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was born, which was cool, then stuff got weird

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Found on the streets by a ancient washed up champion, no parents, no home. inspired scootaloo now aims for the covented Equestria Boxing Chamionship title, all 107 pounds of her.(Punch-out and MLP crossover)


3/23/14 I officially Dedicate this fic to the memory of Button mash

R.I.P 2012-2014 -HWB

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 97 )

A Punch Out Crossover? Well you've got impressed, though you do need an editor.

You gonna make Rainbow Dash crack jokes like Doc Louis about chocolate? :rainbowlaugh:

Think you forgot the Scoots tag.

Oh wow, that caught us off guard.:rainbowderp: We could of sworn that was Granny Smith who came to the rescue, but this works awesomely well to.:pinkiehappy:
Good start to an intriguing story. Please continue.

3994060 ptffft you know it whats your favorite flower? mines chocolate

3994070 And the Rainbow Dash tag. Their roles are obvious. I feel sorry for the poor sap that gets stuck in the role of Glass Joe, and dread the one that gets Aran Ryan (how that guy passed his sanity test is beyond me).

3994075 Don't forget Doc's words of wisdom. Sometimes he can really come through in a punch.

3994090 don't worry i've got most of your fav boxers from the og game, as well as some new ones. the only difficulty i find is their names, their abilites and who will mike tyson/mr. dream will be?

well yeah? i mean he invented the star punch after all.

3994060 as for the editior i really tried on my spelling this time around, but i seem to not be able to hone in my grammer skills, i really hope it's not that bad

3994090 well the mane six will be fighters eventually (i thought that tag covered rainbow dash), as well as some i didn't tag, like the pony i have lined up to be king hippo

This should be interesting. The Sonicrainpunch sounds like a good stand in for the Star Punch. :eeyup:

You should've expanded on the fight with Rainbow Dash. I would've wanted to see her get mad like Doc Louis. "Nooooooooooo! Now you done it! You won't like Doc when he's angry! *Rips off red shirt to reveal a lepoard pattern shirt underneath*" (That right there is pure gold.) :rainbowlaugh:

Hit the showers Fluttershy!

4031168 omg i completly forgot about that, i smell a bonus chapter

We think this is a pretty cool story you got going on here Heavy. Brings us back to the "Rocky" movies that's for sure.:pinkiehappy:
Keep doing what your doing.

Luigi as the refree? Genius. :rainbowlaugh:

Oh Vinyl Scratch, may I borrow your earpiece? This is Vinyl Scratch. Rainbows make me cry. Over.

4046966 yea i put that in their cuz i didnt feel like alot of ppt got the joke that mario was the last ref.
glad you liked it:pinkiehappy:

King Mac?! Genius! :rainbowlaugh:

Nice hussle tons of fun, next time eat a salad!

4059687 that is a simply amazing list

thank you so much make me almost regret the ponys i already choosen

almost.

also dan? thats a awsome idea!

to bad if i do it would be almost stealing

almost.

4059687 I was thinking Rarity could be Don Flamenco, similar to how Don wears a toupee (or a false set of hair) Rarity wears false eyelashes. And I can imagine her being ticked if they got knocked off during a fight. And don't say she doesn't know how to fight, this video begs to differ.

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You can use them if you want. Here some more ORIGINAL boxer ideas.
Mane-iac as a maniacal boxer I can already see the hair puns see a maniac on the floor.
Screwball as weird boxer and Discord as her coach.
Garble as a dragon boxer.
Cheese Sandwich as a boxer just imagine Weird Al as a boxer.
And here some punch-out music videos:
The first song fits with this fic.

This can be use as scootaloo training song:

Do you proofread your stories before you post? This chapter alone is riddled with so many errors that it almost makes it hard to read.

Don't get me wrong, I like the concept, but it reminds me less of Punch-Out and more of Karate Kid.

4064129 i proof read a couple times before i release the chapter, then a couple more as the chapter ages

sorry im trying my best here, to this day i have no idea how i passed high school.

4064129 i also implore you to read my later chapters, where i figured out how to use google doc, so i least my spelling improves

4064254 I definitely will. If you don't mind, I'm downloading the chapters and editing them in LibreOffice and will make a PDF when it's done.

4064614 It's an Adobe Acrobat document.

Scootaloo looked on with confusion as a small group of muscular Stallions ran by. They wore simple outfits that consisted of various shades of jeans, Hats and matching red vests that covered their shirtless muscular chests.

Before Scootaloo could even ask what just happened a larger and stranger group of stallions ran by, These stallions were dressed in matching baseball uniforms and wore dark colored warpaint on their faces, and in their hands they carried baseball bats that they waved threateningly as they pursued the previous group.

Waariiorrrs....come out to plaayaaay.....

4064632 YES FINALY SOMEONE SAID SOMTHING ABOUT IT

:ajsmug: have a cookie

*gives cookie

4064631 not 100% on what that is but whatever i guess i don't mind.

4064651

Surely you must recognize this icon:
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I'm only doing it because when you download stories off the site, the formatting gets all screwed up.

Pinkie Pie probably would've been a good choice for Disco Kid considering she dances around so much. She could possibly be Piston Honda/Hondo because of her speed. But unless she's Pinkamina I doubt she could be Aran Ryan. :eeyup:

As for Tree Hugger, go back to Calgary, you cowardly Canieghdian!

4064855 yeah its really hard to think of, i just have to come up with somthing

4064929 Well, perhaps she could be the bonus/dream fighter from Punch Out Wii. Donkey Kong, who appears randomly during "Mac's Last Stand" to challenge you, and regardles of whether or not you win he is unlocked in exhibition mode.

Well, assuming that this is going by punch out rules ( which is to say, no rules) then I'll let this slide; but just so we're aware, the two things the mauler did are illegal and would get one either punished via point loss or disqualified, and while I'm not a hundred percent on this, I'm fairly certain that disqualification would occur. And on a side note; the punch out boxers never took off their gloves, nor did anything to you while you were down. So.... Yeah. Just something to keep in mind.

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4064929
You could use some G1 villains for bonus matches like these characters.:
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Tirek Grogar
And you can use Ahuizotl too.

Very interesting choice for Derpy as Piston Hondo. Fun Fact: In the NES version he was called Piston Honda and he was the Minor Circut champion. It's unknown why Nintendo changed his last name. Rumor has it that it was to avoid a lawsuit with Honda, the Japanese car maker.

Ditizi Hondo, you have dishonered this entire unit! Down and give me twenty!

4084034 it was this videos fault

Warning overwatching derpy hooves singing in japanese will cause death

by overcuteness

Twilight as Great Tiger is interesting. And I see you took my suggestion about making Rarity Don Flamenco! Also, it looks like Twilight killed and skinned Spike!

H-hey look Great Twilight, you shapeshifted into a dead guy!

Great chapter, but I cringed a bit with the translations this time, since I am spanish and some of them didn't make any sense, so here's how they should be (at least how I think they should be):

¡Gracias gracias, mi adorado público!

thank you! thank you! my adoring crowd

¡Detente! ¿Nunca os dijo vuestra madre que nunca hay que decir el peso de una dama?"

STOP! didnt your mother teach you never reveal a ladies weight!?

¡Hoy lucho por mi amor, Tom!”

Today i fight for my love! Tom!

¡Oh! ¡Ahora.Vas.A.Pagar!

OH, IT, IS, ON!

¡Venga, venga!

COME ON, COME ON

”gracias mi amor”

Thank you my love.

¿Pero que...?

What the?

Keep in mind that some of the more colloquial expressions like "it is on" don't have literal translations (this one in particular doesn't have anything nearly remote to it in spanish), and doing so will result in... well, odd phrases and nonsensical expressions :pinkiesick:. It's better to find other colloquial expressions in that language that try to send the same meaning, and that's what I did in that case for example.
Just my two cents, if you want to use this to improve the chapter then awesome, if not well I'll still keep reading the story, this was just to fix those phrases.
Again, keep up with the story! :twilightsmile:

EDIT: Now that I saw the title of the chapter again maybe, and just "maybe", you can think about putting "Doña Rareza" instead of "Don Rareza", given that Don is for guys and Doña for ladies. Sorry for the long comment :twilightsheepish:

You did a great job with Rarity in this title bout. :rainbowlaugh:

What's the matter Rarity? Hair get in your eyes?!

4107314 thank you
i value you imput very much

when a put a diffrent language in my fic i go to google, type in somthing, and use that translation
i hope i didnt offend you or anything, and yes because you where nice enough to give me the correct translations, i willl fix them

4107340 Glad to be of help! And you didn't offend with them in any way, don't worry!
I mean I used to do the same when I started to write in english but I quickly found that most of it was pretty much unreadable (romance languages don't mix well with languages from other cultural regions I'm afraid :rainbowlaugh:). Luckily I'm a very avid reader so I started to read more and more in english 'till I learned from those mistakes. I think that now I'm a little better writting in english at least :twilightblush:.
Since spanish isn't a language needed to international sites like this one I'm glad to help those that allow me to do so when it comes to spanish :eeyup:
Again thanks for making this story, keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

So Discord is for real, and the title belt houses the Elements of Harmony? By that logic I think it's safe to assume that Discord is either the World Circut Champion (Mr. Sandman) or the mystery fighter (Mike Tyson/Mr. Dream for the NES, Nick Bruiser for the SNES (technically the SNES version has a whole special circut, but Nick Bruiser's the undefeated champion), Donkey Kong for the Wii).

And of course, Screwball was the perfect fit for Aran Ryan. Though once again it begs the question of how this fighter pases a sanity test. Oh well, Aran Ryan's craziness is why he's the best fighter. He feels so fleshed out.

There you go Screwy Ryan. That'll slow you down, ya...twitchy hooligan!

4116054 aran ryan was my favorite charicter from the wii version
did you know his charicter construction is obssessed with the number 7?
you always start with 7 hearts
his weight is 160 1+6+0=7
when stunned you can only punch him 7 times
the number of repeated letters in his name adds up to 7 3 As+2 Rs+2 Ns=7
when KO'ed he will only get up at 7 unless KO'ed for good
he has only 7 teeth 4up 3down
hes won 28 fights, 28 is a multiple of 7
theres a few more but thats all i remember
also, glad you liked it

4116112 Yup. He's a lot easier compared to when you fight him in Super Punch Out. In that version you can really only damage him with super punches, and then he'll try to grab you and regain health. And the timing is very strict.

4116139 ah the "Shamrock squeeze"

i remember, to be honest i didn't really like super punch out
i prefered the nes version, it was more colorful and just looked better (style wise not graphics wise) and it was only up until about a week before i started this fic i finally played the wii version

god that games awsome, so much nostalgia service in one pretty colorful package.

Technically, wouldn't it be a plain old KO, as Screwy hadn't been knocked down by Loo at all? Just my thoughts.

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