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VelvetHeart


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M/M stuff? Me gusta. Not nearly enough! Props to your writer friend~

”I... oh no! I... I forgot to take notes! Mister Lore? Mister Stormbreak? Could you... do it again?”
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Hah! that was funny and pretty nice too. Oh Twilight why do you always take everything so seriously.

I'm guessing their child is eitehr adopted or they got a surrogate with mixed sperm to make the actual father unknown. That or magic, whichever works.

I really hope this doesn't turn out to be an April Fools joke, you can't trust anything today.

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Slow clop! Ehm, I mean clap! Slow clap!

I don't usually read M/M clop

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But when i do its from VelvetHeart

Pretty decent, not my thing but as a story :pinkiehappy:

Next is Twilight participating in a birth huh :twilightoops:

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If anypony can get two stallions to give birth, I imagine she'd want to see it - and faint halfway through.

That said, they probably adopted. :trollestia:

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Celestia using a spell to link Twilight's mind to a mare giving birth, so that she can experience the pain first hoof comes to mind now. :twilightoops: :trollestia:

Then a wild night with Celestia and a few Applejack Daniels to make her forget about it.
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Don't you just love the community.

Oh my...
Very good M/M you have here.

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A few mouthfuls of Applejack'll clear those nasty memories right up!

Velvet once again I must thank you for the editing, it was a funny story I knew you would do something great.

nad that ending was cute and funny to say the least. :pinkiehappy:

Oh my. I giggled like a filly the whole time I wasn't dawww-ing. Twilight is so CUTE! :twilightsmile:

Can't really say I approve of showing a little filly something like that. :raritydespair:

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Frutineo's concept of that particular event did have a lot more hot, steamy stallionsex than originally imagined, but that makes it a far more entertaining read.

*cough* Typo in the chapter title, perhaps?

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Yaay!

I really enjoyed this side-story; I remember giggling at the original mention of the two stallions and was touched by how loving and cute this scene was. Well, until Lore started being demanding anyway, then it just got hawt. :pinkiehappy:

This story deserves more readers. Perhaps if you managed to find cover art for it? That's what usually grabs people's attention.

:heart: totally adored this one. Arousing, romantic, but really still quite amusing. Made this mare giggle. :pinkiehappy:

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Are you volunteering? :trixieshiftright:

That was a great read, and loved the ending. thumbs up for sure.:twilightsmile:

I'm crying from the laughter. Oh sweet Celestia that was a perfect ending.

I have to admit, I skipped the clop-part... as usual with your work. I'm here for the humour.... and I got lots of it!
Gosh this was FUNNY!
And the ending was the cherry on the bottom! Since endings are not on the top... this metaphor broke very quickly...
Btw, can I borrow those two? I need two named guards and they seem perfect

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I see no harm in passing the two guards around a bit - but perhaps you should ask Frutineo to be certain. Frutineo did write the original plotline, after all, even if very little of it remained after I was done editing.

874912 I will. They would only get a cameo, but it should be fun :rainbowlaugh:

What's a better way to teach foals sex-ed than watch two stallions fuck right in front of them.

i loled so hard at the end :twilightoops:
:rainbowlaugh: *props*:trollestia:

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For education in stallion same-sex relationships? What could possibly be better!
That said, Celestia kinda intended the whole thing to be romantic, not jump-eachother-tear-his-clothes-off erotic.

Well now, this was mighty charmin'.

“Maybe we should take a pee-”

You know, I just don't see how that could possibly have helped anything...

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A peek? Well, they might've known a bit more in regards what they were in for.

...of course, they eventually went completely off-script anyway.

Aww, that was cute

pfffft. gosh couldnt stop laughing through the story, had to wait a couple mins each time it hit a really funny part. specially when she asked if they could to it again cause she didnt take notes. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Warning, stallion-lovins. M/M, you know the thing.

It's a sequel to Twiestia fic, but this needs that warning?

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This one's not a sequel to any Twilestia fic. It's a fic Frutineo sent me to edit and post, which I altered with an extremely heavy hand until the point it barely looked like the original.

And yes, I added the warning because people tend to react more heftily to M/M than to F/F.

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Yes, I didn't mean sequel, that was the wrong word. The point of the comment is that people shouldn't react more to m/m than to f/f or even m/f.

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I completely agree. 'Shouldn't', however, is not 'don't'.

Aw, this was great!

This fic provides better sex education than many actual sex "education" programs, sadly.
Well done, though. That was quite amusing. :rainbowlaugh:

Oh good lord, call Foal Protection Services, this is a disaster!

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