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Surrounded by the old tomes of her new castle, Twilight starts to wonder if she can have again books she can call her own. Luckily, Spike and her friends help her start a new collection, lending her stories they have enjoyed and hope Twilight will do the same.
Set after the Season Four Finale, it contains some spoilers, obviously. Never forget Golden Oaks...
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So...I guess you liked it
I think there was a similar story written not too long ago by someone else. Unsurprising. It's a good concept for a story.
You handled it really well, too. I like that you showed everyone pitching in to show her that just because the old library is gone doesn't mean that the people who made the memories she associated it with are gone and that she can't make new memories from now on. The interaction between Twilight and Spike throughout was really sweet, as well.
I think the destruction of Golden Oaks was a good story point, the arrival of a new time and home, but still, the old library will always feel in our minds as twilight's true home, this brough home so many great moments between those 7 that it felt natural, and I liked it. Specially the part about... you know... Apples.
Good job 'mate.
Nice story. Maybe she can write A.K. Yearling and get some new signed copies.
Your sentence structure needs more work. I'm assuming that since this was short you didn't get any native English speakers to preread. The only other thing was your use of the word scaffolding, which needs to be either bookshelf or bookcase.
Thanks for writing this. Now that I have read this fanfiction, I feel for the first time at ease after the destruction of the library and can look with peace at it that she's gone, instead with immense pain and grief.
I think your fanfiction helps me a lot to cope with it now. Thanks for that.
5744384 Thank you!