Star Swirl "The Bearded One", known as the King of Equestria, passed away. But before dying, he communicated that he will leave his kingdom to the strongest pirate in the world.
Thus, hundreds of pirates from around the world will compete to reach Equestria, among whom is a young rookie pirate named...
Twilight Sparkle, "The Starry Crown"
The story not bad but it needs some work
Yet, you really need to work on your he/she because it just confused who you talking about
Who made the cover art?
I need ideas for the characters.
I mean, except for the Twilight crew, imagine a character from One Piece and compare it to one from MLP.
Give me some idea, starting with Buggy...
Why does the bunny in the cover picture make me the most uneasy of all of them?
And why do I feel that Joe Pesci is the best person to voice him.
Funny How?
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“A spider’s got to spider.” -Scarheart
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Actually, the Twilight's crew will not be the one in the drawing, and they will appear little by little ... you will see :)
Who will be Sunset?
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Ace
Wealth. Fame. Power.
Starswirl the Bearded, King of Equestria, attained this and everything else the world had to offer, and his dying words drove countless souls to the seas.
“You want my treasure? You can have it! I left everything I gathered together in one place. Now you just have to find it!”
These words lured ponies to the... wait, is it called the Grand Line in this world?
Anyway, lured ponies to the (insert Grand Line counterpart here) in pursuit of dreams greater than they’d ever dared to imagine.
This is the time known as the Great Pirate Era!
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Perfect...
PERFECT!!!!!!!
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Agreed, that being said ep1 doesn’t have much in way of world context.
Your story is not bad though this is not a form of storytelling that I prefer. You should also work on editing before posting as there are some confusing grammatical errors or odd phrasing from both these chapters. You do have some unique casting as well as some interesting changes (like the Magic-Magic Fruit or the shoes, for example).
Btw, since you're asking for character casting ideas in the comments, I think Trixie would make for an excellent Buggy. Both tend to be rivals to the main character and they often end up helping them. Cabaji could be Lightning Dust. Mohji could be the Chimera from the swamp (a duel role that would also replace Ritchie).
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Your ideas don't seem bad. I like them.
Keep it up.
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I can't really come up with more without knowing which Mane Six is playing what part
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Twilight - Luffy
Rainbow - Zoro
Fluttershy - Nami
Pinkie - Usopp
Applejack - Sanji
Spike - Chopper
Rarity - Robin
Bulk Biceps - Franky
DJ Pon-3 - Brook
(I still have no choice) - Jinbei
What are the nicknames of the rest of the crew?
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Rainbow Dash: "The Pirate Hunter".
Fluttershy: "The Butterfly Thief".
Pinkie Pie: "Party Queen".
Applejack: "Cowgirl of the Seas".
Spike: "Gem Lovers (pet)".
Rarity: "Diamond Devil".
Bulk Biceps: "The Metal Man".
Vinyl Scratch: "DJ Pon-3".
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huh I would of thought Brook would be portrayed by fiddlesticks
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Who?
you accidently used luffy's and zoro names the first time you mentioned twilight and rainbow
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cdn-img.fimfiction.net/story/7vdu-1660244398-520707-small
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It's done, corrected.
By the way, if you feel like it, you can help me improve the story...
What do you think?
YOU! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE
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For that, I need candidates for the roles of Buggy, Cabaji and Mohji.
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Are you trying to get every character in OP a pony counterpart? Could pick random OC's for the one off characters.
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For Buggy, it has to be a character who had a rivalry with Princess Cadence (who will be the one who plays Shanks in this story)
For Cabaji, someone who has a rivalry with Rainbow Dash
For Mohji, it can be an OC, if you feel like giving me one.
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It's been nearly two years. Will this actually get an update if you receive characters to implement?
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Yes
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How bout Sombra for Buggy? Lightning Dust for Cabaji. Make up an OC for Mohji. Any random name. "Daffodil" or something.
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I like it.
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Please make it happen. I'd love to see this crossover.