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Fluttershy is Dovah-shy. But is she the only one? Five other ponies claim to be the legendary "Dovah..um..pony", and they battle for the title. Who will win? Who will gain the respect of everypony in Shyrim?

NOTE: This is not a HUMAN story. :)

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Comments ( 14 )

...Okay.
Why is Rarity a Nord? She should be an Imperial or at least a Breton, Nords are more like Applejack. Probably an Imperial though, Twilight would make a better Breton with her magic and all.
Either way a pretty good read, I would have switched more names to fit the MLP universe, like Whiterun to Whitegallop (which I invented for my own story) but we aren't all robots so everyone's different. Good luck.

Let me guess, someone stole pinkies sweet roll

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Okay, that was funny. :rainbowlaugh:

Pinkamena the Pink. Ragnar the Red. I see what you did there. :ajsmug:

just felt like saying the picture you used is from final fantasy and is in no way related to skyrim there are plenty of her wearing an iron helmet like in skyrim though.

there are too many incorrect to count :ajbemused:

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I know, but does it matter? I played Final Fantasy - and I know it, okay?

WTF... Final Fantasy pic? U NEED HELMET WITH HORNS, DOVAHSHY! :moustache:

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Does it matter? :twilightangry2: Oh well, I'll change it...And please, I played Final Fantasy - I know... -_-'

I'm workin' on the second chapter, or technically, the First chapter, because the first chap was only an intro XD Ugh...school...stress...depression :facehoof: I feel dead

55598 Aren't we all a little dead? :moustache:

Good luck with your next chapter. :twilightsmile:

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Whaddya mean? Grammar mistakes? Or some of my logic?

If the latter, then I'll explain a bit.

Pinkie Pie comes from Solitude, because as the name suggests, "Solitude." She was Pinkamena Diane Pie, remember? Untill a Rainbow Dash led her to Whiterun with a Sonic Rainboom. And Pinkie Pie got a job as a guard XD As you can see from some of the quotes I used :)

And Pinkie Pie's shouts are mainly "Whirlwind Sprint" (you know Pinkie XD) and "Become Ethreal." She's that random.

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no it's that the story is choppy also anyone can learn shouts,it is implied that ulfric stormcloak is dovahkiin when he is not but instead trained for many years with the graybeards, there can be only one, also they are the best of friends a little shouting would not get in the way of that. you do an unusual job of expressing the character's thoughts.
for a bit of good news, you did a good job of placement

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That's just it. They want to PROVE that they are the Dovah-um...pony. Of course, they don't believe each other, because Luna (Ulfric Stormcloak xD) and her Shadowbolts (Stormcloaks) used the Thu-um against Celestia (um..the Imperial...leader...guy) and the Wonderbolts (Imperials).

PS. This also explains that Rainbow Dash wants to join the Imperials xD

SPOILERS: ((DON'T READ, FILLIES AND GENTLECOLTS!!!!!!!!!!!!))
dovah-shy is gonna win, anyway. because fluttershy is best dovah-shy xD

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dovahkey
key means horse in dragon
the is no word for pony

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