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DerpyStarlet


Winners eat sand

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Enjoying it so far, keep on!

5570983
im going to, but I haven't got consistent internet access yet. Essentially limiting my work load to short spurts, barely enough to maintain a presence on the site.

6241645
I know that the first two chapters have a lot to aspire too... and the idea to add Heartbreak wasn't entirely random... it just won't culminate for a while. I will say that the fae do have a place in this story. And I hope to work on the characters and show, accurately, how they are by going further in the story.
Thank you for the feedback, I may try to rewrite the first chapters.

Well that was certainly... different.

I have nothing against homo but the amount of homosexual shipping is way too damn high....it's like every single female characters in the story till now are les.
Feel awful lot like some sort of weird wish fulfillment.

Ok...seriously....Where is the KARMA? I want Celestia pay dearly for the WAR CRIME SHE HAS DONE

Ok.........................What the fuck?
What the fuck am I reading?
Fuck it!
Celestia get to torture and then kill other without any fucking consequence.
Down with the god damn Tyrant...
Down with the Xeno!
And...

6244445
Well, it's just that other shipping is less prevalent. It won't become readily apparent Until those characters become relevant.

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There was no torturing of Starlet. Lethal injection. It was as equine a death she could give under the circumstances. And if you know anything about Mr. Deeds... well, he's hardly affected.

6244545 karma has a slow retribution, but there is some method to it all. She isn't just making brash decisions for no reason.

6244889 Karma is rolling slowly like an Apocalypse tank, I suppose.
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P.S. the damn thing is a giant...

6242824 A different take on what's happening...

Of course... this isn't what is actually happening in Heartbreak cannon.

And I would be lying if I told you that I wasn't squicked the fet out by Cloudkicker talking about who'd she 'tap' or by Subtle Brew's talk of HB liking Dib. HB is mentally 30, Dib is 15.

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Well, to be fair, Subtle brew didn't mean HB had the hots for dib. No, she meant more the love one has for a family member,.or a friend. Not so much that HB was more akin to a special somebody, but more a big sister of sorts.

And... there's no excuse for cloudkicker. She knows no bounds.

6248835 Up till the point were HB asks her pointed questions in regards to why she feels the need to hit on everything that has four legs, and if it deals with any neglect issues she suffered from her parents...

Huh. Didn't see that one coming. This story is interesting, if a bit jarring at times. Still, I eagerly await the next chapter.

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cool, working on updates for other stories, but trying not to die again.

8090747 Here's to you not dying. I look forward to seeing what you have in store. BTW I really enjoyed some of your other works, particularly Making Adjustments. It helped me figure a few things out about myself.

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Well updates to changing ways are coming as well, just after some other things. Stay tuned.

Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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Well, there are murders, and it shouldn't get too bad.

6244445 You don't like reading about homosexual relationships in fanfiction?
What are you, gay or something? :trollestia:

I don't know what's happening but I kept reading
It is now 2:03am
thanks Obama

8148703 *Shrug* I'm not sure...:applejackunsure:

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