Twilight recives a letter telling her that there will be no new adventures this week due to events concerning a pet shop
she gets angry.
Then she goes to Rainbow Dash, who also gets angry.
Then Rainbow gets Derpy angry,...Well sort of.
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heavy weapons brony
was born, which was cool, then stuff got weird
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Oh, you are a genius. That bit about "discriminating against different ponies" killed me.
We will always love you, Derpy!
I love this. So hard.
Besides a few places where some things were capitalized where they shouldn't have been, this is awesomely done.
DERY FOR LIFE!!#! YAY DIFFERENT IS AWESOME!
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Thank you all for the feedback, it all really means alot
4218948 Welcome
HAIL TO THE KING!
HAVE A MUSTACHE!
4224835 thanks!
have a cookie sandvich.
Pffffffffffffffffffffffffffff.
Seriously though, you need to find an editor. The grammar--or should I say--lack of grammar prevented me from enjoying this story to the full extent.
Derp Nukem is best pony ever. PERIOD!
We enjoyed this story more so than Doom Mates. Although we think a moment of silence should be observed for that poor SOB of a frog in the beginning.
As usual excellent job Heavy.
4333895 don't worry that frog may of may not have gained super magical powers from twilights experiments
and may or may not be in the series im planning
anyway when the next ernest in equestria update?
not that i've thought about it until now
if you liked this, you should try my fic "permission to freak out" its a sequel to "Lost in the heat of battle"
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For my sister and I college has been getting in the way. However, school's winding down so hopefully we should be cranking chapters out more frequently in the near future.
If you are interested, you could read our other story "the Inn of the Midnight Pony."
4334989 i would be happy to give it a shot
and as always
thanks for the feedback
-HWB
PS if i can wait for the last chapter of "university days" i can wait for another chapter of yours
I like 'dis.
Now do one for PAINIS CUPCAKE