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heavy weapons brony


was born, which was cool, then stuff got weird

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This story is a sequel to Permission to FREAK OUT!? (sequel to Lost, on the heat of battle. a TF2 and MLP crossover.)


(the third and final installment in the lost in the heat of battle series)
(to have read the prequels is not necessary to enjoy this one, although I would recommend it, or put this story in your read later file until I make a blog summing up the key points in there stories, i'll but in the descript when the blog is up,) the reason I say this story is a bit different then my last ones, someone who doesn't enjoy my previous installments may enjoy this one
Twelve long years have passed since the great battle for ponyville ended and Soldier was given the biggest responsibility of his life.

Fatherhood

now twelve years have gone by and just before First-class enters his teenage years.

They get legal documents from Pinkie Pie demanding her son back, Now First-class must enter a world he was born for, but not raised for,...after all you know what they say.
the Apple does not fall far from the Tree.

then spooky stuff claims the adults of Ponyville.
and with the aid of the other teens of Ponyville it will be up to First-class to save his new home!

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 27 )

They get legal documents from Pinkie Pie demanding her son back,

First she rapes him, then dumps her bastard child on him, NOW she wants their freak-offspring back? Pinkie, go find a Cactus, and sit on it.

Alright! The third part of one of my favorite stories! :rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::yay:

Can't wait for Soldier to come visit!

I like this chapter, i can't wait to see the second one. Good work bro

I just realized that First-class grew up to be twelve and it only took a month in Equestria for that to happen... So all I want to know is, if twelve years are one month in Equestria then how long was it on Earth while Pinkie was pregnant?:unsuresweetie: Because as far as I know, it takes about eleven months for a horse to finally give birth to a foal. So did 132 years pass on Earth or something? :twilightoops:

I hope this gets explained. :pinkiehappy:

Don't think I'm being mean or anything. I just thought about this and wanted to know what was going on.

Other than that, I love this story so far. Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

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That's what I thought. :unsuresweetie:

But! It's sorta a silly story and I'm not a smart-ass who goes around telling people how to write. I like to have fun. :pinkiehappy:

I was just pointing it out so a meany wouldn't do it with a different choice of words. :trollestia::yay:

Yes! Dance Dance like no one's shooting at us!

I LOVE THE CONGA! And this new chapter keep it up bro!

I-I'm sorry...:fluttercry: I was ju-just :raritydespair: Trying to help you out... :raritycry:

So we get to choose who First is shipped with?......................................... Where do I begin!? :pinkiecrazy:
I can think of a tone of fillies that would like him! But, I think Scootaloo would like him a lot. She seems to love Rainbow Dash for being fast and doing tricks, so I'd bet a little rocket jumping will make her fall for him.

4989058 i guess keen minds really do think alike.

Oh,look, someone's seen one of my good tf2 days...

I like this, but if you want, I may edit some of your stories if you want. :ajsmug:

Also, I ship 'em with Scoots, because no reason why.

Eh, mate, I'm trying to rush you or anything, but is there going to be an update soon? I really love this story. :pinkiehappy:

6181169 sorry. no updates to be expected. read my blog im really trying to get my life togeather. but dont worry the minute i get internet youll see more. alongbwith my other stories

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Oh, sorry. I'm not much a a blog reader, so that's why I missed it. Take your time. :yay:

Need a dispenser here!

I'm confused, I could never figure this out, especially in this Chapter...Are the "ponies" ponies or like anthro? I mean, you use words like mares and then used words like hands and fingers...

Thanka! :pinkiehappy:

6689834 they are antro, hence the tag, but i see how you got confused.

I can't believe it's been over three years now and no hope for more:fluttercry:

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