Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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I hope Ozzy ends up with both of them. I don't think I'll be able to handle it if he doesn't.
My only complaint is that the clop felt stiff (also the warnings are really excessive looking, but that's just me).
And the complete fascination of Fleur with Oz's nipples was awkwardly humorous. XD
*sigh* I geuss you did alright with that masturbation scene. Still my definition of clop is him ramming into one of them while they grip him tight screaming with pleasure with their eyes rolled back and tounges hanging out of their mouths. But I expect youll have a full on clop scene later on. So for now ill just be patient. I actually had a rough day and was hoping at least one of my faves would update today. So thanks.
Griffons. Such wonderful creatures. They are the one ray of hope for meat to eat for any human's in Equestria.Truly, we'd be lost there without them with only eggs, vegetables fruits and sweets to eat.
Seventeen chapters of hinting and teasing and we finally get some clop.
And it's just a quick masturbation.
And yet I couldn't be happier because this story is just so damn good!
I think this story is awesome, but the whole having to give up meat thing is just dumb. The Equestrians already have to deal with carnivorous, and omnivorous races, so a human should not have to give up meat. Plus in a big city like Manehatton which most likely gets a lot of foreigner traffic, and Canterlot which most likely houses the foreign embassies, being able to find places that cater to such diets should be that difficult, or even farfetched.
Edit - Just finished reading. My point still stands though.
4979902 Well from what I can tell the writer hint that the MC and love interest are mono, meaning he might choose one. But that doesn't mean there's going to be a twist, honestly it's the writer choice on what happens to the MC, but still I have a feeling we might see the nightmares in the next chapter.
Fiiinally! After 17 chapters sonething that makes use of the sex and mature tags. And might I saw, what a nice way to finally use it.
The clop warning on a fic that has been marked sex and mature from the start is a little bit redundant.
So Shiny schlicks to Oz ey and Fleur wants a some more of the gropey group and maybe a little bit more.
Them all falling asleep in the same bed, fleur on one side and Shiny on the other, im gonna guess
Now that Shinys gonna wake up to Oz's hand groping her breast and fleur hugging the back of Oz as well.
Awesome job with the fic so far, now we are finally getting some sexy and mature tag travtion. Can't wait to see more.
Oh...oh my...
I've been holding off on deciding who Ozzy should be with in the end, but now I'm officially rooting for Shining to be the one that claims his heart.
I'm also going to bet that if Ozzy and Shiny do get together. Fleur will immediately volunteer herself to be the surrogate for their foals when they decide to start a family.
I'm curious how he'll wake up this time with TWO mares in his bed this time instead of one. :)
My feelings towards Puff Tie:
(Arin = Me, Sonic = Puff Tie)
I LIKE PIZZA !!!!!
Got to say that seeing Shiny horny from the tail tugs and Fleur bewitched by Oz' nipples was funny. The clop scene was hot and seeing Shining conversing with her id (the part of mind responsible for wanting to have sex) was funny, particularly with the way Shining fails to justify her denial of her feelings towards Oz when her id responds by reminding her of her fantasies and the way he made her more alive than even her time with Fleur. You know, seeing the chapter from the perspective of the girls was a great idea. I hope he next chapter comes soon as I want to see the girls realize their feelings for Oz.
So who thinks that was Discord egging Shiny on?
When something good happens to me I usually hear the "Hallelujah Chorus" From Handel's Messiah.
Everytime I see that this story updated!
LOVE THIS!! Keep it up, bro, and don't stop!
It was good to see things from Shining and Fleur's points of view.
I can honestly say I have had ode to joy play in my head before. I don't know who Ozzy should end up with, however I can see it will be a twist
I will go ahead and say this is getting interesting.
She's gonna need a towel and some febreze
4979969 And the nuts. Don't forget the nuts. That's another protein source.
Dear Dudeler.
First off let's just get this out of the way.
My immediate response represented by the great Bruce Cambell.
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And my answer to that is a surprising kinda. Although your writing does set the scene pretty well, I really think some more detail to the scene could ( and/or should) be added to make this a far more spicier dish. But as it stands, I can honestly say you most defiantly had me in a deep blush by the time I was done.
I do believe you meant , grow , dahling.
This...This, I dont' know what it was, perhaps it was the sweet gesture by Shiney, maybe you really have me thinking like Oz, or perhaps it's the musical accompaniment, but you, my good man, caused a tear to fall form my eye! And for that, I congratulate you.
Well dahling another chapter well done, and with a rather satisfying ending I might add. I look forward to your next installment.
Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.
4980836 You know what I just realized? Somehow I made eating a pizza more descriptive and beautiful than the clop scene...
4980897 I would say get your priorities in order, but if you were to just give me Oz enjoying a succulent T-Bone steak on the rare side, accompanied by an orchestral sound track, I would be just fine.
(Would you look at that, I've gone and gotten myself excited.)
This story continues to fail to disappoint. I don't even like anthro and I'm still enjoying this. Keep it up.
4979990
The fact that it was available would suggest they don't have to give meat up. Seems more like simply wanting to make the best impression possible. You don't accomplish that by making the people you're trying to impress uncomfortable. Not to mention the price of meat may well be prohibitively expensive in the capital of the herbivorous kingdom.
4980934 i couldn't have said it better myself
This was awesome!
I'm rooting for shining, since you have made the anti herd mentality super clear. I was fine with them not going for herds, butt man did you lay on the hate for them. Still, good stuff, my only other concern would be to have some time skips before they become too into it. A common falling in stories is word count vs time passed. Oz has only been with them for like a week? Yet both are falling for him. It feels a little different for us becuase we have all these things happening and heart to hearts, but it is still a little fast.
4980897
Nay. Pepperoni did that. You merely gave it an opening.
Oh~, pepperoni. You sexy, delicious bitch, you...
I really hope you'll let it end as a Fleur X Oz, cause I'm finding her character to be far mor enjoyable than Shining's (not saying that I don't like hers), and also you could add a lot more Drama for Fleur and Oz hooking up. You know, "Famous Supermodel dates random alien"-like.
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Dear Vision.
Now here are a couple reasons why I think there will be little to no time skips in the near future. One, Vogoe. If we are to assume anything from the interview scene it's that Mascara wants Oz, and I can't imagine her waiting too long to make her move on the poor sap, which will most likely lead to either of the two girls walking in on them, then it'll lead to a bunch of emotional business, that will lead to them confessing their love for Oz, and they will all live happily ever after just like in my dreams. Wow...sorry, lost myself there, anyways. Number two, the girls. Even though they are both aware that our darling Ozzy is not a stallion, that still doesn't damper the urge to try and find mate in him. Both the girls are falling for Ozzy and fast. Shinney a little more so ,while Flure is just starting to figure it out and it's been shown that this species are far more susceptible to their primal urges then anything we've (let alone Ozzy) seen on earth.
My apologies if I seem lecture-y or something, just wanted to give my two cents on the matter.
Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.
While she smirked, I groaned and later chuckled at the puniness of that sentence. Good Job
I didn't grew up in a very big city when I was younger | didn't grow up
That is the mistake I found, great development in Shining's case with the internal dialog!
4983925 Fixed, and thanks.
4979902 I have to agree; I really want to see Oz with both Fleur and Shining. If Dudeler decides to just go with one, though, I'm not really sure who I would want Oz to be with.
4983965 Wild guess here but did Puff Tie make the mistake that believed that Vouge only handled select and narrow group of cliental aka
the gorgeous and fit ?. Because your image of him seems make such shallow mindset quite possible. Or was it something else ?
4984892 You know, I haven't really thought about it. But remember that Brushstroke mentioned that Puff Tie's designs not only fit a narrow clientele, but they were also uncomfortable looking, AND can't make heads or tails of what kind of dresses they are, like a camisole or a gown.
I'd also like to think that because Shining had a different type of body while she and Puff Tie dated, the latter had a different idea on what beauty was, and was only going out with the former because she fit the bill enough to model his designs. Basically, he may or may not have a different concept of beauty back then, but his perspective in the current time doesn't fit in with the majority of the population, and companies like Vogue. Plus, after getting the message from one of the best designers that was read aloud by his ex will certainly have him questioning his abilities for designing for quite some time, enough that will drive him insane.
Well I just finished reading all the chapters and I must say I'm impressed. I can't wait to see the CEO of the company hunt down oz only to be rescued by a red faced and puffy tailed Fluer and shining. I hope that Luna will help oz with his nightmares. Man I also can't wait for those two to go into heat and seduce/scare the shit out of oz. That's going to be hot and funny as hell. By the way Shining rules. Fluers cute to but I like shinings cute little twitches. Anyways I'm favoriting this, very good story.
Shiny has a bit of a split personality that I think Oz should be wary of, but at least she has it under her control. ^^; The way she was talking to herself made me imagine the whole conversation as a visual novel with a shadow or sexy version of Shiny talking to her about this stuff.
Anyway, I hope the girls can hold out on telling how much they love him before a few more weeks has passed, even though it seems like everyone is hit with a "love at first sight" spell. Also I hope Cadence doesn't catch wind on this and try to use her spell without knowing that there are 2 mares after Oz.
4986857 Don't worry, Cadence won't appear.
4987785
That'll be too random even if she showed up.
Still the best author
good in this chapter I am very confused because even read all the chapters do not understand who is the principal here or if oz or if fleur or shiny or possibly all 3 together also saw some mistakes but put them in the comments so I decided not to comment on them
4988319 Oh please, I'm not the best author.
Another wonder chapter. Thanks.
Since your anthros marenips only show themselves through their coat when chilly or aroused, I can guess stallions have them like human guys too, they just never show themselves off, hidden in all that hair.
First allow to me to say kudos on incorporating Beethoven into your work. (And for using Strauss and Tchaikovsky in the waltz scenes!) For that and much more, you get the upvote from me! Honestly, I thought you would have gone with Handel's 'Messiah' in this chapter, but I love such surprises! Keep up the fine work!
Ugh...
How is that a thing?!