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Pen Brush


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What did he ever do to deserve this? All he did was go around and explore the ancient city of Roam. He didn't think that someone was going to hit him with some random spell that turned him into, well, this! And the TARDIS isn't cooperating. Perfect. Just perfect. Maybe someone will believe that the little colt in front of them is actually a 1100 year old Time Lord and help him get back to normal.

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Comments ( 66 )

Dear god...
The description makes me really want to read. Colt Dr whooves?
My friend days the doctors next incarnation should be a little boy...
Wow

Tiber River?
Hey, I'm studying Rome!

3982197 no problemo.
It sounds genius, why lie?

Comment posted by Pen Brush deleted Feb 22nd, 2014

This is pretty great, keep up the good work!

Looks interesting even though it's about Dr Who

Cool story, I mean anything with the doctor involved already has my interest. But your writing style and structure is amazing as well. I really enjoyed reading the first chapter of your story and I look forward to more.:twilightsmile:

3990847 ...What's wrong with Doctor Who? :twilightangry2:

3990847 I agree.
What's wrong with it!?
Are you a whovian who just doesn't like doctor whooves?

3991846 I never watched it and never will (prepares for butthurt bronies just because I said I don't like it)

3991988
Oh well, everyone likes their own thing.

3991988 While I do agree with 3992242's statement, I find it hardly fair that you are judging it without ever giving it a chance. :ajbemused:

Wow. This is starting to sound like every brony argument I've ever been in.:facehoof:

3992256 I tried it, but it wasn't my thing (maybe my choice of words was a bit poor. I did check it out, but didn't like it. That's what I meant with I'll never watch it)

It's good to see that you finally got around to publishing this.

So far, it seems good. The Doctor stuck as a little colt? Now this'll be fun to read...

3992728
Figured I might as well publish it on my birthday, what better time to watch me never get a story featured?

3992738 Anytime is a good time to never see your story get featured!

3992756
:ajbemused: Thanks so much. I have stopped believeing I could get it anyway, the only stories that get in there are the unoriginal, effortless stories that people write in a day instead of work hard to make.

3992768 This reminds me of a card that was played during a game of CAH.

The feature box has won the National Equestrian Award for unfathomable stupidity.

3992951
:rainbowlaugh: Guess im lucky then.

3992388 Fair enough. I can respect that.

It's just that the way you worded the original statement made you seem like you had never seen it.

3992981 A guy once said that the feature box is like Billboard Top 50. It's based off the popularity of a story. Don't immediately hate a story just because it's popular.

But recently, all you have to do to get to the feature page is to write a story about a guy dressed up as an evil character and then send them to Equestria as that evil character. The concept was interesting at first, but now it's just stupid.

3993070
Yeah...Im not getting onto that stupid bandwagon.

3993096 Yep. Fuck that bandwagon.

3993189
Only bandwagon I have jumped on is the pokemon one

3993192 Don't know enough about Pokemon to care about that bandwagon.

Very nice! Can't wait. :twilightsmile:

This is very good...very much so. His sweet tooth shall be inflamed, and HE SHALL BE THE DEVOURER OF ALL THINGS TASTY!

Uhh...you saw nothing. No diabolical plans here, none at all! :twilightsheepish:

4044920
Trust me...he will get a lot of sweets.

4044924
He's a child. Of course he has a sweet tooth...he already gives me diabetes by looking at him....but I personally think he'll be confused about a lot. Like grammar.

4044938
...Do you speak English and another language? How the grammar works is different, and so he'll try to talk like how he would in his native language, not how an Equestrian would. At first, that is. He'll learn over time how Equestrian grammar works, and I know it's different than the grammar of a Time Lord's. Because Equestrian doesn't have FOURTEEN DIFFERENT TENSES.

4044947
I am only English. no abla englase, no hoba French...no habla...any other language. English is my only language, and I don't know what you mean by 14 different tenses. How does he speak in his own native language? It isn't actually told if Time lords have their own language, just a hint of it since the TARDIS translates everything but his own language.

Next chapter WHENS NEXT CHAPTER!?!??!


I MUST KNOW!

4044994
Dude, I just published this one...youll get it soon.

4044960
There's fourteen different Tenses in his native language, due to the fact they're Time Lords. the tenses tells WHEN the event occurred, ergo they have a lot of tenses due to them being a race of time travelers. So he knows his own language, right? And we're positive it's set up different, built all around time instead of other things, like English. So he's forced to UNLEARN his language a little, in order to learn a new one. No hablo ingles- Means I don't speak English in spanish. But the direct translation? No speak (First person form) English. So that's Spanish. They have forms for I, You, He/She/Formal Him/Her, We, plural you, they(He/She/Formal). Now, the language of the Time Lord is most likely based around Time, so the tenses to him are important. So he's used to using all fourteen, whereas he's forced to use only three. It's like someone making it so you cannot use the words: Him/Her, We/Us, Them/They. It's hard to NOT use those, you know?

4044998
Just so im not out of the loop...what are the 14 tenses?

4045010
...I couldn't tell you. IT's never directly stated what they are, but they're all dealing with time travel. Our three tenses are the past, present, and future tense. I have no clue what the other eleven could be...

4045015
Lovely. :ajbemused: thanks for telling me anyway.

4044997

okay, just my way of saying that I love this.

4045022
...I bet one would be while you're IN the Time Vortex, one is when you're in two places at once, one is when you're NOT in a time, one is when you're in both the future AND the past, and a few others. ...So yeah. It's most likely confusing.

4045022 during pinkies line, there was a typo a bit before the end.

4048401
Hard to tell with that whole thing.

Doesn't matter, probably misread. But you need an editor? I might be able to help.

4048550
How good are you at editing?

4048556 somewhat new, but I got all the mistakes and errors on another but one, but they ignored it.

4044960

no hoba French

:rainbowlaugh: That is nowhere near close to what it actually is in French.

D'aww :rainbowkiss:
Please update! :pinkiehappy:

4354679
This was the update for the week.

4354685 Your stories are like crack.
I need more. Like, now.

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