Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
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Should have...sent...a poet...
I... I don't even have words to describe how much I loved this chapter.
HA, what'd I tell ya D-Man, featured!
[Appleseed intensifies]
Heheheh, I'm happy that things are going good.
Anxiously awaits inevitable threesome
Can't wait till shiny introduces him to pegging
CUE THE 80s PORN MUSIC!
After the sex Fleur noticed she had left the laptop turned on. But just as she was about to shut it off, Ozzy tells her to play this.
I'm guessing that the trial of the, *ahem* Rapist Mascara is the next chapter, or do you have a surprise for us?
5554603
What's that?
5555072 Basically one of the girls putting a strap-on on, and ****** Ozzy in the ass.
5555157
Ah. Not exactly my kink, but ok.
So far this has been really good however sir I will have to disagree in the song choice.
You could've used trumpets instead, but otherwise great chapter.
5555284 5555365 I don't know, there just weren't a lot of songs that fit the steamy, yet romantic setting I wanted between the two of them, and the artist suggested to me seemed to fit the bill. The band that made "Pour some sugar on me," Chris Brown, Akon, Rihanna, they all just seem 'in your face' kind of songs that either have filthy language and/or loud, thumping instrumentals.
That may just be my preference of music making the bias, but I'm very picky picking songs that fit the mood. That's just my opinion though.
Well, the link to the song didn't work, so I had to take an ultimatum. Which ended up being Godsmack - I hate you, so that was fun.
5554603
Right in the feels.
Five out of five moustaches!
5555425 It is your story, after all. So go crazy on it, we're not forcing you to add things we like into it.
God, reading my last comment made me feel harsh...
Dudeler, This and the last chapter were amazing. It's nice to see that it's not just sex between them. That what they're doing is actually an act of love. It was well done, and I felt that you've really expressed the personalities that you've cultivated through the story so far. Seeing Ozzy open up like he has establishes that it's not just sex, and not just for Fleur and Shining either. It's something deeper for him. He's building a connection with the both of them. Seeing that they compliment him very well, and that he's fine with it. I almost expect to some some 'Big Love' references as I'm reading this.
What strikes me is that being with them is healing him. The hurt he's had in his life is slowly being healed, and even the event with Mascara is being healed. We can see evidence of that with how he's acting with both of them. I applaud you, and I look forward to the next installment.
I take this story as if it's you on a mixtape.
This mixtape is fire. Make more chapters
5556829 I take it that's a compliment?
5556247 Thanks! What you described was pretty much what I was going for, and Ozzy helping the girls out with their own problems too. Shining's problem with stallions being one for example. I want to make these kinds of stories as real as possible, while at the same time not so cheesy. So hearing how the three are really connected assures me that I'm doing something right. Hope you guys will enjoy the rest of the story!
5556951
Take it like this...
If this story were a mixtape.
I would have bought every copy dropped, because it's amazing.
I love you
Aww. That was sweet, that date. Ooh~, and now they're coming home. Can't wait to see where thi-
... ... ... ... ... ... ...
... ... fucking ow, man!
you know i've never really been a fan of herding, i've seen it ruin many good stories but so far you're pulling it off quite well. now we wait for the inevitable threesome
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stay classy
5559012 I agree with ya. There are few stories where herding does not ruin the plot.
5555157 pls tell me that wont happen. *shivers at the thought*
The more they're happy, the more I fear something reaaaaaaly bad will happen
By the way, it was awesome, as usual ;)
5559682 Who knows?
5560955
*shivering intensifies*
Just a heads up, the video with the music doesn't exist anymore.
5561310 It's working fine for me for some reason. Are you talking about a music video?
5561782 Ah. Yeah, not THAT accurate of Peoria, at least to my knowledge. Hasn't come up in the news at all or anything, anyway. It's mostly due to Chicago, though I'm not naive enough to think no drug dealing happens here. It just isn't exactly a hot-spot. XD (Unless it's really, REALLY well-hidden, in which case there wouldn't be reports of deaths and whatnot. Still, it's just fiction. It's not like I take offence to it or anything. I was excited to see someone else live near here if anything else, though it did get someone else to comment, so that was awesome.)
Thanks for replying, btw.
5561833 No problem. And if you're wondering, I live in the Pacific Coast side of the states.
Heil Francia's fleur de lys
5562099 What?
5562153
praise the fleur
5561721 yes, when I click it I come to a video by Prince – Ämne witch read Lion Of Judah.
and with a closer look I can,t see any of the videos from this channel.
could you say what song it is and the name of the band so I can try to find an alternative.
5563019 The song is "Lion of Judah" by Prince.
5563029 just to be sure is this the right one because I seem to find a bunch of songs that is named Lion Of Judah
5563211 Nope. It's this one.
5563296 Yeah I can't see that one and I am beginning to suspect that this is a country restricted video even though I live in Sweden.
EDIT: I found a way get around the block so it is ok now.
5563337 Huh, I'm not sure why this artist is blocked in your country, but I guess there's some strange rules that we don't understand sometimes.
Another marvellous chapter, as always. Excellent writing, good sir.
Good day to you.
*tips fedora and vanishes in a puff of smoke*
5564865 To be fair, I SHOULD have figured out that all of the hints were real hints, and not just setting up for ironic interruption. And I had read both chapters a couple hours ago, but didn't have time/internet to comment. I was able to figure out for Fleur that they wouldn't get interrupted. XD
I will now assume from now on that it won't be marked, so I'll just skip it on my own, and/or have a friend tell me the key phrase/paragraph to skip from and to in order to skip it.
Speechless. I am without speech. Well done, good sir. Well done!
wow just bucking wow I need a cold shower after the last too chapters.
Ha ha! I finely caught up. And one thing crosses my mind, there are not enough drama gifs for this story.
No clop warning? Hey man, Just a suggestion for later chapters that may contain such events. Leave a warning noting that the further a reader goes, they will end up reading through a section of clop material.