Mistletoe Kiss

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Someone's filled Fluttershy's house full of mistletoe, guess who? I know who, and you probably do too.

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DisneyFanatic23

DisneyFanatic23 #1 · Jan 24th, 2014 · 1 · ·

AWWWW! That's so sweet! That moment with Rainbow Dash kind of threw me off though. I thought you were going to take it in a different direction. Whatever, I think I've finally gotten used to slash pairings, but it still seemed kind of irrelevant to the story.

OfTheIronwilled

OfTheIronwilled #2 · Jan 24th, 2014 · 1 · ·

This was really cute and for the most part everyone was in character. A nice, pleasant feel to it and a writing style which I really like (plus I'm just a sucker for FlutterCord). The only thing that I didn't really like about it was the bit with Rainbow Dash. It wasn't really needed -- if you took out everything having to do with her in the story then it wouldn't have much of an impact, and it didn't add any conflict. Discord just asked a question and acted a little bit jealous... and that was it. It seemed a little... filler-y.

Other than that I really liked it and you did a great job. Like and favorite!

Alexandrite Ward

Alexandrite Ward #3 · Jan 24th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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You're both right, as I look on it, Rainbow Dash is out of place. I've removed her from the story and I think it flows better, let me know? :) And thank you for reading!

OfTheIronwilled