Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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... don't let them see the necklace? That just sets off so many alarm bells for me. Could have easily put a tracer on it and use it to find Ozzy whenever he wants, either to get him or Fleur or Shiny alone.
Ha puffy most likely hit rock bottom. And vogue was a last hope just my thought. Keep it up. Really good read.
FEATURED!!!!
5806156 I agree, honestly it smell like a big trap to me, but maybe we shall see in the next chapter.
5806156 Or have a garrote built into the necklace like Law Abidding Citizen
Glad to see that everything with Solar went calm. Hope he isn't acting, though.
Great chapter. I really loved Oz's interaction with Solar. Keep up the good job.
Even though Solar said all that stuff, I can't help but still hate the guy. Honestly, if I were Oz, I would've told him to go f#@k himself and if I see him again, I'm breaking his wings off and shoving them where the sun don't shine.
....I do not like that foreshadowing involving puff tie
if what Solar said about Puff Tie is true then Shining didn't 'burn him into the ground' she nuke'd the bastard, good for her
now we just need to cram Solar into the ground, finish with a sexy threesome and see where we go from there
Is Solar telling the truth? that is the question I am going to say 80% he is really trying to better his life I am pretty sure he is trying to do right bye the girls.
this chapter was a lot different then I guessed it was going to be.
good work big D.
Harts Fire
5806360 I greatly approve of this plan
Something doesn't sit right about Solar. Not sure what though.
things are gonna get interesting real quick
stayclassy
I still doesn't trust Solar Even after ALL he told to Ozzy. But He better talk about That to Fleur and Shiny. They deserve to know.
Still not trusting Solar. Not. One. Bit.
Sloar has a very evil plan in mind.
I just know it.
And yes, I am keeping that name wrong. He doesn't deserved to be renamed
Hmm... It all seems a little too convenient. Something's up. I think Solar and Puff are working together to pull a fast one.
I call bullshit on Solar Flare's story. He's up to something.
And so antagonists and hidden antagonists will make there move soon.
This chapter...
Sweet!!
Okay I get the feeling that either Ozzy will get hurt or that his ex roommate will get hurt while he tries to help Ozzy, could also be that both of them get hurt
I really hope Solar's telling the truth.
Way too often in these stories, you get the bad guy who's fixed on being the bad to the point of psychopathic obsession.
Just once, I'd to see one who really does realize how badly he fucked up, and actually wants to make amends.
Come on, Solar, don't disappoint me!
I don't know if Solar Flare is honest or BS'ing but Ozzy should tell the girls about meeting him at the bar and his suspicions about his story.
Give Solar a chance but don't hide this from Fleur and Shiny. It's too important not to keep them informed.
I can see Solar trying to improve his life, but the way he acted when he first showed up much earlier in the story does put doubts in my mind. The fact that except for some coincidental stings does make me doubt he is a full blown stalker. Except that he has and is stalking by his own admission. Whether he goes full blown crazy stalker counts on how much it bothers him that Ozzy has Fleur and Ozzy when he learns of it.
The Oz-man is sooo not magic-savvy. First thing I would have done is put it in a train station locker until I could have someone see if it's got active spells slapped on it.... Anything Hinky running on the jewellry, and the girls would be told ASAP!
This story is fantastic. I love Ozy as a character and his relationship with Fleur and Shiny is genuinely heartwarming. Keep up the awesome work!
3 words...best story...ever...
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5907144 Mmhm
There's also the wonderful Snowflake...or as he's now unfortunately known: BULK BICEPS, YEEEEAAAH
5907306 Um, actually, no. I've never been to ANY convention of the sort. >.>
Finally caught up with all of your last 4 chapters and you did not disappoint. So much has happened I don't know where to begin.
First one is Jude, he's a much more funnier guy than I thought and it's nice that he always saw Ozzy as a dear friend of his even if Ozzy didn't think so. Not only that he's a good guy deep down and really respects another person's feelings especially Ozzy considering what he's going through right now. Ozzy's lucky to have a friend like him despite how annoying he can be.
Second one is Solar Flare. Oh boy, considering what Ozzy pieced together earlier and some of the earlier comments suspecting that Mascara and Solar Flare are working together it makes sense, if Mascara was SEEING Solar Flare and Solar Flare asked her to "get" Ozzy it makes more sense as everything looks too coincidence thus far. Solar Flare could be genuine with what he said for some of the parts, but I have my suspicion on the dude, not to mention Puffy Tie.
I really think Mascara and Solar Flare are working together to try to get Ozzy separated from Fleur and somehow have Solar Flare have Fleur all to herself once more. But only time will tell, I love a good mystery in stories once and awhile... which is why I have the Sherlock Holmes movies. I cannot get enough of them especially a Game of Shadows.
Anyway back to the story, it's shaping up nicely! Though I get a feeling the climax is soon upon us and the story has only a few more chapters before it's over... like 12 chapters left. I wonder how it will end and though I will be sad it will come to a close I look forward to the ending with vigor and cannot wait to see how the great story finishes.
Until then... this is VirusChris signing off!
after rereading this chapter I am going to say yes Solar is really trying to be good and I think if given the chance he woule lay his life on the line for the girls.
not really sure it is just a feeling I am getting from this chapter .
as to ozzy keeping the necklace secret from them well we know from the past with his dreams he needs to get Solar and the girls to gather really soon.
Harts Fire