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Star Soar always knew he was different, he could never figure out how. He finally finds the how out, by getting his cutie mark. But what could be the best day ever, turns into an emotional rollercoaster. Now Star soar has to struggle with his feelings and the feelings of those around him to figure out what type of pony he's meant to be. A cutie mark is supposed to tell you your direction in life, your destiny. What do you do when your destiny is socially unnacceptable?
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Time out! The picture is a guy?!
Yep, the point was to make him have feminine kind of features already. a kind of gender ambiguous colt. he was delt a favourable hand by fate.
You wrote in third person for a moment there. Just thought you should know
4773151
Really? Where?
I like it.
Quick Question though, Do you have an editor?
I ran across a few things , that aren't very distracting but I'd be happy to help you out.
4775389
I'll PM you a link to the docs on google.
no, i don't have an editor... But I'd be happy to let you do it.
4773297 here
The vest looked brilliant, it complimented his color scheme perfectly. He was sure that it looked great, just on somepony else. It just didn’t feel right, it wasn’t meant for him. Sweetie Belle must have seen this on his face, because she grew nervous.
4775762
Fixed! Thank you!
I don't comment a lot, but you should probably know this story is really touching to me. There's not enough stories about trans mares that aren't fetishistic in nature, and as a trans woman myself, I appreciate the tone you took when approaching the topic. Thank you.
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Also, thank you very much for the follow!
Well, I'm glad that I did something right. Lets hope I don't goof it!
so....... how will they handle school?
I can only imagine what will happen. Cheerlie will either kick him out or let him keep going to school and then there's Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. oh no no no no NOOOOOO!!!!!!! traps Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. grabs bow and loads with arrows somepony give me a reason to shoot them!
4780107
Youll just have to wait and see.
You'll excuse me if I don't instantly forgive him. Hitting your child and flinging them out of the family isn't exactly "sorry, panicked" material for me. Maybe he'll make it up, though, who knows.
4780614 can I still shoot these two? points to Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon
4781293
Yeah. Hes not entirely off the hook. Id say hes in the doghouse for a 2hile, hes gonna grow quite close to the couch.
4781961
At least wait till they do the bad thing, I mean.... innocent until proven guilty, right?
4782034 but if I shoot them now it'll prevent the bad thing! and they already did enough to Sweetie, Applebloom, and Scootalo. I really hate them!
4785892
Dont shoot them, they still have a role in he story to fulfill. Once im done iwht them, do whatever you want.
4785909 fine
releases the two fillies but don't forget I'll come back for them and when I do they better be locked up in a cage. flies away angrily
I love it, can't wait for the next chapter.
This is very well written, I can't wait for more. The subject of transitions for a pony is a very difficult subject to write, and to see it playing out well so far is impressive. You have a thumb, a sub and a fav from me ;p
I hope to see more story's around such controversial subjects from you in the future
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Oh, well im flattered! Im... not sure if I'll make any other controversial topics... I know identity is usually a big thing. Not so much about controversial topics. Ill see about it though! Wouldnt want to dissappoint!
NOW can I shoot Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon?
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no, im not done with them yet! They have a fairly important part still! Even if it is just an epilogue.
4946618 OH COME ON! I WANT TO SHOOT THEM!
It's rather silly to react with violence and isolation when you fear for your safety instead of standing up for ponies who are different.
Losing to this foolish dream,
the light your grasp escaped.
Oh what a cold night;
yourself made to falter,
a pain so vile and dear.
We shall read on.
Oh my gosh, you just made Diamond an Emily
The spoiled girl is actually well versed in LGBT matters!
Foolish you stand in your blackness.
Ever so clearly, others gaze
upon that wonderful bliss,
so dearly and well.
How ever blind,
your innocence sharp and rust!
Children of the ephemeral day;
treacherous so is this path you choose.
Awaiting further releases.
Sometimes I hate how modern society has different meanings for the same word.
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I dont like how similar meanings are perceivedmas the same meaning, rather than their own meaning.
I realized today that this fic has made me rethink my sexuality
4994761
I should either be saying, im glad, or sorry... im not sure which.
4994892 I'm not sure either
4948955
Okay, I'm done with them. Well... for this story at least. Do as you wish.
5001326 YES!!!!! FINALLY I CAN SHOOT THEM! traps Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon in a cage. pushes cage into basement now I have some business to attend to so don't bother and if it's important please knock first. enters basement and locks door hehe
What an interesting development. It's a pity much character development is yet to be done.
A dream so sweet holds firm
little ponies of day,
that the night may not fall sharp
nor blunt or cold upon this wonder;
that no lie shall taint this bliss.
Excellent work, dear Author!
I hope the story continues.
5002450
well, as I said, there will be a new story wih them. I have the first real chapter up, but theyre not in it yet. Its my story I just got approved called "perspectives."
Yep all the apprenticeships make sense to me. A great ending over all.
5003825
thank you, I was hoping it would. I never thought id grow to love this story as much as I have. It was jst a tiny idea I didn't expect to earn this much attention, now it's mymost popular story.
5002469
We'll be looking forward to the continuation then.
4780107 There are already plenty of reasons. Please feel free to go ahead
5218092 You're a little too late for that i already shot them. i made sure it was long and painful.
....................there is definitely something wrong with me. Oh well!!
~reads the first two words then comes down to comment~ you're going to make me feel bad for Stars father aren't you?
EDIT: nope, good for you. This doesn't excuse his actions and I really hope he gets used to that couch because he's going to be there for a while.
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No, just a little more understanding.
4944683 after reading this chapter, for the first time in a long time, I don't want to see them hurt.
Okay so just finished reading and here is my review.
The flow of the story was rather rapid, and could have been slowed down in some places, allowing for more detail and way more character building. You still managed to pull it together in a way that it didn't devolve into utter nonsense though.
I personally liked the idea of having the father being a bigot and to see that change kind of disappointed me. It's not that I like to see good characters get hurt, but I think it would be more realistic than to have 2 of the 3 opponents change their minds on the subject. I can almost understand the father doing a 180, however, but Applejack seemed to turn around way too quickly, going from being firmly opposed to anybody who was different to suddenly being attracted to Rainbow Dash. I love a good dash of apple myself, but in the context of the story there should have been a lot more internal conflict on the part of Applejack before asking Rainbow to be her marefriend.
I really like Star and the way she came to her cutie mark, but I feel there could have been more character building on her part. The other characters have their established canon to assist the story but we know so little about Star.
On the positive side, you told a really good story. The grammar was almost spotless, the characterizations made sense in the scheme of things, and I had fun reading it. All in all, I give this story 4 out of 5 pinkies
5223007
The pacing bothered me a bit too.
5222864 ...............WHY?!?!
5223548
I'm actually with them on this. Not for the sole fact she plays an interesting dynamic and common plot point for both this story and its sequel, but because she is growing as a character. And I'm starting to soften for the bully.
Great story I love it
I LOVE this story