Fluttershy is a flightless pegasus filly, made fun of and mocked each day.
Pinkie Pie is a sad lonely earth filly, who longs for something to cheer herself and others up.
What happens when their worlds meet? Will they change each other's lives forever?
((No romance. It's a BFF sort of love.))
D'aaw
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Thanks for your time, comments and advice :D It's all appreciated. I'll try and improve next chapter.
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You sir. Yes you!
Go back to /fic/ and stop blindly reviewing new stories. I have hopes of getting featured to, but to shoot down another author like that? Cold.
I love this story and I love how you wrote about Pinkie and Fluttershy. I am especially a fan of Fluttershy.
I noticed your second chapter and saw that you wrote Paradise in the middle of a sentence and what you need to do it use as lowecase p since it's in the middle.
Otherwise, your spelling and grammar are great. This is already added to my favorites,
nice, was a little skeptical think it was gonna be another run of the mill shipping fic, but i stood corrected.
((Tis not a shipping fic - don't support shipping XD))
Love you all :D You're all my inspirations
I'm looking forward to more of this
This was an adorable story. So full of D'AWW! Awesome job.
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Awww..thanks :D Be sure to check out my other stories :)
PS. it's not over yet! XD
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Awesome! I plan to once I have a free moment, and I look forward to the next chapter. :D
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You're such an inspiration
Love you all! Thanks for your comments, favs and tracks :D
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You're gonna cheer for me like that? Louder!
((don't take seriously XD))
This is a cute story and I enjoy reading it very much :
D'aaw
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
5/5 again.