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Looks really good so far
i kinda prefer the whole 'Celestia is evil' angle, but this is still really good.
a moustache
from Britain
4621988 that was the main one this is like a AU
4622006 Oh ok, I thought it was meant to be a direct sequel or something. Thxs for clearing that up. its still good though
4622021 thanks
Cool! It's nice to see this AU/Side story up at last! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Will she get her friends back on her side? Will she squash a certain bug with them at her side? Stay tuned; Same Time, Same Channel.
(Sorry 'bout that. I'm a fan of the 60's Batman series with Adam West and Burt Ward.
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4622788 lol remember the shark spray?
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Are you kidding?! Definitely!
I was a kid (in the 60's actually) when the show was first on TV! I even had a Bat-Cake with l'il plastic bats on it for one of my birthday during it's run! That was all kinds of cool!
Heck, I still have the bat-decorations, even. And I ain't gettin' rid of 'em!
4622807 oh god good times
it's been forever since I've seen a episode.
4622815 Yep, they were.
And yeah, me, too. I need to get the series (if it's out on DVD, that is) one of these days. Have me a bit of a nostalgia marathon.
4622818 that bat mobile! Can you dig it lol? But just go to YouTube
4622827 Yep! One of my very favorite TV vehicles. (Right up there with the General Lee, K.I.T.T. and Airwolf.)
(Okay, that last one is a helicopter. She (The Lady) is still one of my favorites!
)
And thanks, I probably will in a day or two. (That's where I watch my Pony eps, too.)
I'm still gonna try to get the DVDs, though. I kinda like havin' 'em.
Even if I am behind on my Pony ones.
4622851 Netflix has them all now if you got that as far as pony eps.
4622861 Cool to know, but unfortunately, I don't have Netflix at the moment. I may look into getting it, though.
Especially if it doesn't cost too much a month. Got a lot on my plate, money-wise, as it is.
And probably will for awhile.
4623069 that suck
4623123 Yes. Yes, it does.
who drew that bad-ass twilight?
4624345 it has a source
And now for a Reverse Changeling Invasion....BURN THE HIVE!
I have to wonder why this wasn't the main series you made. Your story relied on mischaracterizing Celestia in a pretty extreme way.
4627136 cause this was a idea on the fly
Dum dum duuummm.
operation destroy chrysalis
nice
4627409 glad you think so
Hmmm... Grammar mistakes, me, the 'grammar nazi', you wanting an editor...
Could I be an editor for you?
4660171 yes you could
I need a good editor badly. Though this little story won't be long at all so if your still interested pm me your email so I can share it with you on google drive
Hmm, perhaps my position on the matter should change....TO THE PMs!
Twilight ex machina to the rescue!
Fear's a liability. That's all I'm saying.
That, was rushed.
I'd like to say i enjoyed it, but C'mon, Chrysalis getting her ass handed to her should've been longer.
This entire chapter deserves to be 3 or 4 chapters.
That was kinda...super rushed
4727854 well I wasn't making a full story from it
Freaking awesome AU story. Covered everything I would have liked to see. Well done.
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4740704 thanks
Good side story.
Eh, nice story but needed to be longer and show Spike and his cohort killing the Changelings. Would have been interesting to see Chrissy becoming aware slowly but surely her species being wiped out.
I guess this isnt just a side story but rather an alternate ending?
Not my cup of tea unfortunately. I like the premise and the revenge, but im not too keen on the writing. It was much too confusing and i got lost too many times.
Also, the mother/son bit with Spike and Twilight is a giant no for me as well. Sorry, but I'll have to cut it short here.
Your all about forgiveness crap and nothing but aren't you? Frigging bleeding heart.
6927105 Yes because nothing says forgiveness like the extinction of a species and the violent murder of its ruler.
NvM about the shit I said, this should be the ending!
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I'm about 90% sure this is the original ending that me and Slice came up with for The Forgotten and Exiled and, arguably, is the better ending. Fear, though..... problematic, that.
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Yeah. I wrote the scene for that. Didn't make the cut, sadly.
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I believe me and Slice did that in a PM, but it didn't make the cut.
7103051 Either way, its FAR more satisfactory an ending (you satisfied our bloodlust-or mine anyway), unlike the main story, which is great BTW, besides the ending.
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Indeed. I actually skimmed the war part two hours ago. Hard to follow. Very hard to follow.
Then again, my OC got a greater role in the War version, and his other roles in this version were airbrushed over, namely, the destruction of Chrysalis' Hive.
7103088 I know a lot about WW1 so it wasn't too bad for me. What I hated was Celestial living and all that other bullshit at the end.
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Persoanlly, the only thing that I thought was meh was Twi marrying Cadence. Other than that, it was good.
Slice COULD have stood to run stuff by me.
7103169 That, and, call me violent, but I wanted to see Celestial, Twilight's parents AT LEAST get what they deserved (death), and probably Luna (she impersonated Twilight's GF, and probably knew EXACTLY what Celestial was doing), and maybe Shiny, RD, AJ, Pinkie, and Rarity.
7103051 I had to go back to relook at the story it's been so long.
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Violence it not always the answer, and revenge is often bittersweet, if it is satisfying at all.
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Indeed it has.