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DerpyStarlet


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Rarity needs to help Lyra prepare for her first date. Lyra needs to figure out what love is.

Written for The Abyss's cute one shot competition
Edit: OHMYGOSH! Second place! EEEE! Thank you so much, The Abyss!

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I really like this story! It just turns to the unexpected I find :D And the cover art was amazing!

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I'm really glad you like it. I wasn't all that confident in my ability to write a romance... but I think I did a pretty good job.

:moustache: Rarity why is she looking at me like that?
:duck: It's nothing at all Spikey
Her eyes were riveted to his movements -every where a clawed hand went so did Liras gaze, wiggling his claws Lira closed in staring at the digits, her eyes wider than Opals in a hunt for her toy mouse , Spike slowly backed away she turned step by step inch by inch her eyes hungrily following the fingered prey. . .
:raritywink: Lira? Lira! RUN SPIKEY ! RUN!

:moustache: Help me . . .Rarity. . .Twilight !...................................Anypony!

:raritystarry: ???!!! :twilightoops:!!!!!!!!!!

:facehoof: It's the hands. Silly hands

:raritywink: Of course Twilight:moustache:

Insert obvious song joke here.==>
<==No wait, here.

awww, this is sweet, i feel sorry of lyra date though, but nice story, i like reading rare Rarity pairing stories :)

This story is pretty freakin' amazing. Love it.

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. I wasn't really sure about my ability to write romance at first, but I feel a lot more confident about it now. Thank you all!

I was expecting the date was just an excuse to date Rarity. Cute fic.

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