The timber queen

by RavenFire2908

what happend?

Twilight and Applejack was walking toward Sweet apple acers. Applejack had her head low all the way, thinking 'why? why did he cursed me?' Applejack snapped out of her toughts, a smell, Apple fritters. Applejack loved them especially when Granny made them.

''Applejack? something is wrong'' twilight said getting her attention.

''what?! no... nothing is wrong. why do you ask?''

''well you have been so silent'' twilight put her hoof on AJ's sholder. she knew something was wrong but AJ did't want to tell for some reson.

''I-I... no... I can't tell, sorry Twi.'' she said closing her eyes and let te Word get in.

''you can tell, I wont tell. I pink-'' she was cut of by somthing covring her mouth. a hoof.

''Twi, I just told you. I cant tell. If I do I put you, all of you in danger. I wont tell enyway'' Applejack said lifting her head to meet Twilight's eyes.

Twilight removed AJ's hoof. ''But mabye I can help you, if you just tell. everything will be okay.'' Twilight's Words was good to hear, but if they knew, they wolud be in danger, the timbewolf would take them to get to her.

''sorry Twi, I just can't.'' she said running home. leaving Twilight on the road.

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later that night she could not sleep. why? she was thinking. or discussting With herself 'what if they found out, my life will be destroyed.' 'but they have a right to know.' 'Yeah I know... but everyone will fear me, I don't want that'.

'' Mom, Im not leaving you!'' filly Appljack screamed to her dying mother.

''Applejack, run! you are not safe here. Get home before you get hurt. do it for me. Promise me that.'' her mother said, almost whispering. it hurt. her back, belly and Three legs had green glowing scars. they was attacked by a pach of timberwolfes when AJ and her mother was out in the east Field picking Apples.

''No mom, Im not leaving you. and you ar not leaving this world.'' Applejack said hugging her mother's cheek.

''how cute. A filly's dying mother asking to be left.'' a strange voice come from behind.

''leave her alone, she has don nothing to you!'' applejack's mother yelled at the pony. taking Applejack in her armes, protecting her.

''why would I hurt her, my army have just killed her mother.'' the voice come closer. showing its body. ''my son would need a bride at one point, only a tiny scare would do it.'' he said getting awful Close.

''dont you dare touch her.'' her mother was getting angry. real angry. (she could kill, if her Family as in danger).

Applejack was dead sceard. hugging her hurt mother.

the timberpony smiled at her. ''a mommy's girl.'' at that point a lime green Magic surrounded Applejack and lifted her out of her mothers armes.

'' NO!!!'' Her mother screamed. she was to weak to stand up.

''Mom'' applejack screamed out in fear. a large shadow came over her. she looked behind her and saw the huge timberpony having a large grin on his face. he lifted his claw to her chin drawing it Down her side. Applejack was sceard. he dug the claw into the side of her belly. Applejack screamed out. in pain. the scare was not that big. but it hurt.

Applejack fell to the ground only to see the timberpact walking away, she got to her mother. and hugged her.

''Apple...Jack I-I lov... yo...''her mother said before closing her eyes and stop breathing. she was dead.

''No... Mom, dont leave. Plis... I-I need you. Plis'' she cried, digging her head into her Cold fur. Applejack cried. she did't know how long. it colud have been houers.

''Applejack!, Honey!'' a pony screamed. Applejack did't want to hear the voice but she was glad she did.

''over here!'' she yelled back, not knowing were the sound came from.

''Applejack, there were have yo-'' it was her father and Mac. they ran right over to them as soon as they saw the dead body.

''what happed?'' Her father screamed picing up applejack, he notice the scar on her side. ''Timberwolf?''

Applejack nodded. Mac was in shock to to see his mother dead on the ground. he was speechless.

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*knock, Knock*

came from the door.

''come in'' Applejack said sobbing, th terreble memory, haunting her.

Mac opend the door, he looked at her wit 'sorry' in his eyes. he knew what she was thinking of. (Mac has the ability to read ponies like an open book.)

''Aj? where was you last night? I saw you leave'' he asked sitting dow on her bed.

''I-I... you know?'' she asked looking at him.

''I saw you last night, but I thought it was a nightmare.''

''well since you know, you remember when Ma died?'' applejack said looking out the window. into the forest.

''Eeyup'' he said nodding slowly.

''the scar I got on my side that day, he cursed me. Sorry Mac. I did't want this to happend either.'' she looked at him With sorry eyes.

''It's not you foult, but what about the pup?'' he asked looking at her.

''the pup. I dont know, I Guess they come to me when they need me.'' she was not sure it that was it or. the timber Prince just wanted to get her there.

Mac nodded '' well, good night, see you in the moring.'' he said walking out of the room.

Applejack laid down on the bed.

''why did it have to be me?'' she asked out loud.

she closed her eyes and fell into a deep sleep.

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Twilight sat up in her bed, thinking ''why can she not say it?'' she tought she was thinking it but instead she said it out loud.

''I dont know Twilight, maybe you can ask again in the morning, the clock is 22:48 go to bed...'' spike growled at her.

''ops, sorry I will.'' she said closing her eyes and drifting of to sleep.

Author's Note:

I dont know... I hope you like this if not.... Deal With it. I like it. and I will try to get better. I have other storys to (that is not out) and I hope I will get them better as they come. but enjoy so far... >.<

Comments

[Sea_Swirl]

I really like it except for the grammar issue is totally bugging me like... A lot but not enough to drive me away. Keep up the good work!

[RavenFire2908]

4895097 thanks I am trying my best to keep a good grammar, but it is not easy to Write on a pc that say everthing is wrong, cause it is English. my pc is Norwegian and only Write on that Norwegian.

[shenadri]

4895127 yo pal, if you want i can proofread or correct this... that if it is ok with you

[RavenFire2908]

5025554 okey...

[shenadri]

5025668 pm me and give me a g doc or something so i can help you out

[Star Brush]

I like this idea A LOT! but I couldn't read it because there is just to many obvious mistakes. I mean small things like not capitalizing a name is fine, but some of these mistakes are really just irking me.

[RavenFire2908]

5413959 sorry, when I get the idea back I will rewrite it... I think... I hope... Yeah...

[Dillmccathron]

Wow I'm in shock you cancel the story i hope you write more of this story please it's getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update more soon