An Interesting Child

Fluttershy was always a mother to the animals she cared for. Always helping other ponies when they're in trouble, putting aside her own fears to help them. But a chance meeting with an injured foal may be her hardest challenge she could ever do.

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Nova Blaze

Nova Blaze #1 · Apr 20th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1 (Re-edited) ·

This is a little better than before. Looking forward to more.

pvzMLP

pvzMLP #2 · Apr 20th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1 (Re-edited) ·

7144374 Yeah. It turns out moving fast between tabs while editing a story can result on a delete option.......I think you get what happened

Comment posted by Sonic Rainboom Dash deleted Apr 26th, 2016

Glamurina_Vibes

Glamurina_Vibes #4 · Apr 27th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2 ·

"hE IS NOt mEanT tO Be HeRE. hE wILL RuIN tHis wORld. He MuSt nOT LiVE."

well damn, not even five chapters and flare already has haters lol
nice story btw :)

pvzMLP

pvzMLP #5 · Apr 27th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2 ·

7162970 All will be explained in due time.

Conflicting views

Conflicting views #6 · Apr 27th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I always laugh whenever I read a story with the pony health care system not being free.
Equestria, the land of friendship, where the biggest villain get second(s) chance(s) and where you gotta pay to get medial help...

Anyway, decent chapter, even if I think your protagonist is going along far too easily, no denial, no conflict...

Synthetic Soul

Synthetic Soul #7 · Apr 28th, 2016 · 3 · 1 · Chapter 2 ·

A child is a big difference from an animal.

Not as far as I'm concerned

pvzMLP

pvzMLP #8 · Apr 28th, 2016 · 2 · · Chapter 2 ·

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Synthetic Soul

Synthetic Soul #9 · Apr 28th, 2016 · 2 · 1 · Chapter 2 ·

7166562 That wasn't really a proportional response...

Texus

Texus #10 · Sep 25th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2 ·

;r&f&g/j(´ P.O.V
"hE IS NOt mEanT tO Be HeRE. hE wILL RuIN tHis wORld. He MuSt nOT LiVE."

hhhmmmm I think I have enough of those adoption storys I prefer, to give this a chance.

I mean I never really know what to expect if storys like this start to get mystical. In some storys the bonding moment's suffer because of that, but I give it a fair chance, till now it is good enough.

Viper Pit