I, Leandra and my older brister (Sister that's more like a brother), Nyssa, were skimming through the internet when we got a email from a GodofChaos@gmail.com showing a link to a new video. We were listening to Vocaloid at the time, so we clicked the link, without thinking twice. Next thing we knew, we were being sucked into our computer. And then we were falling from the sky.
I don't know what's going on, but now I'm Rin and Nyssa's Len, and we're in Equestria.
I know it's just me and my brister now, but I have a feeling that there might be more people coming along soon. (More Vocaloid Characters!!!)
Note: I also wanted to label this Comedy, but I reached the 6 Categories Limit
Note:.originally belonged to Pixel Berry98, but now belongs to me, DerpyStarlet.
hmm... I will be honest, the story has potential but feels a bit rushed. You may wanna slow the speed down a notch or two. Now as to your OC's interactions they are quite amusing. A bit of polish and i think this can become a fine story
Idont know if it matters much... but for the sake of the story I would like to point out the physicality of my gender, that is to say I am a male in body. I have no problems however with female pronouns, so... use them as you wish.
4730610 So, your a male in a female's body? Odd, but creative. I'll make sure of that.
Ok sir or madam thou must cease old English terms immediately here is a list to help you out. Thee - same as 'you' (object) e.g. We praise thee, O God.
Thy - same as 'your', - Thy name shall be praised.
Thine - same as 'yours' - Thine is the kingdom
Thou - same as 'you' - Thou shalt be great
Ye - same as 'you' plural - Ye shall inherit the earth.
Though - short for 'although' - Though you betray me, I will still love you.
Notice how none of these words mean the just a little tip now everything else has been very interesting up to this point but please fix Luna's vocab using this list. Otherwise thy story shall parish. Keep writing btw this story amuses me
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This was as well disturbing me, thank you.
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Well, no. My body is male, but female in mind. Just continue using female pronouns, id prefer it. Please and thank you. Unless you mean in the story... in which case it gets more confusing... that would be a female mind in the mentality of a male inhabiting a female body warring wih what is me and what isnt. Which equates to terrible identity confusion, so lets not go there just yet.
4736178 okay then!
4734150 Thanks for the list. I'll fix it as soon as I can.
I.....absolutely bucking love you for writing this! I love vocaloid! OTAKU POWERS HAVE FINALLY COMBINED WITH BRONY POWERS MAKING BROAKU POWERS!
You have done it....you my friend...successfully made pinkie break the 4th wall! *Claps are heard* o3o
Madgod....has no words......but. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Hmm... Nyx... interesting story element. How old, exaxtly, is Nyx at this point? About the crusaders age? Or maybe a little younger...
Hooray! More Nyx!
nyx is best pony!!!
Dude I'm loving this more and more! When I first saw that this was going to have vocaloid I was excited and when I saw u added Nyx to the mix got me even more excited and now I'm more exited to see what will happen next!!! Keep it up my friend!!
Hints for the future! I hope to appear soon!
This appearance wa brought you by The Shiviring Isles, where madness blossomes
Madgod approves except for one thing.......1 i WILL NEVER run for fun. Too much work. Its better spent gaming like well MAD
Dang, so close. I hope my character comes in soon! Fun times ahead, allonsy!
4802098 Kamui is waiting for you to join his madness o3o
4802167 it would be a while, considering Kaito didn't end up anywhere near ponyville. Check a little farther north.
4802177 Kamui will hunt you down then. When he finds you he will show his manly femine charms
Yay, I enter!
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Except for one thing. Its not too much work. Kamui is a samurai, meaning trained for rigorous exercise. Running is childs play for him, therefore childs play for you.
I will be luka, logicalist and group buzzkill. Im he only not crazy one, and thars only by chance of neutrality.
4802575 ........why do I feel like my character has been hijacked? He is a gamer, Not a swordsman v-v plus he is only crazy when bored....otherwise he is quiet and keeps to himself (hes anti-social unless bored or excited [see my chapter for these] but he usually doesn't care what goes on as long as he can game)
4802575 Not necessarily true. Kaito's a pretty down to earth guy, just one who usually chooses the fun ways of life! As they say, 'why so serious?' Better to just lay back and let life take you where it wants to. That's the way to do it.
o3o
And then there will be five! Can't wait!
KAITO! IT'S FRIGGIN KAITO! HE'S… gonna get sent to the dungeon? Uhh. I have no words.
4807488 Madgods drug storage ran out 10 mins in.....
4807704 Pfft i don't need drugs to entertain myself for a million years! Isn't that right Cthulu? Now lets play some D&D!
*Cthulu looks at madgod* ...help me...
4808165 No, ill help play with you *uses tentacle as lasso* THIS. NEEDS. MORE........CHOCOLATE RAIN! *discord appears making it so. I snap my fingers making it rain cats*
Troll XD o3o
Pixel, while I'm very happy about this chapter (thank you for the shout out LSBBF), you forgot the link to the song I strummed. Can't wait to see what happens next.
4816546 You didn't really tell me what song it was or sent me the link, and if you did but I just didn't see it, I'm sorry
woot!
INTRODUCTIONS COMPLETE!!!!!! YAHA!
Herself, if you would please. And it was my pleasure. Can't wait to see more! I'd especially like to see some noncanon chapters from others, such as...
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you sheogorath
And others too, like DJ. And you as well, Pixel. Really, from anybody.
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You know, I just realized. You know who says why so serious? The joker, and he's crazy.
4840443 Customer assistance: Transferring now, please hold...
Sheogorath: YAHA! I AM MADGOD! FEEL MY CHEESEY RAIN!
customer: Um......ok? I was wondering why my-
Sheogorath: FISHSTICKS SOLVE ALL!
Customer- What do fishsticks ha-
Sheogorath: MILK BREAK! I DECLARE MILK BREAK! DISCORD! GIVE US SOME CHOCOLATE MILK RAIN!! LOTS AND LOTS OF COTTON CANDY FILLED JELLY DONUTS TOO! YAHA! GODZILLA DESCENDS FROM THE SKY TO EAT ALL THE MILKSHAKES!
Customer: *hangs up*
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I dont see wjat this has to do about you writing a noncanon chapter, but I like your enthusiasm.
4840630 wait...we were talking about non-cannon chapters?
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i was. i was saying ylou should write one, because i look forward to seeing one.
4840930 all you said was...oh wait XD you combined it never mind, I was having a moment
4840930 Well, I am actually working on chapters for my story "As told by Sheogorath: Madness is Magic!" I actually just published a chapter too! So I may be unable for a while.
4768374 I went deaf form the clapping
4840983 <-< Good. Mission accomplished.
NYX FTW