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The Prince of Darkness has been defeated, the entire world safe...
At the cost of six individuals, all because the only other savior refused to fight alongside them.
And now his best friend is gone.
How much will he risk to rewrite history...
To save her?
***EDIT: Wow, 100 likes! That's probably more than in all my other stories combined! Thanks to everyone for reading my semi-decent stories!***
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My feels. Oh god.
Da Feels
Heart piercing FEELS!
You have won a fave, an upvote AND my tears
I have never hit the like button on a story before, never in my life, until now! Congrats you earned the first like button ive ever pressed!!
Ohh..
The story was good, and so were your ideas and the plot, but it needed more emotional buildup and descriptive elements. It just read to quickly, and I hardly felt anything at all as I read it, though it most definitely has the potential to become very emotional.
Right in the feels...
So sad... Did Discord ever give Twilight her horn back? I also kinda wish that Discord was freed by Fluttershy's tears. (You know, true chaotic emotions? They released him the first time.)
3972518 I know, but the contest I'm entering has a 3k word limit, and as you can see, I used all but three words. Aside from that, I don't think I can portray emotions as well as I once thought (I've tried, but I guess sad fics aren't my forté), but I'll keep trying! And thanks for your frankness.
3973120 No. Twilight was a dirty earth pony for the rest of her life.
3973321 Lol. I'm not sure whether you're joking or not.
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Truth is, I didn't have enough words left to add in what happened to Twilight afterwards.
So speculate away. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
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3973335 Oki doki loki. When you've gotten your words back, could you make a sequel about what happens to the ponies afterwards? I think that would make a good story.
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3973358 Hmm... roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/excellent.gif
Maybe... But I have four unfinished stories and a ton of homework.
I think it's a good idea, though, so if I decide to do it, I'll try to have it done by end of March.
Nobody quote me on that. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/liarjack.gif
As soon as I read "Prince of Darkness," all I could see was Ozzy Osborne invading Equestria. That's nearly as awesome as a dream I had where I got to teach ponies a Heavy Metal song.
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Quite good.
I do have a question: we know Discord can be freed by, well, chaos. I mean, the CMCs fighting is what tipped him off in the first place.
Therefore, it holds to reason that with a bit of nudging, Discord could be freed while this Prince of Darkness guy stays trapped in stone.
Wink, wink.
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Smells like another story's coming soon... roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/liarjack.gif
3973391 Yayyy!! I'll be waiting. *mysterious tone*
So sad
.The story is sad (No Discord!)
Pretty good story, although I thought naming an antagonist "The Prince of Darkness" was a dead horse that is still being kicked. Overall though, it was a good short little story, and I enjoyed it. Thumb for you.
3977367 Yeah, I'll make sure to never use that name again
I guess I'll have to be creative next time around.
Feels, so many feels
3981076 I try... though I don't think I'm good at sad fics yet. You know what that means...
Expect more attempts at sad stories soon!
Well, maybe not 'yay', but you get the point!
The dam.... is..... cracking......
Ok, I admit it, I cried. I actually got a miniature headache when I tried to stop it. Beautiful.
3984590 Believe me, there were times when I was writing it where I almost started to cry, too. If the 3k word limit didn't exist for the contest I'm entering this fic into, I would have tried to make it a bit more heartfelt.
Glad you liked it, and thanks for the fave.
Dawww =)
Discord is a badass XD
3988961 Yep, he is. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/excellent.gif
I love this! I have always loved Discord and I love his desperation to save Fluttershy in this. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
As for the contest... if I don't win I hope you do, because out of all the entries I've read so far... I like this one best.
3990358 Thanks! A lot of people have been asking for a sequel/prequel/explanation of the events, so I've decided that after the contest finishes, I'll expand this story with an entire timeline, from when the ponies noticed the darkness to the first outcome to Discord's decision and perhaps further... who knows?
It would be the same thing I did for one of my other stories, The Lost Book of the Creator. I wrote a small one-shot, and a couple people wanted more, so I created an entire backstory and a basic outline/timeline. I'll probably do the same for this one.
And yeah, as soon as I finish and submit my second fic, I'll make sure to read yours! I'm sure it'll be a treat.
Oh, and of course, thanks for the fave and follow!
This deserves my praise, and my happyness
3994870 Why, thanks!
I worked really hard on it (at least, for the two days it took me to write it and the one day to edit it 
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Wow; that should be one of the elements. Of course I don`t see how the show would portrey sacrifice. Bravo; very well done. Liked and faved.
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Hmm...
That sounds like something I could include in a fic.
Glad I could give you inspiration.
This isn't bad. I do know the constraints of 3000 words and I like the pacing and the overall plot. Good work. 7/10.
This isn't bad. I do know the constraints of 3000 words and I like the pacing and the overall plot. Good work. 7/10.
4147692 Thanks! I'll try my best to improve my writing.
Right... in the feels....
seriously, this is a great piece. by showing Discord's desperation to save the one he truly cares about (Fluttershy), it made the emotional impact of his sacrifice that much more effective.
Bravo i say, bravo
5009206 OMG, I think you're the 150th like! Thanks for the fave, too!
5009214 You're most welcome!
It was very good and I enjoy reading it. It was both sad and uplifting at the same time.
Why is it dat discord is the one to die? Anyways... Amazing story. It was sad at the end but amazing use of dialogue a-a-and...
The feels man.. The feels..
5637313 Thanks! Dang, I can't believe people still keep finding this story! Not that I'm complaining.
5637419 You shouldn't need to complain.. It was one of the things I found when I was reading a different fluttercord story... The cover seemed to catch my mind a WHOLE LOT..
5637589 I edited a MS ClipArt picture to make it. That's about the extent of my visual art skills.
If I may ask, which fluttercord story was it? I may want to read it.