Everyone knows Pound and Pumpkin cake, the lovable, adorable foals of Cup and Carrot. But Cup Cake has a secret she's kept from everypony, even her husband, the stallion she trusts with her life. That secret, however, is about to be revealed, and Cup and Carrot's lives could be ripped apart.
First does this really need a dark tag? Second interesting idea
3190677 Yes it does need the dark tag because the story is going to get a little darker later on.
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Dark as in gore and rape, or dark as in other things?
3190691 As in other things but I've got those planned out
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Well... I guess I'll keep an eye on this then
3190721 Well thank you I just hope I can get the next chapter done soonish...
Forsooth, my liege, I be intrigued!
Really good so far!
3190953 Thanks
Sounds intresting so far. I look forward to more.
I'm in.
Hello
I read the description, and then looked to the coverart. I repeated this process several times. My reaction was similar to this:
this sounds so good, I can't wait for more!!
Interesting idea, but fast execution. For example DT thinking about stuff, you could slowly show us that she is not really the mean spirited filly instead of telling us.Along with all those other ideas.
3194297 Oh don't worry I've got a nice little plan for that it will be in the next chapter...or in a few chapters
Huh. Didn't Filthy Right make Diamond Tiara help with the whole' zap apple jam thing?
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Hmm, this is an interesting idea.
An interesting idea I will be following with great... well, interest!
Yes! Because canon Diamond Tiara hates her wealthy life and has no superiority complex. c(:
THAT'S NOT DIAMOND TIARA!!! If I wanted a good drama, I'd reread Past Sins.
Not that i want to be impatient but the last update is almost a year ago.... When does the next come? Btw good story keep up
4759430 Thanks I am working on the new update now as well as a few others
3194302 that is, assuming you can get around to it at all.
5808722 You dear sir owe me a new drink because I spat mine out...this comment made me laugh