Fluttershy Finds An Inkling

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Fluttershy finds a tired humanoid in her back yard and takes the wounded creature to her home to help.

She has no idea why it has a gun, black mask like eyes, or such a fresh vibe, but she'd never leave a poor creature to suffer.

But she couldn't predict the attacking creatures that follow.

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Prism Shine

Prism Shine #1 · Nov 29th, 2015 · · ·

You're a kid, you're a squid.

Fictional Fanatic

Fictional Fanatic #2 · Nov 29th, 2015 · · ·

It's a good idea, but Flutterhy is acting a bit OOC according to me. I was expecting her to use the glare on the octoling when he called Emily a twerp and told her to come out. Cannon Fluttershy would have been mad that he was trying to hurt someone after pretending to be their friend.

Sage Probo

Sage Probo #3 · Nov 29th, 2015 · · ·

6679293 That's leaving aside many grammatical errors and typos.

Fictional Fanatic

Fictional Fanatic #4 · Nov 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6679408 Yes, but those I can always get around, after all, easiest way to get past that is to keep writing and have people help you develop, so I won't be taking points away for something like that... Unless it's completely unreadable.

Actually leaving now