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When Twilight is testing out a new spell, Pinkie Pie disrupts it, causing a bright flash of light and the disappearance of Twilight and her friends. And soon Twilight and her friends find themselves in a forest seemingly devoid of ponies. How will they get home? How will they survive? How will they...wait, why do those does look so familiar?
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SAY WWWWWHHHHHAAAAATTTTT?!?!?!
No favorites for you...yet. Keep it up, man.
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I am a mare
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I saw the deer picture, and I had to make a story about it...maybe two with different reasons for being deer. It is nothing like Equestria Girls
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Then keep it up, woman. I never mean any disrespect, it's just how I normally refer to people (you know, unless they say otherwise).
You might also like this one :)
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holy crap...
LOL LEEEROOOYYY JEEENNNKINS!!
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Dr Science did that
ehh who? All I know it's from Warcraft..
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can you ask the person for permission to use it? I don't have a DA account
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the guy I put in the authors note. He wrote this chapter and helped me with it.
ooh kk. Sorry derp moment good story though please continue
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reply to people using the thing that looks like a voice box at the end of the comment --->
I am awaiting Chapter 1. Please, I am hooked.
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Yessssssss
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sssssssssss
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>>Pen Brush sigh.. If I must.
>>Pen Brush I faved this story and I'm gonna follow you!
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hover over the button that looks like a speech bubble, and click it, that way you can reply to anyone and others will know who you are speaking too
3176074 oohh that makes much more sense..
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there ya go!
3176180 hee hee thanks!!
Reads description.
"Hmm.."
My conclusion?
"Den everypony was a der de end."
I've got my eyes on this story. Looks interesting.
PINKIE, you dun gone screwed up
Pinkieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Couple of errors a proof-reading pass will pick up, but otherwise this looks interesting. More stories should have Pinkie using Twilight as a remote control.
i am intrigued.....
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO CHAPTER 1 PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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dear god...
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I will never stop
3200373 Thank god.
This is my dream. You have made my day, and therefore have earned yourself five moustaches.
RECIECVE IT NOW!
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I am thinking of calling it the deerverse, since every other great story or whatever has a ridiculous sounding name.
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I didn't publish it yet, that doesn't mean it is not done
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What do you think of the first chapter now?
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Magnificent
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Splendid.
Sexalent.
This is so cool! Though I did notice a few spelling errors here and there, and a couple of grammar issues, I can't wait for the next chapter!
There's exposition, and then there's forcing the story. However, it's Pinkie so she gets a free pass.
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its pinkie, and two crazy animals consisting of a bird and an otter
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wait what do you mean? I knew I might be forcing it...I shouldn't have put that part in...
I've got an alternate title for this fic:
Do(e)s and Don'ts
Or
Does and Don'ts
I love the theme of it all, the deers and such. though there are details that wouldn't get hurt by going over and checking them, just right?
Vocabulary or expressions, if you could develop, explore and expand on them? Is it just me?
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I know, I usually write stories in notebooks and then write it into a document as I edit along. This one I didn't do it with and you can clearly see the difference
3721796 When I first atempted writing, I was using note books, but it soon proved fruitless, doe to the fact that they would have been filling my home.
Then I realised, it takes way too much time, writing by hand, my hands just can't keep up with 'the speed of thought', typing get me a bit closer, though.
I'd need to read through several of your other stories, for a good comparison, right?
Maybe it's just me, but I kind of found the perspective refreshing, even if it may be in part, due to the beauty of the doe?
Then again, I'm looking forwwards to see, just where you're taking us, from where you just left off.
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You can look at a feather falls in time, Hasbro studies, or Equestrian Flame for the comparison. I need more notebooks for my others.