This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves: Birth of the Doctor
Part Two of the Lynchpin Quintet.
The Doctor, Applejack, and the Cutie Mark Crusaders land in Minos, the Nation of the Minotaur, three thousand years in Equestria's future. They find the country embroiled in a war that could threaten to destroy both factions.
One Minotaur has an idea. An idea all to familiar to the Doctor.
Does he have a right to interfere? Does he have the right to stop them if they go to their fate willingly?
And what does this mean that it happened almost the same way in three different Universes.
Proofread by Ephraim Blue
Cover Art by Sweetstrokes
Chapters (9)
Wow, the Doctor yells a lot.
SEQUEL!!
And, John freaking Lumic rises again.
To victory! (Or up votes ).
I don't know if I should be happy that this fic is out and there are Cybermen in it (One of my favorite enemies of the Doctor xD) Or worried about the Doctor, Applejack, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, I'm so hyped with this fic, I can't wait for the next chapter, and I truly hope the Master makes an appearance in one of the Lynchpin quintet fics, I'm fan boying here right now.
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Epic!
I am in desperate need of a new chapter.
4730941 Fav the fic and you'll get notified when that happens.
Yay!!!!!!!!
4730960 Sure thing.
Smell the plastic and hear the steel. The metal soldiers are here to fight. With a cut and scoop you can help against this blight. For the men of steel are here
And with that I say good job sir
More Doctor!
The description of the Cybermen reminds me of the Kraang from Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles.
Cool chapter! I can't wait for what comes next!
And this is the point where you will get complaints about not posting everyday because you don't have the next chapters edited.
And things will only go downhill from here...
I don't exactly know everything about Doctor Who, but wouldn't informed consent actually be a GOOD thing? That way the Cybermen don't just force people?
Cliffhangers!!!!!!!! My greatest weakness!!!!!!!
Shouldn't they be called Cybertaurs? Man is a bit weird in a world where they are a myth...
4741756 So sue me, I didn't go with the horse pun...
Or.. Minotaur.. Pun..
Did you like the fic?
4741873 Yes actually. I am interested to see where this ride is going.
Pretty cool! One error I caught though:
"Becoming" should be "be coming."
Wait, is Twilight immortal in this story? Or at least lives a very, very, long time?
The metal men are here...
I gigantic? Shouldn't it be A gigantic?
Shouldn't it be they?
It should be just your
Not trying to sound rude or anything, just trying to help you with these errors...
Anyway I'm pretty sure all the cybermen will later upgrade everyone no matter if they're told not to, that's just how cybermen are, and if they resist, well, then they will be deleted
TWIST!
So cool, can't wait for more!
Well, I wasn't expecting that, I hope she turns into a trusted ally, I can't wait for the next chapter man, keep it up :D
Stages a war to extinct a race that killed his son. That escalated quickly.
in this story, do the changelings have a hive mind?
also! the men of steel are here.
and one thing doesn't add up with these cybermen. they were always given a want to advance and upgrade. do these cybermen have that?
4752330 This will be important for this fic and the next.
No. The Changelings do NOT have a hive mind. There are individuals.
As for the Cybermen.... Keep reading...
Interesting story so far. Cannot wait for more
Cybertaur.
Why are they called Cybermen if they aren't men to begin with? Probably because there were no good alternate names.
Cyberchangelings
Cyberling
Cyberponies
Cyberdonkey
Cybercow
Cybergriffon
All okay, except there aren't any good ones for minotaurs.
Oh well.
Oh darn.
wow awesome update! Hope to see more soon!
One thought,
Dun Dun Dun!!!!!!!!
This is getting better and better
5 stars, and a great story. There, I rated and commented.
That was done quite well. Very Doctor and quite pony.
My first thought with the Ag47 name was of Hitman's Agent 47. Obviously whether or not that was something you'd considered, the reference would be lost on the ponies.
I do have a minor qualm about the strength of the windows in that tall building. I would have expected something reinforced, but apparently not; the CMC just got lucky in their ignorance of that I suppose.
4764612 Ah! But as Sweetie Belle stated, the Cybermen are hard!
Alright, sue me, minor plot hole.
This fic is so good, I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope the CMC don't get in trouble... Well... When they do get in trouble they always find a way to get out of it... Just like the Doctor
Man, ancient-Greek-mythological-creature John Lumic is crazy!
And wow, they started going to war really quickly.
And N'Zeera dies...
I'm not actually surprised tbh.
These kinds of characters ALWAYS die, 'specially in Doctor Who.
4776468 How did you like the Chapter?
4776486 Liked the first scene (Very cute), but the idea of cybermen experiencing physical pain seems weird to me.
And the last scene seems a bit rushed, I don't really know N'Zeera well enough to just accept that she'd be so selfless.
Too, too much in the chapter.
1. What is with the crusaders coincidences?
2. You made me tear up for a character I hardly knew.
You sir, must check out a blog post I will do in six months or so. . . cause you will be in it!
4777984 ... That was positive right?
And SIX MONTHS? Why that long?
4778034 Okay, yeah, that sounded too critical of me. Yes, it was positive.
As for the six months, in one of my blogs I did a top five (or six) authors and said that I would continue semiannually, (every six months). So if it was posted in June, the five months away, in July it would be six.
4778145 Oh
You flatter me sir.
Well this was a great chapter, just a question, why did N'zeera have to die? I was starting to like her, now I'm sad :(
And what's with the CMC's coincidenses? There's something dirty going on here and I don't like it
I think some kind of omnipotent being, time controlling alicorn or the master is keeping the CMC alive... all of those scare me. but hay! its Dr who-ish!
Wow, I can't wait for the final chapter!
Oh yes, oh yes, this was amazing, I don't even know what to say :D
I can't wait for the next chapter :)
4790709 BTW, just because I'm doing an audio drama doesn't mean you should stop the readings...