After an incident at home, Fluttershy is sent to Summer Flight Camp. As she struggles to find out who she is and why everyone hates her, she meets a new friend—sort of—called Rainbow Dash, who allows her to forget what happened at home. Until Gilda comes back.
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FIRST! Also, go Gilda! My Fav!
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hmmm... not bad bro. When the dad came in and was like Celestia, I'm tired, I thought he was addressing the mother and I was all like
But yeah man. good story writing. :P
Third!
My heart is in pieces on the floor. There's my artery. Oh, and there's my spleen. Help.
FOURTH!
oh and YOU'RE GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY!
poor flutters 
Tracked out of pure epic.
Interesting. Aww, Fluttershy, that is depressing...
Please do continue. I know it's gonna be so awesome. 
This story makes me sad. I hope that it makes me happy by the ending.
I like being happy.
This is beautiful. You sir, have gained a follower. Can't wait for more, don't leave us hangin'! I always did imagine Fluttershy's younger years to be slightly traumatic.
668564 The next chapter's coming soon!
668050 *Fluttershy hugs you* Um . . . is that better?
I feel sorry for her, wish her abusive mum dead and am favouriting this even though Fluttershy's my second least liked character in the show. Funny how good writing and an interesting concept make one's general opinion obsolete to even them ain't it?
Good work mate, hope to see more.
That story... Gave me a feel... Almost like MLD... Continue.
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So we have ourselves some nice backstory and some nice setup for flight camp.
I am eagerly awaiting chapter 2 (well, I guess it's chapter 1 since this was the prologue
)
Anyhow, nicely done, sir
668475 I'm horrible at writing sad endings, so you can count on something happy.
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Hooray!
An update already? Oh boy!
Aw, Dashie standing up for little Flutters... all of my happy, have it all.
On second though, I should save up some happy for when they actually become friends.
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Much. I think I threw away my kidney in the clean up, though.
D'awww, that was cute. Fluttershy's inner doubts about, well, everything, are conveyed rather nicely.
F... friend?
a friend for me, flu-sfhy.
I haven't D'AWWW'd this much since MLD.
Please, continue
Why do your stories interest me so? This is really good so far, i love how in depth you're going with Fluttershy's back-story. bold move may i add,but portrayed wonderfully. I am beginning to read chapter two,but i must say so far,TERRIFIC job again my friend.
957563 What do you mean "on haitus" Aw HELL no, not when this story is getting so good! Man i could read these stories for hours. I loved this chapter the most,it showed the true meaning of friendship and gave fluttershy redemption.
Salute this man folks,for he has yet again accomplish what would otherwise be difficult to complete. I wanna see his take on a human in equestria!
983050 Salute this "man?"
If you're talking about me, well, I'm a girl . . . but thanks for the salute!
987717 My bad i thought you were a guy so sorry
. Anyhow you're still welcome!
988201 It's totally fine. How are you supposed to tell if someone's a guy or girl on the internet?
True that,thanks for understanding! For your kindness and good story you get a smiling twilight and moustache!
MORE MORE MORE THIS STORY IS AWESOME
MORE
1341263 Awww, thanks!
It's on hiatus right now, but I might write another chapter soon.
1343999 yay
That feel when you get a notification for an update, but it turns out to be an edit...
Well, that was a big wave of
and a rather vicious take on why Fluttershy's so flutter-shy. Good ol' Rainbow Dash, eh?
The crippling feels...
“ . . . and ANOTHER thing! Don’t expect me to pick up your room! I don’t care if you don’t have enough time. MAKE some time! I’m not going to pick up any of your trash. Oh, and while we’re talking about trash, let’s discuss your flying . . ." Said Fluttershy's mom.
"Um...You're father wasn't by any chance a tasmanian devil was he?" Said Me.
Made me chocked on tears and made me cry a tear beautiful.....
Your going to LOVE ME