When Starburst heads on over to Sweet Apple Acres to help Golden Delicious with the chores for the day, as expected, she overworks herself like she normally does and she ends up falling asleep on the job.
While this is normally a downside, maybe just this one time could be an exception to everything.
After all, it gives Gold some time to think, and the two of them engage in a type of small talk they never ventured into before...
kilala97 is seriously my favorite artist in this fandom, it was about time I wrote something for her magnificent characters!
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Yep, it happend again. I turned my back for a second and you have a new story.
Your like an easier to pronounce version of Akumokagetsu
Is this a FIc about aj's parents?
You truly are a master of your craft
Alright who are the 'Rents?
Nice job with this story. I like it. I can't wait for the next one of this universe.
Really liked this story. It was written really well. I did a review on it. Link To Review Hope you like it.
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No, Golden Delicious is AJ's son and Starburst is Twilight's daughter.
This is a wonderful story
I always knew those two were perfect for each other 
Very nice. Maybe I should leave the fic writing to yall at this point...
two things
1. Candy: pssh screw gravity!
2. So Mr. Delicious, how does it feel to be just like your uncle Big Mac?
Loved it. Second generation doesn't get near enough love. Pity more talented authors don't write about them.
I wanted to post something like this as a pre-quil to my story. I love this pairing and it doesn't't get near enough love
Congrats on your featured!
You earned it!
I just saw the art today. You made my day better!
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Everyone just has their own view of what second generation is.
Very sweet. A nice gentle fic.
It is pretty sweet.
I love this verse too! Great fic!
Does it have to be a one shot? Why not expand upon this glorious relationship?
Anyways, great story, bravo to you author.
Correct me if I'm worry, but I believe Claire is supposed to be a few years older than the rest. It's a little weird trying to imagine a younger Golden Delicious having to "deal" with Claire, especially considering how Claire is supposed to be the mature one in the group due to Rarity's guidance.
I did like the story, really I did. It falls just short of greatness for me because, like The Messanger before me, I really don't agree with your characterization of Claire. She's a character I really enjoy, so it seems kind of odd for things like this to happen. Especially for her to be arrested? That just sucked me out of the story at full speed. Granted, I was at the end already, but still.
You cannot sacrifice characterization or consistency for anything. Not a joke, not a plot device, not even a story point. The characters are what people read for, they must be the part we focus on.
It was still a solid story, and gets a thumbs up from me. Your characterization of Del and Star was fantastic, and up until the very end it was an excellent tale.
Keep up the good work;
-Lumino
Agreed. Kiala's next gen kids are definetly the best that exist in the fandom. They are so damm cute.
One thing though: If Illusion learned that Clair is in jail, he'd bail her out faster than you can say "chocolate milk"
Pleasewriteasequel.Pleasewriteasequel.Pleasewriteasequel. =D
I totally ship this! Hahaha.
I mean, they're perfect for each other D:<
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Here you go c:
~Twi
I really enjoyed reading this
I'm slowly getting to like these characters, and this ship...
...it intrigues me 
Loved it. Loved it a lot. Great work.
Hey PrincessRarity, I was wondering, if you weren't going to make a sequel to this, I was wondering if you would allow me to create one myself?
4372335 Go ahead!
I'd be honored!
4372344 Awesome thanks, I'll make sure to mention you in the description.
4372344 I'm happy to say I got the first part of it's sequel out today. Hope it lives up to your story.
chapter 2 anybody
Gotta hand it to ya, that was pretty cute and I don't often go for cute.
that was wonderful, I don´t have an idea who to ship Star with, she has chemistry with a lot of guys but, even if you´re not a fan you can see the good of the pairing in the fact that they´re good childhood friends
I luved it! maybe, just maybe there could be a sequel or sumthin?
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No suburst is flash and twilight's kid
And Golden Delicious is applejack and Carmel
It is a next generation universe
You can has review!