Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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This chapter was funny. I like the way that Oz controls Shining through tail-tugging and his desperate idea to avoid a bonner by asking that last question. I can't wait to see what happens to the guy.
I am groot, and i approve of this.
I think I figure out what happen with Solar and Shining I will reserve my hypothesis for now and write it in a peace of paper.
Also, wow Oz, if he only had say that he need the room because of HIM they will understand I mean the guy is still fighting the nervous of being around mares, sharing a room with 2 wouldn't it be like asking a person with fear of snakes to sleep next to one?
I think those 2 are just pushing it at this point
good chapter, i liked it and the fact that there is someone following them in the background give room for "things" to happen
I like playing as rocket racoon on marvel heroes 2015 his fun to play and has some really funny quotes
Neat-o. Nice, long chapter. Looking forward to the date.
Although, I have to admit, I don't really care for Shining's suggestion on how to (almost literally) reign her in when she acts out. Even a blind man can tell that her tail is an erogenous zone. She's asking Ozzy to publicly violate her when she acts out. Sorry, but I think that's just stupid.
Dudeler. At least you approve on Rocket.
Jimmy Neutron FTW!
Also, nice chapter.
Rocket was a grade S fucking badass! Obvious favorite. Saw the movie with my friend and she loved it.
Arousing Shiny is the way to control her?
Rocket is best character of GOTG!
So.....who thinks Solar slept with Shining and Fleur?
This is going to ship Oz and Fluer, right? Cause it totally doesn't feel like it yet.
I reckon that the mare in question that was doinking Solar was most likely Shiny, that, or Solar did something despicable to one of the two mars. But I think my first guess is the more plausible one.
And if it is, I reckon that it's gunna make Oz and Shiny have a falling out or something.
Those are just my thoughts.
maybe you could do a muti ending story that has ozzy either going with fluar or shining. I would like to see shining get him in the end but hey that just my opinion. Cant wait for more.
Solar Flare is in Manehatten isn't he?
Seriously? Jimmy Neutron? You've gotta be joking.
4900717 Hey it was a good show. Plus it just came to me while I wrote the ending, so why not?
4900835 well I guess...
NEUTRON!
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Actually I think he might have hurt Shiny. Back in chapter 4 when they were at the news station Fleur said he was let out on good behavior. Meaning he was in prison. I think that the reason that Fleur blames herself for what happened ia that Solar Flare hurt Shiny to get back at Fleur. But i might be wrong, this is just a theory i came up with based on what i've read.
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Very plausible. And I reckon it probably involves either rape or physical assault
4901386 i personally hope its just the latter. I really like these characters, especially Shiny, and the idea that she was raped is very unpleasent.
When Ozzy described Shiny in her pajamas, there was a vague detail of something visible under her top near her breasts. Possibly a scar?
This story is labled "Sex" but I dont see any in it. References, to be sure, but not any scenes. Did I miss anything, or is it incoming in the future?
4902097 It's incoming.
4902151 I love authors that reply to comments
4901456 I should probably write a better description when I get on a computer, but I was referring to her tits poking under her top.
4902153 I may not answer all, but I read every single one.
*COUGH COUGH HINT COUGH HINT HINT COUGH SHE HINT WANTS COUGH COUGH THE D HINT COUGH COUGH*
Oh man don't know what just went through my system there.....
4900671 I think it's going to be with Fleur because the story is called The Model's Secretary, not The Model's Manager. I have no idea what I'm talking about.
4902609 You made me want to ship it though...... But hey it your story I still enjoy it alot
4902632 'S not my story. It's either up in the air or predetermined. Either way, it's a good story.
4902646 I'm stupid
4902664 Nah. You're fine.
As someone that's seen Guardians twice now, I approve of all three of them going to see the movie.
4902153 i love Nightmare Moon she kicks ass literally she's the strongest character in the show
4903051 I love comments that have only a negligible and tangental reference to a previous comment, and not reference at all to the original subject upon which the original comment was made
I think I noticed what you changed? Or added? Oh well.
4903103 well...well i love boobs
4903457 I too, admire and appreciate the breasts present upon the female figure. Such endowment is apt to draw my gaze at unfortunate times, such as when said female is watching my eyes move. Such attentiveness on their part may result in surface trauma to either my right or left facial cheek, rendering a red, hand shaped mark.
4903466 That's some fucking deep shit man.
4903481 Nonsense good fellow! I believe it is a way of training the men to act appropriately in conversation!
On a side note, I cannot wait for the next chapter. I hope the author (Yes, I know you are reading this ) makes another story in this setting!
On a side note beside the first, can anyone point me to some somewhat lengthy stories along this line?
4903491 I have two in mind in the future, but I'm not sure which to go for first: A human teacher's aide helping Ms. Cheerilee in her classroom, or a human botanist (one that studies plants) that tries to win Rose Luck's heart with Zecora's help (and no, there isn't any freaky potions to go into this... I think, I'm not sure, I'm still trying to figure out some of the concepts).
And if you're looking for lengthy stories that are like this one, Sketchy Changeling's got some great ones.
I'm calling it right now! Solar Flare raped Shining
Yay! Threesome
The BEST part Was the "Guardians of the Galaxy" movie that Fleur WANTS to watch.
Guardians of the Galaxy was a fun movie to watch, though I can't help but feel little upset about Rocket's origin or specifically that he was actually part of an alien species that's looks like anthropomorphic animals or something like that or an alien species full of raccoon anthros, it's a little worrying to see that he could be from a real animal or something like that. Anyway is it really alright for Oz to pull her tail like that in public? Because her... reactions might be pretty bad or very noticeable depending on the situation.
LOL.GOTG. I knew that movie was going to be good because it had a Raccoon as one of the main characters. I never seen a bad movie or video game where the raccoon as one of the main characters.
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Plausible, but there's a significant snag to your theory, IMO: after Fleur caught her ex in bed with another mare and had that fight, She mentioned that she stayed with Shining after that, it is assuming that Shining wasn't even in the picture......therefore the evidence is that Shining wasn't the mare that was caught with Solar Flare.
But, again, it's my opinion, and we are only seeing it from Fleur's POV. However, All of the evidence of the assault and breakup, plus Shining's apparent dislike toward stallions and mares in general, and the frosty understanding between Fleur and Shining did lead to me that there is something significant that happened connecting Solar Flare, Shining, and Fleur.
I truly hope that it isn't the case that Solar Flare slept with Shining Star---especially if it wasn't of her own volition. ...But like the saying goes, if the shoe fits....wear it.
Damnit. This Guardians of the Galaxy is all anyone seems to talk about anymore yet I've never actually seen it advertised anywhere. Now it's invading my fanfiction.
4912827 You should watch it, It's hilarious.