyways I'm talking crap now. Overall, really good story, nicely done. Pat yourself on the back author. You win a Like.
But I know sooner or later someone else, if not you, will remake this and spoil it all. Somebody always does. Guard your story well, author. Don't let anyone else make a mockery of it.
Be safe and well.
UniqueSKD (no s**t, my name is right there XD)
6503163 I'm glad you're looking out for my story. It really shows that people care about the things they read here on this site. But just because you find rape stories and darker tales on the site, doesn't mean stories like these will be like that. Yes, I will make a sequel, two more actually. But they all contribute to the lesson in the end which I won't spoil. I plan on having the whole series be an E rating, Teen at most.
6503194 (rolls on the floor laughing)
Okay, seriously dude. Your innocent look on the situation is well and truly admirable, I say this without even the slightest drop of sarcasm. But you need to understand the Rule 34 thumb; if it exists, there will be porn of it.
Your story exists, hence somebody is going to rewrite this and throw porn and futa shit all over it. Yes, I'm telling you right now that someone will see this excellent story, and smear their piss-stained feces all over it and call it an original clopfic.
That is why you need to be alert. Don't let anyone get away with that kind of act. Or go ahead and let people make a mockery of your story. It's your choice really. But it would be nice to think there are bronies who will do whatever is in their power to preserve as much innocence of their fandom as they can. Heed me or ignore me, whatever you do, I ask you at least humor me and take a stand for your writings. Do not let people degrade your work with dirtied copies of it.
This fandom deserves so much more respect than what we've all given it. Be part of a bigger message, GhostOfBBQ.
Farewell. (fades into the night under a bloody moon)
6503253 While I do know of those who are more than willing to take a story such as this and turn it into a perverted fantasy, I don't believe it will happen. I'm not a well known writer here on the site, who would want to write a spoofed version of a story I wrote at 3:00 in the morning? However I will keep my eye open, I highly doubt anyone will take the time to spoof my story given my popularity status.
But who knows. I could be that "lucky" one that is chosen to be spoofed.
Does make you wonder how Adaigo fared after the second movie. Most storys make the homeless waif be Sonata.
6503253
Eeeyyy!
Nice to see you here! Guess we were on the same mind wave on this one, huh?
Short, sweet, and cute. I can dig this.
This story was sweet. You got me wanting more. Great job
Interesting.
Ziz story iz alvight.
6503413 There's a dark storm coming.
A crimson moon stained by angry souls
Painted upon a midnight canvas of shadows and darkness
Below the blackness of night
Bathed in pale moonlight
The sinners arise from their holes
There's a dark storm coming
Heralded by a shrieking cry in the night
A banshee's scream and the deathly thud of the first of many a corpse
And no amount of light
Will be enough to fight
Back against the monsters feeding off your fright
There's a dark storm coming
And the Kings of Hell are on their way
Riding rotting horses they shall stampede leading hordes of abominations
Those who hear their snarling cry
Shall be the first of thousands to die
Their deaths will seem so merciful on that day
There's a dark storm coming.
There's a dark storm coming.
And wherever you are running
Won't stop the dark storm that's coming.
- Beware the clopfic writers, GhostsofBBQ. Beware the dark storm that's coming.
- - - Also still a good story and still liking it
- - - - - - Also beware the dark storm that's coming.
6506537 Alright Edgar Allen Poe, I'll keep the clopfic thing in mind.
6506604 And then the clouds parted aside,
And a ray of light fell down from the heavens
Upon the world the light descended
And with it, there came the miracle of Hope.
6506604
While the talented UniqueSKD does raise a valid point (in very well-written poetry, no less. Bravo!), I feel that I should throw in my two bits. Don't worry about what others may do with the idea you've put down. You certainly should defend your work as best you can, but if other people want to corrupt and twist what you've written, then that is their problem.
You gave birth to something original, simple, and sweet. Nothing can ever take that away. Sadly, there are many in this world who seek to bring down anything innocent and unspoiled, but we - the people who've read and enjoyed this story - will always remember it for the work it is.
Even if someone wants to put time into twisting your idea into something ugly, you can take pride in knowing that this story, the original, can never be taken away from you.
Man, I sound so melodramatic right now... but anyhow, that's how I see it. Cheers and good health to ya!
I thought this was a sweet story. Although, I wasn't a huge fan of the main character being named Anon, but I still enjoyed the story.
6512377 Well it's a second person story, if I gave him/her a normal name, it wouldn't make sense. Not everyone is named John, or Molly. Although I could have given Anon a gender neutral name... Like Alex, or Sam.
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I'm aware of the reason. It's just a personal preference of mine.
Like I said, it didn't really affect my enjoyment of the story. I still thought it was a beautiful story.
A nice enough story for what it is. Some moment are a little unrealistic; her instant trust, his unshakable charity paired with his lack of modesty in changing in front of her.
Still a sweet story!
Hello. I saw your request for the sinning of this in the forums of ReadingSins, and I went ahead and did it. If you'd like to see it it can be found here. Hope ya like it
Also this was a good story, a little heavy on cliches and somewhat unrealistic, but still I like it. If there are any sequels out or coming up, could you let me know? (I'm kind of a sucker for romance). Anyways, have a good rest of your thanksgiving.
~Mr_Rager
The feels are strong with this one
Great story mate!
you should really continue this
I can't help but feel this was a little rushed. You meet a girl (bitch I say) who recently got kicked out and just let her walk In into your home. I would've been more cautious because I wouldn't want to wake up in a empty robbed place
Who writes a Fimfiction story at three in the morning?
This Author: Oh boy 3am
Fucking awesome
Will there be a sequel to this story?
Mm
My boi, did you not see the Keanu Reeves movie...
Great fanfic hope there will be a sequel