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The Princess Rarity


Quirky teenage girl who writes about cartoons & has an obsession with sparkly things & cute dorks. Goes through life following by Dr. Seuss's wise words; "You have to be odd to be number one."

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Nopony would have expected the Princess Celestia to take in and adopt a young, timid filly who had just lost both of her parents to war. Yet, Celestia saw so much potential and light in the child, who was called Cadence. So now, while they are both hitting several bumps in the road called life, in a different point of view, Cadence realizes that even while all seems lost, somepony still cares about her.

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Well, this is definitely nice. Kinda wondering what you plan to do with it, though...
And as for the episode, we already have a book that kinda glosses over that, so I doubt we'll be seeing it in upcoming episodes. :fluttershysad:
Would still be nice, of course.

OMG what did Cadance say? I wanna know!

All of my yes. Take it.

So many fics (including one of mine) go into the relationship between Twilight and Celestia, but none look at Cadance and Tia. Twilight might be her best student, but Caddy is her niece!

run away with me Toni bby

*reads your authors note* I couldn't agree more! :pinkiehappy:

And PLEEEEEAAAASE review my new story soon! :applecry:

But Celestia and Cadence don't really have a relationship, isn't Cadence just a 'visiting princess', as mentioned in S2 Finale during the Flashback?

4607667 In fact, you can find more information about this in the comics written by the story board writers for MLP.

4607667 ...Cadence is Celestia's niece. It's said so in the show.

4607678 Could you direct me to where?

4607704 Season Two finale. Sorry, but I forget which episode. It's even official on the wiki.

4607728 Grazi, ser or madoma. I will look into this immediately.

I like how this has started and where it's going, can't wait for it to continue!

This is certainly a relationship that deserves to be examined, and I'm surprised by how little has been done with it in fan fiction and in the show. You have my support, and my upvote, as you go forward with this exploration.

Wait so is cadence a unicorn, alicorn or a Pegasus in this story

4609264 Alicorn. According to the "Crystal Heart Spell" book by G.M. Berrow, Cadence was once a pegasus, but later is turned into an alicorn by Celestia, and afterward, adopted.

I shall keep an eye on this... I hope this update regularly.

I smell potential for future feels. Keep up the good work!

I think I hear the feel train going full speed ahead....

This is great so far!! keep writing! and i agree, they should totes make an episode on how these two characters met. it would be just beautiful:):trollestia:

Very cute! I love Momma Tia stories and Tia Cadance ones are rare ^^

The exact relationship between Celestia and Cadence is certainly an interesting area of exploration that the series doesn't give us enough information on, so I like the idea of this story!

Although, I think adopt-fics in general are territory that's been pretty heavily trafficked already, so as this one progresses I'd hope to see it do something unique to stand out.

Wait, did you just secretly cliffhang us???:pinkiegasp: Bad things shall happen. :pinkiecrazy: Wait, scratch that. Keep up the good work!!:pinkiehappy:

Celestia ignored the checkmark for magic -- promoting the young filly to alicorn just because of her royal status may have been going a bit far

What, explain? Why is Cadance an alicorn and how did Celestia go about doing it?

The order here seems a little strange. The chapter starts with Cadance being adopted, but she is still calling Celestia "Princess" in the middle of the chapter. At the end, we learn that Cadance's parents have been dead only a month and Celestia went ahead and alicornified Cadance. Her parents are barely cold!

Well, the pacing might need some work, but I'll have to see where you plan to go with it.

Hi! I'm Froggie, and I'm just here to let you know that your Pleasant Commentator and Review Group review is up! Sorry it took so long, we got a bit clogged up :twilightblush:

Why did you have to cancel this? It's such a great story.:raritydespair:

Shame to see this cancelled; the concept is fantastic and the writing intriguing. :twilightsmile:

I love, love LOVE this!!! Plz continue it!!! :eeyup:

I, too, agree we need more background for Cadence. The closest we have really gotten was in the book "The Crystal Heart Spell". I'd love if Hasbro at least touched on this point in the show but it seemed like pulling teeth to get Fluttershy, Dash, and Applejack's family to be known. We'd be lucky if we ever found out if Scoots had genuine parents. Scootaloo didn't make a positive argument towards having any that cared back in "Parental Glidance".

Sad you cancelled the story. However you definitely did give us a lot to think on. Thanks for sharing.

Mood on wanting their relationship explored, nice fic too!

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