Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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Aww... he walked home. Guess that means the nutshot wasn't delivered.
4871475 Rhino buddy, you like this fic too?
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
I am so upset right now. I'm getting mixed signals here, and you already said it wasn't going to be a harem, and I'd honestly like it to be with Fleur, because I can't seem to find any romance stories with Fleur, but god damn it. You couldn't settle with teasing Ozzy, no, you had to tease us too. Fuck. Ye wee bastahd.
4871475 Well, they didn't describe HOW he walked home..
Looks like Oz learned a valuable lesson: stopping a punch with one's face is not a good way to defend others.
Does Shining know martial arts? I kinda wish to see how she managed to beat the crap out of that guy. Anyhow, I like the way that Oz managed to influence Shining into dating again and the way that Oz interacted with the girls was heartwarming. As usual, the shipping between the three was enjoyable. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
4871475 If it makes his tears sweeter just imagine him waddling bowlegged. I did it and I got those warm fuzzy feelings.
4871620 Indeed I do, I have many fics I enjoy, I just don't comment on most.
Well this is curious I think we are having the reverse friend zone, I wonder how will those 2, take it when he say he think he is ready to date and a mare model in Fleur work asking and he think on consider it.
Well they are friends so I bet they will give them tips on how he can do on a date
4871898 I enjoy many fics too. I generally fav any fic that I read and enjoy. My fav list is over 1400. It is always kinda fun to see what kind of fics other people you know like to read.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
there is a mistake here just to point it out
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How's that?
4872082 excellent
Hey I've been meaning to ask, but what does it mean when a story's been in the featured box at least twice?
4872097 they like you they really really like you
4872142 Well I can see that, but how does the feature box work exactly? Like does it show the most increasingly viewed stories at the time, or what?
4872142 hey look, another Eon!
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Was actually correct, shiny was the one leaving, right?
4872147 it depends really I know if you get 15 like within the hour it goes to the popular section but for the feature maybe 50 to100 likes in 1 hour? Maybe?
4872977 he edited it and fixed it
4872082 I noticed that doesnt that make shining say goodbye to herself?
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What RDash22 said is what I'm talking about.
Shining is the one leaving, this causes her to say good bye too herself.
Beast
4873295 I had just realized that mistake, and boy did I had a brain fart after trying to make sense out of it. Just fixed it.
4873295 Eon, you are one 100% correct. She needs to be addressing Fleur and Oz, not Oz and Shining.
4872008 The earlier one, which you you said was wrong, was right. You misled the author.
4873569 damn thought it was fixed never mind. either way Dudeler fixed it
Well Ozzy I hope you Learn Something Today, but man Shinning really did kick some ass today.
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Well Self defense against a Unicorn would be easy enough. Just have to be fast enough to punch them in the horn before they can use their magic. At least that's what most fics so anyway. Hurt the horn and they can't use their magic due to the pain.
I have just one problem with this fic. I know it's been addressed before by others, but here it was really bad.
Oz talks too damn much.
When he was trying to talk to that stallion, I swear it took me right out of it. No one talks like that. I swear, the way he was talking made ME want to punch him.
I understand that since he's the main character and everything's from his perspective, you need him to give out your exposition and what not, but can you honestly see a guy trying to defend a girl's honor talking like THAT? Or that a big, aggressive stallion is just gonna stand there and listen to him monologue?
I dunno. I'm not gonna tell you how to write your characters. I just hope that it doesn't get this bad again.
4874355 Yeah I've gotten a few times where it seems like he preaches a lot, and I'll try to not make his exposition too long in future chapters. As for how he was talking, though he was impaired/drunk at the time, he got that kind of language for a reason that I'll reveal later on.
4874264 Not to mention that Sweetie did that to Rarity in "Ponyville Confidential". She flicked her on the horn and broke her concentration of the diary she levitated.
Lol
4875199 Actually, I think that was the school newspaper before the dirt on the rest of the town was dug up. Rarity found her own diary in Sweetie Belle's saddle bag once the news got out of hand.
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It's based on the statistics between the likes and faves of a story and once a story gets featured it'll appear again in the bottom three slots whenever it updates once it disappear from the main slots. Basically the last three slots are for whenever a featured story gets updated, which is why you'll see it on the front page again when you upload it.
This is the second time I've read a story about a woman chastising a man for trying to defend her from flirting men and starting fights. It's almost eerie how similar the situation is compared to both stories, but the difference being that the woman in the other story was telling him that she could have handle the situation herself because she has been doing this long before he came into her life, and if I was in that character's position I would have asked how it would've ended if I wasn't there. It's funny actually, that I noticed that the lesson that they both share is that girls don't appreciate their boyfriends starting fights to defend them. Which is actually a good lesson now that I've given a lot of time to think about. That violence is never a good response and that every encounter with the so called pick-up artists is always trying to get away as soon as possible. But the problem is figuring out when you're in a situation where you can't run or in a situation where you can run. I just know from these situations that the characters got into is that while their girlfriends or girls who are friends appreciate their concern for their well being, they don't appreciate starting fights for them by provoking or throwing the first punch, especially when there's a way to leave from this situation peacefully.
4933246 "Let's Jam"
Montage time!
You need an editor. Peace out.
5145036 Benny Hill show Music!!
"To Oz" TO OZ!
I can't have been the first one to think of this.
This is what Shining did to that jerk
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4874754 ok i hate stories where human is a little bitch i mean come on he really has to have her protect him that aint a man thats a little bitch
6350163 A man who sometimes has help from women is a bitch? You got some issues.
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It's shocking how many ignorant people still think like that in this day and age
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I don't think he meant getting help from a women makes him a bitch. What makes him a bitch is the fact that he couldn't handle himself in a fight. I don't care if he's ignorant of ponies abilities, letting himself get fucking haymaker'ed was the problem.
Your author notes have me laughing my ass off
*riiiing*
Hold on a second.
Hello?
*pause*
Yeah, I'll tell him.
*hangs up phone*
That was the Redundancy Department Bureau of Redundancy just now. They've awarded you third prize for Literacy Redundancy in Literature and Books.