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Lady Umbra


I love writing both Original Fanfictions and Movie Adaptations, I also love all forms of feedback

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A boy steals a pair of Snow Leopard claws at Comic-Con and is transported to Equestria as a infant with no memory of his former self, Luna finds and raises him as her own and teaches him the many arts of Kung-Fu, only for him to betray her when he is denied what was rightfully his. Stopped by Celestia he is sent to Tartarus, a inescapable prison designed to hold the martial artist.

20 years later Luna has trained five of the greatest warriors Equestria has ever seen the Furious 5, each trained in their own style of Kung-Fu. Upon receiving a Frightening Vision Celestia beleives that it is time to find and train The Celestial Warrior, During the Selection a Unicorn Girl falls in front of Celestia

Luna having no faith in the girl begins to train her vigorously in hopes she quits so that the real Warrior may be choosen

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 73 )

Are you going to do all three movies, plus Legends of Awesomeness?

Awwwhh yiss. You should have made tai lung be king sombra it would be more funny.

You had me with the cover, you kept me with Momma Moon.

I look forward to reading this.

I wonder who's the panda

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This is joke, yes? Pretty sure it is spelled out by the story description.

Well, this is an oddly creepy coincidence. I literally watched the movie just last night before bed, then i find THIS in my feed?

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Gibbs' Rule 39: There is no such thing as a coincidence

Let me know if you need an OC.

KO awesome chapter, Celestia and Luna will have to prepare their warriors to find the Chosen One for the Celestial Scroll and Twilight will be sure of who that is. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

Impressive adaptation but I wonder if you'll alter the story or keep it in line with the movie. I'm also interested to seeing how this world works compared to the original one.

Alright. Let's run down the list:

Rainbow Dash=Tigress
Rarity=Crane
Pinkie Pie=Monkey
Fluttershy=Viper
Applejack=Mantis
Twilight=Po

I got that right?

KO awesome chapter, well Twilight got to see the Kung Fu show but had to deal with some dragon bullies and Master Celestia has chosen her to be the Celestial Warrior which is going to be a crazy day for her. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

Whatever happened to the human

I honestly think Sunset should haven't taken the place of Tai Lung.

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3 out of 6
Rainbow Dash=Tigress 👍
Rarity=Monkey
Pinkie Pie=Viper
Fluttershy=Crane
Applejack=Mantis👍
Twilight=Po👍

Was anyone else half expecting it to be Spike in a twist of irony?

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Logic: Applejack/Tigress; orphan, tough, strong, hits really hard, has a hard time asking others for help.

Dash/Mantis: hotheaded, fast, proud of it and not afraid to show it.

Dash/Tigress: knows midair combat techniques.

Applejack/Mantis: ?

Where's your logic?

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We were basing Applejack and Mantis more off of strength; Mantis managed to hold a rope bridge with all of his friends and Tai Lung on it, and even whip the bridge to disorient Tai Lung, showing that despite his size, he's got some strength.

In the same vein, Applejack is often considered the strongest of the Mane Six, only behind Dash, and she and Dash are relied on the most for feats of combat or physical prowess.

Plus, when she was affected by Poison Joke in 'Bridle Gossip,' she was shrunk down to about Mantis' size. Personally, I thought casting her as the shortest one was a cute call-back to Apple-tini.

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Ok. So, why is Rarity Monkey and Pinkie Pie Viper. It seems like it should be the other way around.

Pinkie/Monkey: energy, love pranks, defy logic.

Rairty/Viper: graceful, enjoy the finer things in life.

Fluttershy being Crane makes sense and not just because they can both fly. I could honestly see Fluttershy doing Crane's training regimen from Secrets of the Furious Five.

Fun Fact: Twilight voiced Young Tigress.

Spoiler it or pm or keep it a secret if you want but, out of curiosity, are you keeping Po's massive crush on Tigress for this story?

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Wish I could say for sure, but Screwball666 is the main idea guy. I'm just making sure his story looks good. :twilightsheepish:

Personally though, while Pinkie does make sense as Monkey, being energetic and loving pranks, I also found that since Viper was the nicer one to Po, it also made sense for Pinkie to be the nicest and more welcoming one to Twilight, as the minute they met in canon, Pinkie started setting up a welcome party for Twilight.

Monkey, on the other hand, was a little more reserved in the movie, and didn't get to show off his crazy side as much.

Though, I still do appreciate your feedback. Nice bit of trivia too; I did not know that Tigress and Twilight shared a voice actress. That's neat.

And as for Po and Tigress' ship, I'm not a romance guy, so I'll likely downplay their crush. There might still be plenty of moments that can ship them, but unless Screwball666 wants to push the romance, I'll likely try to focus on the action and characters.

Thanks again for the feedback.

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They don't btw. Tara only voiced Young Tigress in SOTFF and possibly that flashback while talking about Tai Lung. She really only grunted a couple times in that so hard to tell. Lara Croft voices Tigress.

KO awesome chapter, Twilight’s first day of training went painfully well and some good advice from Master Celestia has given her the courage to keep trying to make a warrior out of herself. Although, I think she will have to hurry up her training when an old and dangerous Kung Fu Master is coming with a vengeance. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

Is Luna referring to Sunset Shimmer, she is the only other unicorn student of Celestia I can think of

Tempest Shadow, real name Fizzlepop Berrytwist

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Ding ding ding we have a Weiner
Yes Tempest Shadow is exactly the pony I was referring to

This is straight up awesome. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

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Oh yeah, I forgot about her

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Or you could be talking about Fizzlepop Berrytwist.

I don't know if anyone else has suggested this but discord should replace Kai and sunset should replace shen

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Now see that was my first idea. But then me and my proofreader thought that Tirek would make a better Kai

That would be good but how are you gonna make an interesting backstory for him and celestia and where will discord come in cause he needs to be there at some point

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KO awesome chapter, Celestia has passed away without any regrets of her life and enjoyed the time she had with her sister. Now Luna must carry on as the new master of the Palace and hope to train Twilight that her big sister believes in! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

KO awesome chapter, now Luna has seen Twilight is truly capable of with the right setting and motivation as she will train the unicorn to become a Kung Fu master while the five are off to fight Tai Lung. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

I wonder what happened to Tirek.

This is Kung Fu Panda in Mlp version

KO awesome chapter, damn Rainbow Dash and the Five could not beat Tai Lung as he has gotten too strong for them to handle and now it is up to Twilight to save the day though there may be a problem with what she discovered in the scroll. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

KO awesome chapter, Luna tried to make things right with her adopted son with both her words and fists but he is too strong for her and now Twilight has come to the rescue to fulfill her destiny!
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

KO awesome final chapter, the ending was great and Twilight showed she is a fighting machine during the battle and she even managed to save Tai Lung from the mysterious evil man who was controlling him through his anger. Now the village is at peace once again!
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

Who was the mysterious figure that convince Tai Lung to take the scroll?

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