And Killed Me
Pinkie Pie didn't catch a wink of sleep that night. In her mind, the words "Murderer" and "Monster" were shouted and echoed - hammered into her head. She tossed and turned, flipped her pillow about, but to no avail. She sat up, annoyed.
"Please, leave me alone," she whispered to herself.
"Leave you alone? No, I'll never do that," the voice in her head replied.
"Pinkamena! My friends and I were happy till YOU came around!"
"Oh? And why? You mean to say - you were happy without me?"
"Well, DUH! We --"
"No, you can't live without me. I AM you. You're just me under a fake mask with a smile on it!"
"Whaddya mean?"
"I mean - you don't exist. I do. I'M Pinkamena Diane Pie. You're a fake - like your smiles you wear every day."
"Stop it! My friends love me and I love them!"
"Not if I have something to do about it."
"I PINKIE promised I won't do it again! And NOPONY BREAKS A PINKIE PROMISE!!"
After her final words, Pinkie Pie sort of shut her mind, and the voice left her head. She had won, because after all - nopony breaks a Pinkie Promise. And she was the one to see to it.
----
"Twilight," Pinkie Pie asked, in a quivery voice. "Something's happen to me!"
"What is it?" Twilight Sparkle asked.
"I sorta heard a weirdo voice in my head!" the pink earth pony explained.
"About what?" came the laconic answer.
"I heard it saying I was a murderer or something," Pinkie Pie answered, for the first time, totally serious about something.
"Oh, Pinkie," Twilight laughed, as she flipped a page of her book with her magic. "You're either over-reacting - or you're playing another trick for April Foal's Day."
"Don't be - Twilight?!" Pinkie Pie cried out. "Can't you see I'm - UGH!!!" She gave a frustrated scream, and stomped out of the library.
"Sheesh," Spike remarked. "Is she being Pinkie Pie or what?" Twilight slapped him, on the cheek.
"Hey! What was that for?"
-----
"Rainbow Dash?" Pinkie Pie asked.
Rainbow turned around. "Yes? Wait - no! I'm not baking cupcakes! Leave me alone!" She zoomed away, leaving Pinkie Pie in a cloud of dust.
Pinkie Pie bounced after her.
"She can't be here," Rainbow Dash panted, as soon as she found Pinkie Pie out of sight. She turned towards Scootaloo. "Hey, squirt - watch THIS!!"
She got into flying position, before taking off, doing loops, hoops and somersaults in mid-air.
"Rainbow Dash! Wanna play?"
Rainbow Dash gasped, and cried out, "Later, pipsqueak! I gotta..uh...go. See ya later!"
She bolted off, leaving a trail of rainbow behind her.
"But Dash, wait!" Scootaloo called after her.
----
"Rarity! Hide me!" Rainbow Dash shrieked, as she bashed into the boutique.
The white unicorn scratched her head with her hoof. "Oh, hello, darling Rainbow! Nice of you to drop by!"
"Rarity! Pinkie Pie's after me! I can't let her catch me --" Rainbow Dash cried out. "Or she'll --"
"Oh, silly," Rarity giggled. "Pinkie Pie just only left the boutique." She bit hungrily into a cupcake. "Mm-mm! These are good! She just dropped off a whole bag of cupcakes for me and Sweetie Belle."
Cupcakes. Cupcakes Cupcakes. Millions of pictures and memories flashed and flitted through the pegasus's mind, as the word Cupcakes filled her ears.
"Oops! Sorry, Rarity!"
Rainbow Dash gave a yell, as she heard Pinkie Pie's voice behind her, complete with the ringing of the bell, and the opening of the doors.
She dashed out of the boutique, before Pinkie Pie could say "hi."
Rarity and Pinkie Pie shot each other strange confused glances, as the pegasus whizzed past them.
----
Cupcakes. She said Cupcakes!
Wait a minute - what's come over me?
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Voted up, just for the lyrics.
I love them lyrics.
Lyrics:
Well here we are at last
You always were a pleasure
Are you wondering why you're in a vice?
Oh how we laughed and laughed
Except, you're not laughing?
What's the matter Rainbow Dash, am I not being nice?
I need you for harvesting
That's what I'm planning on
Sorry your number came up
Oh, I'll be sad when you're gone
She was a lot like you
(But you're not quite as heavy)
I chopped up poor Gilda to feed to you
But then I burned her meat
And now she's gone forever
You will not follow suit, that much I will promise you
I know this is quite shocking
That's what I'm betting on
This is the end my Dashie
Nopony will know you're gone
So long my bestest friend
Well, duh, of course I meant you!
That would be funny, if it weren't so sad
You cannot be replaced
But it's too late for that now
When I go eat you, maybe I'll start feeling real glad
You'll be baked into cupcakes
That's what I'm planning on
I want you inside of me
Oh, I feel sad when you're gone
Nopony will know you're gone
Ah, we will soon be as one
Good day.
397956 You did thes lyrics to the tune of "Want You Gone" not "Still Alive"
. Still pretty awesome.
397871
Alright, the multiple personalities I can understand, but would you forgive someone if they murdered and then ate one of your best friends? Lets be rational, here. I still have to admire your writing style, though. It is a little short, but you did make the mane six sound like themselves.
398026
Like so:
This was a triumph.
The taste and the texture: HUGE SUCCESS.
It's hard to overstate my satisfaction.
Sugarcube Corner
We do what we must
because we can
It tastes so good, to me at least.
Not to the the ones who are dead.
But there's no sense crying over every new slice
Now won't you stop moving, interrupting's not nice
Oh, look at that, I'm all done
See, now, wasn't that fun?
I'm just kidding, cuz you're still alive.
I'm not even angry.
But falling asleep is rather rude.
You very nearly broke my heart
And killed me.
I'll tear you to pieces.
And bake every piece into a pie
But before that, I'll have to work, because they're so much to do
Each and every incision, every beautiful line.
Now I'm done with the knife
Let's give this hacksaw a try
Why do they call it that, huh?
It doesn't hack, it's name is dumb
Oh well, let's play while you are still alive.
I won't let you leave me
I need you forever by my side
I wish there was some way that I could keep you.
Oh wait, I got it!
I'll sew you up. And stuff your skin.
I mean, it's not like you need all of your guts
They're so delicious and moist.
Look at me still talking
when there's baking to do.
It's nothing personal, Dash, I'm sorry that it was you.
But that's how the numbers run
And I did have so much fun
But in a minute you won't be alive.
But there are others who are still alive.
Like Twilight Sparkle, she is still alive.
And Fluttershy is still alive.
And Applejack, they are all still alive.
Except for you, you are not still alive.
STILL ALIVE (x2)
398030
Hmm..you could be right XD
Maybe the magic of frienship's powerful like that? Gee, I dunno. But wait - Rainbow Dash was revived and *almost* everypony was happy again. The whole Cupcakes thing didn't matter anymore, and so Pinkie Pie got lucky and was forgiven, assuming it was only a Pinkamena Diane Pie thing - that happens when she is sad and lonely.
In the next few chapters ((sorry for not publishing
)), everypony works hard to keep Pinkamena Diane Pie from returning. So,they sorta forgave Pinkie Pie, but however, they strived to keep her distracted - and happy.
398035
Lol that's awesome XD
Eeeh, I may soon revoke my earlier comments, then. I guess we'll see
I'd like to see where this goes. Interesting concept
398080
Thank you :D I feel it's a bit confusing without the last chapters in - but I'm really glad you like it
Also, I have S.A.D - seasonal affective disorder, so there might be some days where I can't update :(
i will survive!... I WILL SURVIVE!! HEY HEY!!!
good, but how did pinkie kill dash? Make the chapters longer, the rest is good
398295
Oh, uh...there's a very infamous fanfic called Cupcakes out there - I didn't find it very interesting, but I wanted to make a sequel. :D I also made a sequel for the popular "My Little Dashie". Check it out if you're interested :D
401626
Oh uh...actually the chant went like this --
"Through pain, through death, through sorrow and strife -
Bring this pony back to life!"
"Princess Celestia, in the name of your ---- (Twilight chose the word Royalty - to rhyme)
I bring back the pony - the element of ----! (Twilight chose the word Loyalty)
Therefore, ponies without elements can't be revived. :O Also, another example would be for Rarity;:
"Princess Celestia, in the name of your ferocity, (though that would be a bit cruel XD)
I bring back the pony - the element of generosity!"
i dont get it when will rainbow get her revenge?
Can somebody please send me a link to 'cupcakes', the original? I tried searching, but it didn't work
....
426925 here is a dramatic reading
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqme5hDMRNI
Lrn2Brony
434334 will do, tomorrow afternoon. In bed now, morning have a doctors appointment. IM NOT SICK ANYMORE!
I am not going to be forgetting this for a long time to come bloody cupcakes ok everypony to the TARDIS we are going to the correct universe this time
Sincerely the Doctor
The characters seem too fake.
Twilight would not simply laugh at Pinkie hearing sinister voices, the pure psychology of it would peak her interest. Or have you forgotten that Twilight is a scholar?
Furthermore Pinkie clearly didnt just "have a moment" because the original fanfiction stated that she had done this before. Many times. Based off of artwork and information from the story itself I came to the conclusion that prior to rainbow dash, Pinkie killed one Griffon,three pegasi, eight unicorns, and based off the size of the dress in most fanart ,approximately twelve earth ponies making a total of twenty four vicious murders.
Not to mention Pinkie only kills other ponies when she runs out of meat, so her system is clearly run by "supply and demand". The more ponies ask for cupcakes, the more ponies she kills, meaning that she could have been doing this for years.
And honestly the story feels as though a child wrote it.
Here is what I mean. Both these sentences are the same.
After her final words, Pinkie Pie sort of shut her mind, and the voice left her head.
Now here is my version.
After her final words, Pinkie Pie shut out the sinister voice's taunting, and eventually forced it to fade back into her subconscious.
Even the slightest improvement in vocabulary can empower your words and make your story more interesting. Thank you for reading.
Not that any of my fanfics are good.They also don't use any of the techniques I described here.
I could understand if they forgave her for Rainbow dash's murder, cause she is back. But wjat the fu#k about the dozens of others she killed. She should got to jail, not just forgiven.
yeaaaah moremoremore faved and liked