Title changed from The Lunar Family.
Artemis, husband of Luna and father of Moonlight, is out on one of his midnight walks when comes across a little pegasus colt named Moon Dust who is badly hurt. After finding out what happened to the little one, Artemis takes him in and vows to take care of him. Follow the Lunar Family as Moon Dust adapts to his new life and tries his best to trust other ponies again. Please leave positive comments and constructive criticism on what you think about the story.
Warning: Story will contain tender moments. Some that might have you shed a few tears. Please take this word of caution.
This is based off an RP I did with NightmareEclipse on deviantart.com. Cover art is a picture NightmareEclipse drew. I do not own the My Little Pony characters, and some OC's were NightmareEclipse's ideas.
Age Regression might show in later chapters. Rated Teen to be safe.
Those FUCKERS
HOW THERE THEY BREAK A LITTLE COLTS LEGS
ill be in the corner
4520827 Don't worry, those caretakers get what they deserve for such cruelty.
Dawwwwwwwww
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Oh my Celestia!!!
Night-Mist this is one of the few fanfics that has ever made me cry! Please for the love of fimfiction keep this up, its well written, its clever and its emotion provoking. Now if you excuse me, I am gonna find some tissues
Your Fellow Brony
Tornado Blitz
Love your work mate!
4545224 I'm sorry it made you cry. I better warn people tender moments will be in the story.
I Draco Greyhelm pledge my sword to the lunar family.
Such Dawws shall be protected
And such evil shall be repaid ten fold.
4549204 I like where your heart is at. Tough time deciding on where your head is at. lol. Just kidding. Thanks for your comment. your heart is definitely in the right place.
Hm, apart from a grammar that needs a polish it's a nice story.
But take in mind your pacing, it's a bit rushed if you ask me.
btw, do you have a pre-reader? Always helps having one or two.
4584799 I don't have a pre-reader at this time, and I am trying to keep the pacing from being too rushed, since this is based of an RP I did with a friend.
>Artemis, husband of Luna
luna married her r63 self?....
4775441 Well, technically his name is Artemis Eclipse, so, I don't think that actually constitutes him as Luna's r63 self. Plus he dwarfs Celestia in sheer size with both height and muscle. That tiny little pony in the cover photo is my OC and the giant one nuzzle in him is Artemis, so you you can see he easily out does Luna in size.
4775449 that's kinda what happens when you take a character of 1 gender of a physically sexually dimorphic species and and change them to the other gender :l .....
course it's usually not done to this extent.....
4775515 So, is there actually any problem with this set up?
4775522 no....
4775531 Well, I hope you read future chapters for this story.
I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Wait why didn't take him the hospital to get his leg check
5256349 You'll find out when I get the next chapter up.
I hate freeze spells *Shivers* Nice chapter. Can't wait to see how the two siblings interact.
Awwww that cover art :)
5683366 The tiniest one in the photo is Moon Dust in case you were unaware. Hope you like the story so far.
5683376 yep I think the size difference between the adults and kids just makes them look cuter
5683389 Too true.
I loved it, I wish there was more because this was adorable.
Great chapter :)
*Flies off to look as well with a poof of smoke*
5256349 I can honestly say I was wondering the same thing.
So, is this story dead or not?
6857266 It's still alive. I just needed time to recharge the battery. I should have more chapters out soon for all my stories.
6857669 Awesome, looking forward to them
Great chapter now normaly i would question age regression but you told it was needed but why the cousins too?
6939578 Mostly so they can all stay relatively around the same age. Just to point out, Blueblood will not be affected by the regression.
6939613 ah, cool now i get and thank you for not including blueblood in it by the way your blueblood is actually a good guy
6939624 Well, I'd like to be open minded and see some more character development on him, and not just judge him on that one episode. But I don't have my hopes too high for change.
6939650 well i see you do bring a good point on the subject, their could be a number of reasons for blue blood being a complete wuss like take the way the author of my name is floyd damn took blueblood's reason why he did what he did
*sits in corner* Why am i alive?
6979642 What's wrong?
6980291 Life.
I hope you update soon, this story is too good
Good chapter, Moon Dust is a good colt.
Good chapter.
Get some rest Nighty, you need it, my night though has just begun.
Sight*
Mmmmm the amout of pony joke is hilarious
Also, MOAR
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EEP!!! My bad. Will fix.
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Need a quick editor? As in just checking for simple rhings like that
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Hey, sometimes my hooves, er, hands don't type what my mind thinks. And the fact it wasn't misspelled doesn't help matters.
It’s ok, something happens to me on my computer, like I spell until as untill
Oh
I found this one again!
The image is the bes!
Yes! A new Chapter
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Indeed.