I have tried parmesan and mozzarela but I like the mix of chedar and mozzarela more...

I also have another thing to say... THROW THE CHEESE!

as an italian, i approve.

Jeez, a songfic for cooks

6442743 ...But they're ponies, not aliens.

6443223 no they're not aliens but can't I make references?

6443417 You can make all the references you like. I was trying to be funny.

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Jeez, a songfic for cooks

Yeah...

This felt really, really pointless.

It would have been one thing with the ingredients turned into tiny ponies in euphoria about that they're about to be cut up, cooked and eaten, while the dude and perhaps even stove gets too freaked out about that. That would have actually fit the premise, and been dark but funny.

But this? What the hell was even the point. Its just a thousand words about mundane cooking where nothing else happens.

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Yep, that was pretty much the whole point. I actually had fun writing it. I'll do more silly stuff for the next chapter, but I had to get some enjoyment before I go back to writing pony items being silly.

6443456 oh well in that case... LET'S THROW CHEESE AT PONIES!

The cheese shredder pony was very quiet.

Goddammit,now i'm hungry

This chapter felt like those random anime episodes where they just do shit to fill an episode gap. His transformative power was never used in this chapter and I never felt like Stove was a stove pony, she just felt like a pony who knew how to cook. It was a fine chapter, just, a little random compared to the overall tone of the story. I just hope this isn't the last chapter before a looong update gap.

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Nah, I'm doing work on this story this weekend, as well as a few others over on the Sir hat account. probably have one of those filler chapters from time to time but those are really just for me. More silliness in the next few chapters. there probably wont even be continuity from chapter to chapter.

...would it be wise to use the chapter to ACTUALLY make pizza?

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Technically yes, you could make a pizza using that chapter. Would I recommend it? No. I'd say find an online recipe.

On a side note, the pesto recipe is accurate and can be made using ingredients listed in the chapter.

How's it coming?

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bad. Nothing I write seems right. Work takes all of my time and worst of all, writing anything feels like torture. It's not fun anymore.

Now I have to object to the "gypsy curse" framing device.

I see you've taken this one back.

6970231 Yep! It's one of the fics I'm going to work on.

6970518 YEAH!!!

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http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/601331/the-re-un-deadening

Start with the parmesan o first thought.

A little grammatical error here.

Can you do more please

Any chance of a revival?

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Probably not.

Was it really necessary to make a whole chapter of the main character preparing a meal and cooking and learning to do so? Boring.

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I hope you're going to continue this fic again. I really liked it.

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i do agree what happened to this writer? did he or she quit or something?
and if so what will become of these stories? if you wana chat with me pm me and ill give you my discord

if this work is up for grabs I will post it on my fimfiction account..i say this because it says he or she has been offline for 4 years so ...if this stuff is just here and the author aint comin back I wanna know what will happen to these because I love the stories this writer posted this one is my fav and it would be a shame to see them deleted or something so if anyone has info on this pls pm me and I will give u my discord and we can chat there more as its most likely the fastest was I will respond

its been 4 years since this author has been online it says so I'm guessing he or she aint comin back and if so what will happen to there stories? I hope they don't get deleted but if they are gonna maybe I can post some of them on my fimfiction account because its always a shame when I go to check stories I love or like *love this one btw really good* and I don't want it to happen to this story or a few others by this author so if anyone has info on this pls pm me and ill give u my discord and we can chat more there

I love this story; I wish there was more.

It's a shame there isn't more of this. I had just discovered it and I instantly fell in love with it.