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This story is a sequel to Button Mash and The Quest to Rescue Sweetie Belle
Two weeks after Button Mash's escape from Paradise Island and his confrontation with Codex and Rumble. He discovers that Lyra Heartstrings warning came true and now finds himself targeted by the evil known as Dark Force. Now he must find a pony who goes by the name of The Doctor and save his friends before Dark Force changes his world...Forever
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OMGOMGIMG! Sequel already? Heeeeeeeeck YEEEEEEEEAAAAAHHH!
SON OF A BITCH.
Congrats, though. Guess I need to double time editing rumbles revenge.
awesome! as always you never disappoint and ok I understand the 'doctor' thing now gee I should just wait when I have Questions because you end up explaining it in the next chapter LOL
That was awesome
Hurr? I dont get the doctor part lol, I dont watch enough Doctor Who to get any of the references.
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Your comment made me LOL way more than it should
I would love to see more loving scenes between button and sweetie please
4485266 Agreed.
Ooooooh, spooky Derpy! Can't wait for another chapter, keep it up!
Wat the shat?
Doctor...we are going to need more muffins.
There are some errors I noticed when reading:
That was hilarious. 
Should be "...when I came to..."
The following should be structured, "...masters and killed Codex. Needless to say I didn't believe..."
Also, the sentence, "Aw man, well if this is what going to have to happen to have a play." would probably be easier to understand if you reworded it such: "Aw man, well if this is what has to happen to have a play."
In the self-imposed exile sentence, the 'from' should be a 'for.'
The third 'I've' should be an '...that I...'
'on quote' should be 'unquote'
You also might want to watch out for run on sentences and using commas correctly.
Don't mean to be a grammar Nazi, but it happens naturally when you do your own proofreading.
One more thing: "I heard talks of doves and marriage, are you two planning your wedding or something?" "No mom." "Dang."
4515108 Yep gotta watch out for that. Catching mistakes is hard when you don't have a second set of eyes
I'll try and do better
Wait why was Dinky excited only about button...hmm
4520082 Earlier, it was stated she has a crush on him (Part of the reason she doesn't like Sweetie Belle). So if Doctor Whooves is Dr. Who ponified, then who is this Pegasus doctor?
cat fight cat fight
button fly you fool
Moar again
Okay, I have to ask: Are these voices that Button seems to be hearing Dark Force or the 'good guys' (Although, based off what I'm seeing, the good guys don't seem all that altruistic to me. Of course, I don't know these guys motives yet.) Also, how can this Dark Force take over so many ponies without anyone noticing anything off about them?
) Good read though.
There were a few 'errors' I noticed. The sentence: "And I doubt that he would his friends behind so the backdoor is out," is a bit confusing and incomplete, like it's missing a word or two. Also, I think 'saw' should be 'say.' (I don't meant to come across as a grammar Nazi, but unfortunately, doing my own proofreading, I can't help but see them.
4540312 Don't worry. Every thing about Dark Force will be explained in the next chapter. And again thanks for spotting my errors.
Hmm... No offence, but as the story goes on, I am seeing more and more grammer errors...
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AAAAAAAAAARRRRRGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! DAMNIT! WHY DONT I SEE THOSE
So... What's plan B
So let me get this straight: The (pegasus) Doctor is named Rain Catcher. He is from another dimension, which he traveled from with the Phase Distorter (which belongs to a Time Winder, who we haven't seen yet). He is traveling with that dimension's Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, and Rumble; along with another ponies named Castor Winds.
Is anyone else confused?
4548984 And I think they are lucky to have a plan A
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Still though what's plan B
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If plan A doesn't work. Then they wont need a plan B
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Fair point, they'll probably be dead or something if plan A fails but still plan A never works
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True, all they can do now is make minor adjustments to plan A and make it work
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Agreed
They're antiquated? Like, outdated? I mean, the Doctor I get, he's like, 1026 or something, but the rest are teenagers. I belive you meant acquainted. I dread to see how the plan fails. .. it always does... no matter what. Or I wouldn't be writing from 2014 instead of 5023 when I belong. Beware the weeping angels.
Ugh Writers Block. It sucks when it hits but with the power of some oldies I managed to beat it. for now.
This piece of music helped a lot of what I was trying to go for. The Mission Begins! to Save Ponyville from the evil Dark Force! There is no telling what kinds of evils our two heroes will face while battling the evil power, but turning back now is not an option. Also Button Mash will do the editing. Man that sounds SO silly
And thanks to NobleValor for getting me started
first off CAT FIGHT
second button better FALCON...PAUNCH some mofos
its good like it
Ok you HAVE to vist that world were button and dinky are dating! please I need that in my life!
4635309 Hmmm.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter.
4713838 I'm still working on it. Don't worry
Hopefully I'll be done soon.
this a bit like dr who makes no sense thats why i love it
What happened to this story? A great price of stuff, stuff to strut, shriveled into ashes? This should be updated.
6268895 This old thing? Well I haven't forgotten about it its just that I haven't been able to think of where to go with it. Plus I stopped watching Doctor Who which was somewhat based around this.
Then I thought up some new stories and soon I just stopped writing this as I thought of better things to write about. I should do a new story about the little gamer colt.
6319305 that would be nice.
I guess it's safe to say that this story is cancelled.