Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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Great job on the chapter! As always, looking forward to the next one!
Shining for the win.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm really enjoying the story and am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
What makes this story enjoyable is that you take characters and give them tragedies and flaws. Like Shining and Fleur with Solar's attempted murder and the physical and psychological damage that it has on Shining. Or like how Shining knowingly omits how the tail pulling can turn ponies on. Or like how Fleur philosophizes on anger, and how if she really wants to move on with her life, then she needs to come to a point where she can truly forgive Solar for what he's done. That said, Fleur does need more flaws exhibited, as I can only think of the anger and unforgiveness thing.
Peace,
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I sure hope it turns out to be nothing...
Yay, the wonderful mare I voted on won. Congratulations, it's a huge thumb up to your OC that she won by such a large margin.
Ozzy, Shining and Fluer are very well written characters. Entertaining when they try to be and gut wrenching when they are at the other end of the spectrum.
Thus far I've enjoyed the ride from the start. 34 chapters before a sex scene, but everyone of them a joy to read.
Feeling a bit sad for Fluer though, Seems like Shining sucked all the energy out of Ozzy. Hope that he has a bit of mojo left over for Fluer, she deserves it.
Ozzy shares a birthday with my little sister. Weird.
I forsee some problems when he goes out with Fleur.
Oh, and Ozzy and Shining can finally sing in duet.
I know it's old as sin, but still appropriate I think.
Holy crap... Shining almost got 3/4s of the vote...
...I voted for Fleur too...
On another note, hell was with that cookie? I almost dare say it was planted there by Puff or some other unwell wisher.
5486901 the right song for the moment
well this was a long time coming and i was not disappointed. looking forward to the next chapter. in fact i enjoyed it so much i'm gonna boop your nose
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stay classy
5486937 Or perhaps it was made for him considered he will need all the luck he can get with the trial, the heat, and of course trying to figure out how to make a herd work.
Wow, the sex scene was hot but the date was very sweet. I'm glad Oz and Shining finally expressed their feelings for each other.
I feel that when Ozzy finally meets Shining's mom it will be beyond hilarious. Her job kinda guarantees it.
FINALLY! It was worth the wait.
It took a while, but was worth it. One down, one to go.
Yet there be trouble a brewing methinks
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Great chapter! Although I did vote for Fluer, I'm glad his date with Shining went well. I really hope that Ozzy's date with Fluer goes well, because those two are so wonderful together . Hopefully it will be just as sexy and romantic Fleur needs some loving!!
DAMN!!!
I GOT HORNY with THE sex scene.
I WAIT for THE next CHAPTER EXCITED.
Awesome.
Good job.
I loved it was Shining. She is just such a great character :D.
Awwww sheht just got real
Many a man has used that line and suffered for it. *Lucky stiff.*
Kinda makes me wonder about Oz's and Fleur's date tomorrow. (Also !)
Why... Why can't I like this more then once!!!!
I came to this story because it was something I'd waited a long time for -- a promising human/Fleur story. I pushed past my general distaste for anthro ponies for her sake. Now I'm reading it more for Shiny than anything else and I've been more open to anthro stories (and pictures, if you catch my drift). What have you done to me?
All that's left now is for the meteor to hit...
EDIT: What the hell? Why is this not already properly catalogued in my library? Oh well; fixed now.
Boow chica boow wow
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Tomorrow, we'll have another outing. I expect the day after, we'll all know the superiority of a threesome.
Iced tea latte?
Iced tea = tea.
Latte = coffee.
Iced tea latte = tea + coffee.
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5489465 A latte is basically coffee with milk. Chai latte is the same thing only with chai tea instead of the coffee. So you add ice in there, and voila, iced chai latte. Very delicious in my opinion.
5489465 latte means milk
WAY TO GO OZZY! HALE-FUCKING-JULA!
Ehem. Sorry
This has been one wild ride since I read the first chapter, I honestly can't belive it's gotten so far.
I just hope my own fic gets half as good as this masterpiece.
Can't wait to read more.
5489465 Actually, I think the word 'latte' came from the Italian language and it means milk. So he would be actually drinking milk tea.
5489975 That's pretty much it. Yep.
I so happy for my boy Oz he lost his viginity to shiny .but I was laughing my ass off about that cookie I hope fluer get the same amount of love Oz better not disappoint and shiny was sexy as hell.
Keep up the good work friend
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Welp. I thought that a 'latte' was a specific type of coffee, not milk. I have been ejumacated!
......and I just wanted to throw a meme of a caffeinated squirrel in there as well.
Can you imagine if someone tried mixing tea and coffee? It'd probably taste disgusting, but they'd be bouncing off the walls.
These two finally got to boink?
(Just glad it was a good experience for 'em. )
Well I'm not disappointed, since there is a nice reaction between them, but that fortune cookie....it smell like murphy law doing the disco.
5492298 O_O You know, I didn't even realize that until you pointed it out.
By her glorious sunny flanks, come on people, who's at the cover? Here's a hint, not freaking Shining.
But, they say something about how something is better the more you wait for it, so I suppose that's fine.
It was a cute chapter, but something felt off to me during the sex scene. Guess I figured it would be a bit slower and more touchy-feely (heh), not a basic "one orgasm for you, one for me, sex" style. Not saying it was bad, just was expecting something different. Like them taking their sweet time just playing around. *shrugs*
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter now that I know it's Fleur's.
The reason I voted for Shining is because maybe it might go better with Fleur if he went with Shining first... (Absolutley love Shining, but Fleur is my fave Background Pone. And there also being a huge lack of good Fleur love fics.) But in the end, I hope he gets with with
5492537 dude or dudet not all first time aren't all magical taking it slow and i love yous.......mine was the total opposite.
i wish it was like that, but.... i'm not complaining
Honestly, I only started reading this due to the length of the story, but the plot is amazing. I thought the writing would be lacking when it came to the characters height and depth, but I'm glad the author proved me wrong. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
P.S. I just have the worst feeling when the heat for Fleur comes, if Solar Flare is still a problem by then.
I want those heat chapters to be right around the corner
Finally!!!!
Anyone here have a pic of what Shining looks like?
Yes! I voted for Shining Star and I'm happy to see her go first on the date!
Though I wasn't expecting there to be a clop bit at the end, normally it's fine but a little warning ahead that there would've been some clop. Though that's not to say I disliked on the contrary I really like it! I don't know much of writing lemon scenes, but yours was really great and I like how things went.
The romance in this chapter felt really natural and I enjoy seeing how Ozzy and Shining's date went and all the times someone managed to caught them off guard and embarrass them, especially Shining, and I enjoyed this another side of Shining as it was adorable when she was baby talking to the little foal and how spicy she was in bed. Ozzy came out nice too and shows not everyone is confident when it comes to bed, I'm like him as I don't know, so I can relate at not being prepared mentally for it, scared that you're not going to do a good job, and wondering what to do though I say let it come naturally to you.
Very good and lengthy chapter, I took my time reading it and I hope Fleur's clop scene with Ozzy is just as great as this one!
I look forward to seeing the next chapter dude!
By the way, did you get a chance of read my newest chapter of my MLP story, Love Troubles Corona? I love to hear your thoughts on it, I'm always looking for new feedback to see how well I did with my story and what can be improved.
I hope Robert never appears again.. I don't like him.
This was so worth the wait. I think this the best sex scene I ever read. It really hard for me to put this in to words but I think it because of the bond between these two characters and how well you written them. Again Thanks for this wonderful chapter. I'm looking forward reading the next one.
5499789 Here you go.
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5505411 Wow, when she lets her hair down, look out! Then again with the hair up she has that sexy Librarian thing going.
Any update on when the next chapter will be up?