I do arcs. Big ones that seem to never end, and make you sad when they do. Never ask me for a one shot. Ever. It wont work. Promise.
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Well promising start. Looking forward to more. (And I'm the first comment. Couldn't help myself )
I HOLD THE DAGGER OF SECOND.
But still, and good story.
Glad you enjoyed
Freakin named chapter wrong... Should have been pin ball, not ping pong dang it!!!
Haven't finished reading chapter 3 yet, will son though. Although it seems to me chapter 2 and 3 could use some touching up though.
Thanks for the input, I'll check it out.
In this chapter 'we're' should be 'were'
Mind hinting me where?
I can't help but wonder when Flutters and Dashie will meet up or what brings them together again..
4835157 The world may never know! (Unless you keep up to date with the story )
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I think that says it all.
What was the bit with the thieves about? What could Rainbow and Gilda possibly have of any value?
5030801 *Shrugs* It didn't seem like these thieves were after anything in particular. Also, I may have to edits a few tags in this... I may or may not have completely twisted the plot I... Didn't have? The spacing of the chapters is whole due to collage and tired-ness at the moment. I'm getting in the rhythm of it, so I will start churning them out soon!
AH! The plot thickens.
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So does the Lazy Disease.
Careful, it's contagious.
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we're = were
5248238 Hehe...
Is Scootaloo an orphan in this story?
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I don't think Scoots exists yet.
What's Fluttershy gonna do?!?
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Touche
Poor Fluttershy can't ever catch a break it seems.
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Never Ever.
5336391 At least it wasn't four 'ever's.