Twilight was busy reading a book on Nightmare Moon and how she would soon make her escape. After reading, she decided the best place for research was the library. She was stop by three ponies. The middle one said, "Twilight we were just about to go to a party for Minuette. Wanna come?"
Twilight replied with, "Oh, sorry girls I have a lot of studying to do." Then she bolted and those ponies talked behind her back. She didn't care though, there wasn't enough time to care about them right now. She ran in the library right into Spike, her dragon assistant, and after saying that they don't have time for parties, she asks Spike to send a letter to Princess Celestia about Nightmare Moon. Celestia basically says 'Twilight that is just not possible, now go to Ponyville to look at preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration and make some friends. And Twilight is not happy about it.
As soon as Twilight gets in the town square she says hello to a pink mare. She replies with, "GGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSPPPPPP" and bolts away. Twilight ignores it and goes to check on food preparations. Location: Sweet Apple Acres. As she walks in an orange mare is kicking an apple tree, knocking the content out of said tree. Twilight goes and says, "Hello my name is Twilight Sparkle, and-" she was cut off by the sudden incredible shaking of a hoof.
"Well howdy do, Miss Twlight! Ah'm Applejack, here on the farm we sure like makin' new friends." Twilight then gets introduced to the Apple Family, and only a third of them were actually there, let that sink in for a while. Applejak's sister, Applebloom wants Twlight to stay for brunch which she does thanks to the most adorable face you've ever seen.
After having a full stomach, she gets rebounded into a pile of mud by Rainbow Dash. She laughs and then tries to fix it, making Twi's mane a poofy mess. She laughs again with Spike joining in. Twilight finds out that she's the weather manager who wants to be in the Wonderbolts, an elite flying team. She is also quite lazy, the clouds are still out but she takes them out in 10 seconds.
After some more speeches, they go to town hall to see the decorator which happens to be a white elegant unicorn. Spike immediately fell in love. After she was trying to find the right bow she saw how bad Twilight's mane was and she took her to her boutique. After trying to fit Twilight in what people are guessing is a dress, she was head over hooves once Twilight talked about how she was from Canterlot after she said she was getting emeralds they ran off.
After walking a couple blocks they were looking for virus busters, or in other words, me and Sonia.
"So these are the humans I've heard about. Well I am Twiligth Sparkle and please don't shake my hoof so much that it moves on it's own, crash into me or have me wear clothes." I thought and said, "Looks like somepony's been across town. I'm assuming by your description you've met Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity? I apologize."
"It's nothing really but I've never seen a human before." Twilight sheepishly said. Sonia decided to introduce the two of us. "Well, I'm Sonia Strumm and this is Geo Stelar, kind of heroes, but he's really modest and doesn't like being the center of attention. "I can definitely agree with that. Nice to meet you, you're the first 'people' here that seem to be relatively normal." The two of us reply with an 'uh thanks?' and Twilight said her goodbyes and she left to see who was doing the music. She ran into Fluttershy who was shy about what was happening and just continued to the tree library where she saw every pony including our party thrower Pinkie Pie. She goes into the bedroom and finds me. I tell her I'm living here as well, and she tells me about how serious this close event is. "Nightmare Moon could be released anytime now!" we said in complete unison. So everypony in town goes to the town hall and we see the princess missing and Nightmare Moon in her place. Who didn't see that coming?
Interesting story. If this was a game, there would be a bit more of boss battles. No complaints though. Great job.
Sage Brony first I want to say thanks, I am only a teenager trying my best, and two don't you worry there will be boss battles virtual cookies to any pony to get which ponies become targets of the FMians! I'll give you one, Harp is going to be a fake
Rule 1 of fanfic: Don't retell events of the source material. Having Twilight meet the humans is not enough of a difference to warrant this chapter, especially since it's a case of "oh hi how are you... Ok see you later". There's zero conflict and zero purpose. Stack that on top of the pseudo-conflict and unintelligible purpose of your prologue and you're 0-2 for giving this story any real meaning.
Also, I know I'm still being harsh but that's because I'm conveying information, rather then trying to teach much of anything. I'll be more then happy to walk you through things if you simply ask... at some point in time anyway, I'm probably going to be completely swamped tomorrow with life >.>
Actually, thought this is small, she actually said something about getting rubies, and questioned what she was thinking on using emeralds for Twilight.