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I'm a Soldier stationed in Fort Hood. I'm an aspiring writer/artist and am currently working on a Master's in Psychology.

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This story is a sequel to Love Is Patient


Luna's daughter, Princess Nidra, was once rivals with the adopted daughter of Fluttershy, Anthea, for Turquoise the dragon-pony's heart. Since then, Anthea and Turquoise have married, Nidra has learned to accept her loss, and the two mares have become fast friends. However, when an aged and ailing Anthea calls her friend in for one final request, will Nidra, at long last, be able to honor it?

*Based on the Kilala97 Next Gen.
*Cover art by Kilala97.

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This made me feel stuff, bro. This is better than my work, by a longshot. Keep on truckin, brother.

Oh god the feels! :raritycry:

Well done here, very well done.

Well, shouldn't have read that. Now I have tears. :'(

...This is why I hate sad fics. They are always so beautiful, yet so heartbreaking that it makes me cry. I wanted to read this since I love kilala's work...but now, as I read this story...one song comes to mind...

This was a wonderfully written story...but now, I am sad. :fluttercry:

WHY IS THIS NOT IN THE FEATUREDS?! THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST FANFICTION FEATURING THESE CHARACTERS EVER MY BRAIN RIGHT NOW JUST BROKE I CANNOT COMPREHEND THE BEAUTY AND ANGST AND AMAZINGNESS THIS STORY HAD ASDFGHJKL

Kilala would be very proud of you, dude. You did her brilliant characters justice.

So, I read this in the morning, but didn't have time to comment until now. Absolutely stunning, in every way. The story has a typical path, but that winds up being a move in its favor, as the characters are anything but typical. You take the quiet, demure and soft-spoken pony we thought we knew, and turned her into a very different character. Similarly, you had another character who was flawed from the start, and her personality from the first story was visible here.

And in many ways, her flawed personality from the prequel makes her presence here so much stronger. She's still spoiled, entitled, and angry. She doesn't handle not getting what she wants well at all. Through the story we can see her growth, and that she eventually considers Annie such a friend that she sacrifices her own happiness to keep hers. She's so afraid of losing her that she unknowingly puts her in pain to keep from experiencing the loss. It's such a powerful story, about growth and adaptation.

Well played, sir. An excellent showing.

-Lumino

This story, the feels, this was worth the wait and you managed to incorporate some Kilala's past works into the story I enjoyed the little references you put in the only problem I found was that when you jumped from one scene to a flashback it was a bit hard to keep up and find out where this was all going, but that was just nit picking. The tone was perfect for each scene and by the way, I was getting a bit of an Old Yeller vibe from the last scene in the hospital, and it was done beautifully. As a whole this was a good story the feels are deserved while to me the pacing was a little too quick in a few places, example: one second we're in the hospital and the next we're raiding dungeons in the wilderness; but I enjoyed how you got every scene to play a role. Keep on writing my good sir, you certainly have the talent!
and also >> Ebony Stallion listen to

It added more feels for me

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Kilala did seem to enjoy it. The featured box is a fickle mistress, though, so being in it or not isn't something I consider to be indicative of quality.


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Thanks, I really wanted to focus on characterization with this one, so I'm glad it worked out.


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Glad you enjoyed it. The pacing was a bit difficult, and I was afraid the jumping about might be too much. It sounds like it still accomplished its task, though, so I'm not too broken up about it.

That was a delight to read. I have no critique to offer. It was well written and very evocative.

Thank you.

:raritydespair: I was on the verge of tears when I was reading the last few bits of this fanfic, I could feel my throat choking up. But all in all, this was a good fanfic. :pinkiesad2: I gives thanks to kilala for creating these wonderful characters.

I just had to read this a second time, it's just so good.

The part where Nidra sings after leaving the room just kills me.

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You're too kind, thanks.


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The characters really do spark the imagination. Obviously, I was very impressed with them, myself.


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Ooh, it's always nice to know a story has reread value. I was really happy with the singing portion, as well.

I really like the relationship being built up between the three of them, especially between Anthea and Nidra.

In response, Spike blasted a gout of green flame at the sky, and soon a gigantic, golden trident landed in his claws. “I haven’t used this in years, so I might be a bit rusty right now…” He grinned maliciously, rows of razor sharp teeth glistening off his weapon. “But hey, making shish kebab sounds like the perfect warm-up.”

Well, that’s pretty awesome. The trident is from the comics, right?

“Of course,” Nidra said. “You are always welcome in my bed.” She frowned as she saw her friend let slip a coy grin, feeling that she had perhaps opened herself up to some form of teasing.

Heh.

Ahh, that ending. Hurts so good.

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The trident is from the comics, right?

It is. The thought of Spike fighting with a trident is at the same time hilarious and awesome.

Riz

3974909 Annie doesn't have a step dad right ?

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Fluttershy adopted and raised Annie as a single parent. This doesn't mean she couldn't have gotten a boyfriend/husband later, but as of now there's none specified.

who was nidras father? a night guard?

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Correct.

3976023 What did Annie and T name their kids?

This story was amazing. You did an excellent job showing the dynamic of Athena and Nidra. I was very proud of Nidra for releasing her friend. You conveyed the emotions so well that I related to it, keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

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Don't know yet. Kilala's doing a contest thing where other people can draw and create a bio for their and Illusion and Claire's children. I submitted this for the contest, which includes two dragon-ponies named Kunzite and Mint Julep as T and Annie's kids. However, there are several other entries. Basically, you can feel free to choose which ones you'd prefer to be there.

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Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you were able to get something out of it.

A gloriously written, touching, and thoughtful story. I loved it all.

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Glad you enjoyed it.

A bit weird due to the time skipping, but now I want someone to take time to sing the hush now lullaby so that they can listen to it while reading this story.

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That'd be pretty sweet.

ok im going to be completely honest here. Up to a few days ago I didn't even know these characters even existed but ever sense I was told about them from my best friend I have been on a reading beng envolving these characters like no other and this is by far the...the...I just don't think I can put it into words as to the feels I am feeling right now so I will just go with this:fluttercry::heart:

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Well, that's quite the high praise, thanks.

4322555 Nothing but the truth. Give credit were credit is due

No no, that's ok. I didn't need that heart anyway :fluttercry:

The feels are too much. :fluttercry: I now need happy to stop the liquid pride to stop. :fluttercry:

I can always tell that a story is amazingly great if it moves me to tears. OH GOD WHY????? ANNIEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershbad::fluttershbad::fluttershbad::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershyouch::fluttershyouch::fluttershyouch::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2: THE FEELS MAN THE FEELS!!!!!!!!!! *goes to corner to bawl her eyes out*

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Your tears sustain me!

I stopped reading in the middle of the text
:pinkiesick: Another fanfic featuring... Glfppp... Tidra and I'm throwing up..

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It's really more of a Nidranthea friendfic, though it does deal with Annie trying to convince Nidra to take care of Turquoise after she dies. Tidra doesn't even actually happen in this fic.

4999897 Yeah but it says Turquoise actually likes Nidra and that he had to choose n stuff... : / I heard it was beautiful so I wanted to read it but nah please not Tidra

Comment posted by Sjacik deleted Jul 26th, 2023

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That'd be fun. Apparently Nidra is supposed to sound a little like Lapis Lazuli from Steven Universe, and I think that quality of voice would work well with it.

Comment posted by Sjacik deleted Jul 26th, 2023

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That's why I put a link in the name Lapis Lazuli in the last comment.

Comment posted by Sjacik deleted Jul 26th, 2023

I dont understand what you mean by "four hours of cruel punishment'

Sorry man but I tried to read it but you made this story to hard to fallow

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"Four hours of... of cruel and unusual punishment!" Alludes to the half working day T spends working, the punishment being Annie and T being separated.

Sorry if the back-to-back flashbacks are too much for you to handle.

I could not handle the feels

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